00:06:386 - Don't this need to be a jack if you're going for 1/2 jacks in this section like 00:03:356 (3356|1,3659|1) etc?
Actually speaking about it, you could represent the intensity synth increase by starting the pattern without jacks, then representing jacks to the increasing intensity of the synth, that is up to you, but the jack problem should be sorted here.
Happy to give more info if you are confused about what I am saying. (since it generally covers 00:00:477 - 00:20:325 )
i wanted to keep vocals at minimum there since I dont want it to be overwhleming. Stuff like 00:33:356 (33356|2,33507|1) - 00:30:932 (30932|2,31083|3) - etc are for low bass/guitar sound, not vocals
From 00:25:787 - to 00:29:120 - , considering each part's vocal sound's intensity, I think the extra LN at 00:25:825 (25825|0) - had to be a single normal note and 00:28:249 (28249|1) - had to be a LN instead.
Same from 00:35:484 - to 00:36:090 -(00:35:522 (35522|0) - ).
From 00:38:779 - to 00:39:082 - , considering the additional windy sound starting from 00:38:779 - , I think applying the exact same pattern for the vocal sound by 00:38:817 (38817|0,38969|1) - would be kinda bummer. What if you apply flow-like LN grace structure to combine the expression between windy and vocal sounds at the same time?
Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17671659/5860
01:03:969 (63969|2,64120|2,64272|2) - 3stack in col3 with 1/12th snap feels quite unnecessary and sudden. Rather applying 1234321 structure without double would emphasize the vocal sound imo.
Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17671822/156a Same at 01:13:666 - 02:21:545 -
From 01:06:696 - to 01:07:858 - , rather than applying 01:06:696 (66696|2,66772|3,66999|2,67075|3,67302|3,67378|2,67605|3,67681|2) - this kind of obvious, repetitive LNs, switching each direction and length according to vocal's pitch height or length would be better.
Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17671972/4174 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17671975/4fe9
From 01:19:916 - to 01:21:128 - , 01:22:340 - to 01:23:211 - , etc, the stack at col2 |1|2|3|4| feels way too repetitive and obvious all over the place which could've been improved if you apply 1/2th shield like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17672017/5d50
Same at 01:20:181 (80181|1,80484|1,80787|1) - 01:22:605 (82605|1,82908|1,83211|1) - 01:25:029 (85029|2,85332|2,85636|2) - 01:27:454 (87454|2,87757|2,88060|2) - 01:29:878 (89878|2,90181|2,90484|2,90939|2) - 01:32:302 (92302|2,92605|2,92908|2) - 01:34:726 (94726|1,95029|1,95332|1) - 02:37:757 (157757|2,158060|2,158363|2) - 02:40:181 (160181|2,160484|2,160787|2) - 02:42:605 (162605|1,162908|1,163211|1) - 02:47:454 (167454|1,167757|1,168060|1) - etc