00:16:895 (4) - this bounce slider should end at 00:17:214, and there should do some object that I recommand a new slider on 00:17:373 to 00:17:672.
00:23:597 (3) - this slider should end at 00:23:916 and a new slider or bounce slider from 00:24:075 to 00:24:395, since there is a vocal at 00:24:235.
00:22:799 - this vocal cannot be ignored, you can extend the bounce slider 00:22:160 (4), or, make a new slider from 00:22:480 to 00:22:799.
00:27:107 - this sound cannot be ignored, you can extend the slider 00:26:788 (2) to cover it.
In the first chorus the reverse sliders really hinder the flow of the map because it actually takes you out of that 4/4 beat that the map has. There's a 6 note burst at 00:55:740 which is really uncomfortable to play as 6 note burst is comparable to a double in terms of awkwardness to play. I'd say just remap that part to make it a 5 note burst which is much simpler. At 00:50:480 there's a triple stack slider which also hinders the flow of the map. Other issues include a mixed and uncoordinated use of sliders that start with "doubles" or sliders that start with triples throughout the map. It's really unpredictable and awkward to read so if you want to get this ranked I'd say also adjust those. That is all I can critique so far.
01:14:171 (4,5) - There is no such a sound like your pattern in BGM. Is there any special reason to do this? If not, change it.
01:36:830 (3) - It's inappropriate to completely covered the same position as 01:36:511 (2) with perfecly same shape.