00:33:350 (2,1) - Couldn't catch the intention about simplifying only here, expressing all vocal looks better.
00:46:293 (3,1) - The 1 is more prominent but you made it an anti jump which didn't really emphasis such prominent sound, would suggest you buff it to something like this
01:16:051 (4,5,6,7) - Can give more intensity since 01:15:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3) - are all peak sounds, current feels kinda underwhelming.
01:19:801 (1,2,1,2) - same.