00:16:221 (16221|3,16397|3,16573|3) - Unecessary 3-anchor, pls change to this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17119423/545e
00:32:103 (32103|3,32191|3,33691|3,33779|3) - Not really a big one but, it seems you unintentionally forced the mini-jack in col 4 a bit which was quite confused while playing this section since looks like there wasn't any intended reason for these forced mini-jacks.
For the same reason, from 00:41:103 - , even though I understood your way of placing repetitive mini-jacks, I think the pattern at 00:43:221 (43221|1,43397|1,43750|1,44015|1,44191|1,44456|1) - feels a bit too much forced in col2 as well, so it might be better to spread it out appropriately.
01:07:926 (67926|3,67926|2,68059|1,68103|3,68191|2,68279|3,68279|1,68456|2,68588|3) - feels quite forced into the right side, unintentionally as well imo.
00:45:515 (45515|1) miight want to make this more pr consistent? maybe something like so? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17119524/cc19
01:20:257 (80257|3) - Huge problem for me, you haven't snapped this correctly. pls do this in 1/12 since i think it works better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17119540/898a
01:33:573 (93573|1,93823|1) - Should put these in column 1 to be more consistent with pitch honestly. a note starts at 01:33:338 (93338|0), so yeah pls change. (1/2/3/4)