00:03:433 (3433|1) - vs 00:04:724 (4724|2,4724|3) - 同样是有kick但是一个双押一个单押,看了一下同kick的用法,建议是 00:04:724 (4724|2,4724|3) - 改成单押。
00:10:207 (10207|0) - 建议缩短为1/2ln,你又塞旋律又塞碎鼓的,较顶难度都太密了。虽然这是another难度可以看做是单独设计的,但建议最好还是参考着顶难度的抓音往下map。
00:19:401 (19401|1,19401|0,19482|2,19482|3,19562|1,19562|0,19643|3,19643|2,19724|0,19724|1,19804|3,19804|2,19885|0,19885|1,19966|3,19966|2,20046|0,20046|1,20127|2,20127|3,20207|0,20207|1,20288|3,20288|2,20369|0,20369|1,20449|3,20449|2,20530|0,20530|1,20611|2,20611|3) - 最好是写成能拍的对切和主难度作区分,而且用对拍的话比in难的太多 例子 : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18479036/d4d6
00:37:466 (37466|1,37466|3,37466|0,37546|2,37627|0,37627|1,37707|3,37788|1,37788|2,37869|0,37949|3,37949|2,38030|1,38111|3,38111|0,38191|2,38272|0,38272|1,38353|3,38433|1,38433|2,38514|0,38595|2,38595|3,38675|1,38756|3,38756|0,38836|2,38917|0,38917|1,38998|3,39078|2,39078|0,39159|1,39240|2,39240|3,39320|0,39401|3,39401|1,39482|2,39562|0,39562|1,39643|3,39724|1,39724|2,39804|0,39885|2,39885|3,39966|1) - 主难度也是对切,我建议是把切换写成叠键
00:40:046 (40046|2,40046|3,40127|1,40127|0,40207|3,40207|2,40288|1,40288|0,40369|2,40369|3,40449|1,40449|0,40530|3,40530|2,40611|1,40611|0) - 同前面 #3612388
01:26:498 (86498|0) - 建议删掉,我认为这里是不应该用上双押的,因为这个旋律没有伴着鼓,音高较其他的要低,同多押是表达不出后面的重音(cymbal)的
02:12:788 (132788|3,132788|2,132949|1,132949|0,133030|3,133030|2,133111|1,133111|0,133191|3,133191|2,133272|1,133272|0,133353|2,133353|3,133433|1,133433|0,133514|3,133514|2,133595|0,133595|1,133675|2,133675|3,133756|0,133796|1,133836|2,133877|3,133917|1,133917|0,133998|2,133998|3,134078|0,134119|1,134159|2,134199|3,134240|1,134240|0) - waht?和顶难完全一样
建议: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18479954/9dca
02:15:530 (135530|0,136175|3) - 建议缩到1/2
02:16:175 - 建议把这里的1/4全去掉,因为这里的关注点只有鼓,这些细小的声音根本没有关注的必要。
例子 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18479958/34f2