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This beatmap wasn't updated since 3 March 2022 so it was graveyarded...
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Please fix at least these problems. I'm tired xD

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ty for all your feedback on this i very appreciate all your comment and i will try my best to fix and remap those point

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Thank you for your effort on fixing the map. There is still a few steps to make It playable.
I left some comments for big issues I found. I would be appreciated If you will take a look.

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01:18:485 (6) - It's a quintuplet and should end here

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01:12:754 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - There is no consistency in elements placing.
You can check your intro 1/2 part. It is pretty straight-forward. But here 1-2 just appear in random places. For player It's a big confusion because he/she don't know where next 1-2 are

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I think you have a wrong understanding. You need to start a stream here 00:55:563 (1)
Here the sample: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-akjI4bBkZopX5KhD1sO7EhGvouxadY_/view?usp=sharing

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00:55:226 (1,2,3,4,5) - There is no stream here

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00:49:159 - I think slider should end here

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00:49:917 (2,3) - I don't hear beats here. There is a triplet in 00:50:086 and very long stream you can make with reverse sliders.

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00:45:620 - The stream should start here.
This music part has 3 major beats: 00:44:777, 00:45:282, 00:45:620
00:45:451 - You can end the slider here and start stream from 00:45:620

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00:24:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here we have forward-back movements, but again music doesn't have any breaking part in rhythm. It's opposite. The music is quite calm

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Fixed

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Marked as resolved by StakhovDmitriy

00:44:420 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Where do you here the stream?

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Still not perfect, but at least not stream xD

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00:08:184 (7) - This one is redundant. There is no beat in the music here.

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Perfectly fixed

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00:21:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Again here you use sharp and wide angles in random order.

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Fixed

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00:20:824 (8,9) - The same problem with this

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Fixed

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00:20:319 (6,7) - This angle is too sharp comparing to previous pattern

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Fixed

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00:17:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This pattern is orthogonal, but next 00:18:296 (3,1,2,3) - is not so strict.

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I like how you fixed It.

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00:16:611 (8) - You use rounded slider only here in the whole map, what is the idea of having it?

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OK, looks better already, but I think you can make something more creative here.

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00:15:094 (2) - Idk It's intended or not, but this circle is not aligned with previous, but previous pattern was kinda geometric

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Ok, you have remapped this part, so this comment is invalid now.

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You started the map with good spacing. But here 00:05:656 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It becomes too close unexpectedly.

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Perfect space distance now. It's playing more smooth now

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00:15:957 (3) - Here you make the quintuplet right after the triple.
It's usually used in technical maps, but sometimes is using in anime maps.
Still I think this pattern is not a good idea here.

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00:15:769 (2,1) - Here is a triple

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Fixed

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00:10:796 (2) - This one is redundant. There is 1/2 rhythm

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Looks smooth now. GJ

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00:16:442 (6) - Stream is ending here

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LGTM

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00:40:732 (1) - You need to make spacing little bit bigger from this timepoint

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00:01:442 (1,2,3) - The timing looks like the technical in anime song (weird). Use 1/2 between sliders for more profit

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Still wrong. You have beats in wrong places (not according to the music).
00:01:631 - You loose the beat here. 00:02:136 (7) - There is no beat by music.
You need something like this
https://drive.google.com/file/d/13R7SdDeYh62j1FZP4IgRBC4vOXzK9pJl/view?usp=sharing

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I think the main problem: there is no consistency.
The patterns look random, also the chorus has too big diff spike in spacing.

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It's much better already.

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00:27:229 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make the slider duration from 1st white to second 2nd white line (1 beat) and distance between sliders is 1/2 (blue lines). Then It will accord the lyrics

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