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00:03:433 (3433|1) - vs 00:04:724 (4724|2,4724|3) - 同样是有kick但是一个双押一个单押,看了一下同kick的用法,建议是 00:04:724 (4724|2,4724|3) - 改成单押。

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00:05:369 (5369|3) - 不同的音高,没有通轨的理由,建议是移到3轨

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18479006/1028

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00:07:949 (7949|3,8272|3) - 不同音高同轨

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00:08:917 (8917|0) - 双押,因为snare,00:09:078 (9078|2) - 单押,kick。

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00:10:207 (10207|0) - 建议缩短为1/2ln,你又塞旋律又塞碎鼓的,较顶难度都太密了。虽然这是another难度可以看做是单独设计的,但建议最好还是参考着顶难度的抓音往下map。

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18479020/683b 建议

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owo)b

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00:11:336 (11336|3) - Should be double?

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good.

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00:12:304 (12304|1,12304|0,12304|3) - kick三押?建议kick还是双押,因为你这段比in难度难的太多了

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00:13:433 (13433|1) - 建议分到三轨因为叠键集中在左手
00:16:014 (16014|2) - 同

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00:14:240 (14240|1,14562|1) - 和 00:11:659 (11659|2,11982|1) - 结构上不一致,建议最好还是镜像

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fixed.

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00:26:659 - Add a note here?

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keep.
Reason: this kind of sound is not mapped in this section, as in 00:25:449 / 00:26:095 / 00:26:417 / 00:26:578 / 00:26:659 ...

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00:28:433 (28433|2,28433|1,28433|0) - 三押的理由是?最好还是双押

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00:31:014 (31014|0,31014|1,31014|3) - 为什这么密的地方也要三押

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00:27:143 (27143|0,27143|2,27143|3) - keep,每一段音乐最开始加一个note不过分
其他的都改了

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00:34:901 - skipping this prominent feels abit awkward for me, I think using this kinda pattern will works

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Pattern updated.

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00:38:756 (38756|3,38756|0) - 这里cymbal重音的地方却不用三押表达

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00:40:691 - ehhhhhhhh I'm not sure about the 1/16 here - not convinced that there's another here that fast; I'd either stick to 1/4 like the other diffs or use 1/8 instead for the kick roll

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Used 1/4 jumptrill instead.

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00:50:369 - #3580901/9620145 host has changed to 1/4 as that's what the music is doing here for this 1/1 - you should probably do the same

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Fixed.

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00:57:723 - same thing with #3998426

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00:58:272 and 00:58:595 - Add a note?

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added

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参见开头的一段 相同的音是没有LN的 所以这里keep

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pattern re-adjusted

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01:26:498 (86498|0) - 建议删掉,我认为这里是不应该用上双押的,因为这个旋律没有伴着鼓,音高较其他的要低,同多押是表达不出后面的重音(cymbal)的

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01:33:191 - Add a note?

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01:39:401 - the kick isn't here like before for 01:38:756 (98756|3,98756|1,98998|1,98998|3,99240|3,99240|1) so I think there should just be one note here

01:41:982 - ^

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Fixed both.

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01:41:498 - should there be an extra note for kick here?

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Fixed.

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01:43:530 (103530|3,103530|2) - looking at you only put doublets on kick sound, might be better to use single here as no kick sound

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Removed a note.

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02:15:530 (135530|0,136175|3) - 建议缩到1/2
02:16:175 - 建议把这里的1/4全去掉,因为这里的关注点只有鼓,这些细小的声音根本没有关注的必要。
例子 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18479958/34f2

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