00:21:194 (5) - Perhaps making this a 1/2 slider so that the piano chord gets mapped. Then following it up with another 1/2 slider for the kick drum?
00:30:194 (3) - feels a bit harsher than the other jumps in the sequence? idk it's hard to explain, but this might be better moved a little bit to the right
00:57:194 (2,3) - this might look better with probably 1/4 approach circle worth of overlap? Something like this maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16799639/0da7
00:59:135 (9) - slider is completely horizontal. Add 5 degrees of rotation or copy and cntrl+g 00:58:959 (8) -
01:35:665 (7,1) - not quite an overlap but it still looks pretty weird? maybe move (7) up a little
01:49:518 (4,1) - awkward movement. (1) should either be moved up like in 01:49:165 (4,1) or moved down to form more of a curve, the current movement is neither while also not being straight so it's just weird
im just gonna remove new combo on 02:19:429 (1) - and made new combo as you suggested here 02:19:959 (3) -
02:31:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Saran ngab, 1-2-3 mending kecilin spacingnya, terus 4-5-6-7 gedein, biar cocok ama pitch vokalnya yang tinggi di 02:31:782 (4,5,6,7) -
i made it uncomfortable ON purpose because this map is made with uncomfortable jump and 1/2 slider spam,
02:49:782 (1,2) - maybe better as a slider+circle https://puu.sh/HTAzV.png to show the sound at the end of (1) being stronger than that of (2)