00:36:962 (4) - could instead place this 1/2 earlier to follow the vocals which would be more intuitive
00:46:337 (3) - could instead replace this slider with a circle on each end to represent the vocal pause and reduce the length of the chain
00:52:196 (7,1) - ctrl+h these sliders so that the first slider entry is less confusing since rn it may be confusing that the sliderend is closer to the previous slider than the head
01:04:618 (7) - could instead replace this with a 1/2 slider+circle as that would make 01:05:087 - active which provides much better impact imo
01:09:600 (1,2) - I tend to use the rhythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17709701/bebd ?
the current one feels a bit weird, cuz u want to emphasis 01:11:475 - but u miss the prominent one at 01:10:538 -, then it makes your layer variation kinda broken.
01:11:181 (4,5) - this rhytm choice is pretty unintuitive since it ignores the brass on 01:11:415 - but then follows it on 01:11:884 (5,6) -, so could instead use something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17654606/804e
01:13:993 (2,3,4) - adjust pattern slightly so that 2 and 4 arent overlapping to make it more linear