00:00:031 - I would suggest shortening the 1/2 patterns in this section at the start to create more contrast with the following sections. It feels kinda dense for an intro section atm. You could delete notes like 00:01:072 - 00:02:739 - 00:04:406 - and stuff to emphasize the drawn out sounds before.
00:25:551 (138,139,140,141,142) - This breaks quite the flow of the patterning since the patterns you have used seem to follow the melody with background instruments as compliment. Consider changing to oo oooo o / oo oo ooo instead of having double offbeat