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This beatmap was ranked on 24 September 2021!
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00:10:290 (1,2) - 01:28:955 (1,2) - I saw this type of patterns at your previous maps. While it was characteristic, this felt... really different from other patterns, to the degree that it feels inconsistent.

So what you can do is, creating more similar overlap patterns at similar context like 00:08:957 (4,5) - 00:11:623 (4,5) - etc or just making them spaced regularly.

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fixed it, hopefully it's good enough now

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00:11:290 (3) - The patterning here would look neat if you would stack the sliderend on the previous circle 00:10:123 (7) -

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fixed

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00:35:123 (5) - A new combo here would fit nicely due to the music and rhythm change.

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fixed all

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00:55:623 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The music is quite intense here yet (2) and (3) are relatively close. Perhaps move (2) a bit more to the left so it's more spaced from the next pattern?

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fixed

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01:14:123 (8,9,1) - Broken stack.

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fixed all

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01:26:205 - There's a clear drum sound here in the music, it would be nice to add a circle.

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added

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02:34:287 (1,3) - Parallels could be better

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fixed

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03:07:453 - 03:11:786 - Try adding circles to give rhythm variation. The same simple beat was being repeated over and over, which didn't felt interesting to play or show the song.

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true, added them

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03:11:620 (1,2) - Would make more sense to stack these together to follow the vocals and keep (3) alone instead.

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fixed

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03:48:785 (1,2) - Try spacing these more, it's having the same visual spacing as 03:47:619 (1,2) - while the rhythms being different.

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spaced them more

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03:48:785 (1,2) - I think it would be better to space these two sliders a bit more since right now it could be confused as a 1/4 rhythm rather than 1/2, since it's spaced similar to your 1/4 rhythms such as 03:47:619 (1,2) -

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fixed

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03:50:285 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please don't use massive jumps for super calm parts of the song, it feels really unfitting. Using a slightly close spacing would rather be a better choice for contrasts.

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spaced them less, hopefully it's good now

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03:50:285 (1,2) - The music decreased a lot in terms of intensity here so the spacing used feels kinda overwhelming for what the song is doing. Consider reducing it a bit.

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fixed

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03:52:785 (4,1,2) - Would make more sense to keep the same spacing for those circles since the music isn't changing and then increase the spacing for 03:53:285 (3,4,5,6) - since this is where the music is increasing in terms of intensity.

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I'd rather

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anyway fixed

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