00:10:290 (1,2) - 01:28:955 (1,2) - I saw this type of patterns at your previous maps. While it was characteristic, this felt... really different from other patterns, to the degree that it feels inconsistent.
So what you can do is, creating more similar overlap patterns at similar context like 00:08:957 (4,5) - 00:11:623 (4,5) - etc or just making them spaced regularly.
00:11:290 (3) - The patterning here would look neat if you would stack the sliderend on the previous circle 00:10:123 (7) -
03:48:785 (1,2) - Try spacing these more, it's having the same visual spacing as 03:47:619 (1,2) - while the rhythms being different.
03:48:785 (1,2) - I think it would be better to space these two sliders a bit more since right now it could be confused as a 1/4 rhythm rather than 1/2, since it's spaced similar to your 1/4 rhythms such as 03:47:619 (1,2) -
03:52:785 (4,1,2) - Would make more sense to keep the same spacing for those circles since the music isn't changing and then increase the spacing for 03:53:285 (3,4,5,6) - since this is where the music is increasing in terms of intensity.