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02:29:509 (1,2,3) - i apologise for being nitpicky but this curve looks a bit too flat imo compared to other streams in this section, maybe something like 473,215 for (1) and 509,177 for (2). Again sorry for making a post over literally 2 notes lmaoo

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no problem haha done :3

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02:31:074 (14) - spacing to the next stream feels bigger than everything else in this section, maybe move this slider down a little?

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done.

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02:39:552 - the angle into this stream feels rlly awkward imo compared to the rest of this section, maybe ctrl+H or something similar for the beginning of this stream (although ik that makes it potentially hard to continue without big changes ;-; )

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i prob. just change the slider jumps and it should be fine after (leaving it open for now until i figured smth out) or change the beginning or the stream

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should be better now

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04:31:193 (3) - unsnapped slider

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fixed

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@nebuwua :madge:

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04:45:901 (4,5,6) - angle seems a bit sharp here so could round it out a little more

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should be better now i hope

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04:54:463 (9) - unsnapped slider

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Fixed

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@nebuwua :madge:

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06:19:991 - i think id be better to 1. mute most of the slide ends in this part and 2. fix some of the visual spacing and too tight blankets (e.g. 06:22:562 (1,2) - and 06:23:419 (1,2) - in comparison to most other blankets in this section)

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Will do all the mutings when i get the hitsounds, consider this as done and blankets are fixed now with next update

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06:44:562 - how come you follow the high pitched violin sounds here but not right after, 06:46:276 here , 07:26:562 or 07:39:419 ?

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because im stupid will change

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07:02:276 (1,2) - i think you could ctrl+j this pattern and move it up like this https://i.imgur.com/ftM5BwO.png so its a bit smoother to play, flows down to the next circles quite well too

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done :3

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07:51:419 - could add more green lines on the white ticks for a more gradual volume increase, feels like it jumps too much starting at 07:52:562 -

08:02:848 (1) - same here, also sounds like 70% is too loud for that last bit, maybe increase by 5% with each one?

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done :3

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08:35:886 - this part feels pretty underwhelming, i know you probably want a good contrast between this part and the two kiais next to it but buffing it a little wont do any harm

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yes and no. I did that because i looked at Plague from Winter and Of Petrichor from Blood9 because some parts sound similar to this and they both had it that small spaced, but this part is def. a bit small spacing wise, will change.

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will do it later tho since its a long part ;w;

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08:57:159 (1,2,1,2) - since spacing increases with pitch for these jumps i think it might be more fitting to give these two sets of 1-2s the same spacing?

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done

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09:02:068 - maybe nerf the spacing in this section so there isn't follow points between the notes. stuff like 09:08:886 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - seems a bit random when the guitar is going down in pitch and overall i don't think this part should be spaced larger than 09:23:341 -

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even tho i personally prefer the current ver since the guitar has continuous changes, i change it and on 09:08:886 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) changed the spacing to this 09:21:705 (1,2,3) - spacing, i agree this is a bit too big ;_;

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09:27:705 (5,6,1) - could have 2 repeats here on the white ticks, missing out on that loud tom with how it is rn

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i did that since the guitar is more present/louder than the toms

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09:47:886, 09:50:341 - the penultimate stream starts off on the vocal and ignores the kick and the last stream does the opposite. Maybe change for consistency? E.g. making 09:50:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) into a separate stream and then kicking off on 09:51:159 (13) - this vocal for the very last stream decel and then accel at the end as you have done. But this is subjective just my opinion :D

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will do

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done

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09:53:341 (19,20,21,22,1) - spacing here could be nerfed more and in return you could make 09:53:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - one of the more spaced streams in the map, feel like a decel doesn't really fit here since the intensity of the drums isn't going down and the bass is actually higher in pitch

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09:53:614 (1,5,9) - these have up and downs so i can prob change them so it changes the spacing inbetween from like higher to low back to higher and so on so every white tick has a change

(correct me if im wrong)

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sounds like one consistent pitch to me :p

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i changed it but added a bit since the guitar sounds in the bg are going high and down so it should be more emphasized

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