02:29:509 (1,2,3) - i apologise for being nitpicky but this curve looks a bit too flat imo compared to other streams in this section, maybe something like 473,215 for (1) and 509,177 for (2). Again sorry for making a post over literally 2 notes lmaoo
06:19:991 - i think id be better to 1. mute most of the slide ends in this part and 2. fix some of the visual spacing and too tight blankets (e.g. 06:22:562 (1,2) - and 06:23:419 (1,2) - in comparison to most other blankets in this section)
07:02:276 (1,2) - i think you could ctrl+j this pattern and move it up like this https://i.imgur.com/ftM5BwO.png so its a bit smoother to play, flows down to the next circles quite well too
07:51:419 - could add more green lines on the white ticks for a more gradual volume increase, feels like it jumps too much starting at 07:52:562 -
08:02:848 (1) - same here, also sounds like 70% is too loud for that last bit, maybe increase by 5% with each one?
09:02:068 - maybe nerf the spacing in this section so there isn't follow points between the notes. stuff like 09:08:886 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - seems a bit random when the guitar is going down in pitch and overall i don't think this part should be spaced larger than 09:23:341 -
even tho i personally prefer the current ver since the guitar has continuous changes, i change it and on 09:08:886 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) changed the spacing to this 09:21:705 (1,2,3) - spacing, i agree this is a bit too big ;_;
09:47:886, 09:50:341 - the penultimate stream starts off on the vocal and ignores the kick and the last stream does the opposite. Maybe change for consistency? E.g. making 09:50:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) into a separate stream and then kicking off on 09:51:159 (13) - this vocal for the very last stream decel and then accel at the end as you have done. But this is subjective just my opinion :D
09:53:341 (19,20,21,22,1) - spacing here could be nerfed more and in return you could make 09:53:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - one of the more spaced streams in the map, feel like a decel doesn't really fit here since the intensity of the drums isn't going down and the bass is actually higher in pitch
09:53:614 (1,5,9) - these have up and downs so i can prob change them so it changes the spacing inbetween from like higher to low back to higher and so on so every white tick has a change
(correct me if im wrong)