00:05:514 (1) - usually these types of sliders shouldn't be used, refer to this for more information https://youtu.be/ecolEJxnbOc?t=549
00:17:281 (1,2,3) - this oddly feels uncomfortable, try something like this https://gyazo.com/bd760ed360b8bddcb4570b6299f3498e
00:40:169 (1,2) - these sliders are too short to call for these crazy shapes, try something like this https://gyazo.com/59c244d0ce20fb2053f1a5957ad5f090
00:45:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - and similar, i suggest making this slightly apart to avoid confusion and misreading
01:06:031 (3,1) - and similar, too intense of a turn for how regular the sound is at this part