Hoshikuzu Struck (Uncut Edition)

00:03:642 (3642|0) - ghost note, no piano here

00:04:188 (4188|3) - shouldn't be an LN, since this is the "left-hand" piano similar to 00:03:779 (3779|3,3915|1,4051|0) -

See: 00:08:551 (8551|3) - where it is similar pitch but is a rice

00:19:870 00:19:938 00:22:051 00:22:120 00:24:233 00:24:301 00:27:301 00:29:347 00:29:960 00:30:165 00:31:665 00:39:438 01:18:370 01:18:779 01:18:915 01:19:051 01:19:460 01:19:870 01:28:938 01:29:483 02:14:073 02:14:209 02:18:709 02:18:777 - missing notes; 00:30:370 - 00:30:608 1/8 mising notes; 00:46:188 - 00:47:824 add more notes; 02:11:279 - 02:28:597 unsnapped notes by 2 ms

00:20:415 the player is expecting a melody here because you were playing these sounds at 00:18:370 (18370|1,18506|2,18779|3) - , so I would suggest adding a note for the sound

Shouldn't 00:24:915 (24915|3) - be the same as 00:25:290 (25290|3,25324|1) - since they're the same ringing sound.

00:27:233 (27233|1,27301|0) - These notes should be doubles since they are louder than 00:26:960 (26960|2,27029|1) , and also 00:27:370 (27370|2,27370|3) - This should be single since there is no drum.
So something like this is what I'm suggesting https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17671382/d450

00:28:733 to 00:28:870 there is a 1/8/fast drums so it should be a 1/8 grace so it should've been something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17671392/ab2b

00:30:370 to 00:30:642 are 1/6 beats not 1/8

There are no drums on 00:36:710 (36710|1,36847|2) - and 00:36:983 (36983|3,37120|0) - .

00:37:460 (37460|2,37460|3,37529|0,37597|3,37597|1,37665|2) - This is uhh a bit too dense for that part since there are only 1/4 drums

My timings recomendation would be to add timing points at 00:39:645 - (offset 39645), 01:14:547 - (offset 74547), 01:32:011 - (offset 92011), 02:06:914 - (offset 126914), and 02:28:731 - (offset 148731),

You might have to resnap the objects inside these re-timed sections as a whole!

I personally think the 00:56:824 (56824|0,57063|3) - Roll should not be there, there isn't really a roll type of sound going, it's more of a snare hit only.

01:07:324 (67324|3,67597|3) - This part has a 1/6th noise that could be used instead of the 1/4th, this could bring a little bit of variety to the patterns aswell in my opinion.

01:38:398 (98398|3,98551|3) - This 1/8 Spacing between the two ln's might be a little bit rough to acc consistently

This particular instance happens more than once, so i would do the changes for every parts where this happens.

02:01:870 (121870|3,122142|3) -

01:39:847 (99847|0,100051|0) - This part could be complemented with a nice 1/8 roll or short stream burst, which would fit better the sound its going with.

03:07:733 (187733|3,189029|0) - I'm not sure what this part is snapped to, but i hear a stream burst and i don't thing the Flams particularly fits the basshit in that situation.

03:10:171 (190171|3,191210|2) - Same thing except the burst

03:13:392 (193392|3) - 03:13:392 (193392|3,196716|1,197756|0) - 03:18:898 (198898|0,199938|3) -