00:05:062 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - IMO a progression like this needs to build up, so it feels weird that 00:05:062 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - accelerates but then 00:05:818 (7,8,9,10,1) - ends up as the weakest here. i would nerf the earlier stream and buff the later one
00:05:818 (7,8,9,10,1) - it's straight but not straight. it's a curve but not like a curve. make it better
00:30:272 (3,4,5,6,1) - keep this as a repeat-- the action doesnt start until 00:30:776 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:53:211 (1,2,3) - they look awkward because they still use straight slider body. there are a lot of straight sliders. apply red node for them