00:49:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - the only build-up that feels kinda underwhelming if compared to every other build-up parts, could you buff this one a bit more?
01:03:683 (1) - can just remove the NC here, the combo for 01:03:346 (1,2) feels too short if compared with 00:52:559 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:18:768 (2) - perhaps move this to x:38~ so you will be able to emphasize the slap sound (idk what it is) on the white tick, the sound is the same as 01:17:503 & 01:18:177
01:42:616 (2,3) - this should've been double 1/4 slider rather than triplets, the sound on blue tick seems pretty noticeable
01:53:065 (1,2) - really deserved a hyperdash in my opinion, will be fit for the downbeat and transition into other instrument there, also the current position plays kinda awkward not gonna lie
02:04:020 (1) - I think the triplets supposed to be on the red tick 02:04:189 - , sounds kinda odd having the red tick as a slidertail, lacking of emphasis
02:03:852 (7,1) - also perhaps add atleast a dash/hdash for this downbeat rather than walkable, its quite strong