Summoning 101

00:07:389 (7389|5,7389|6,7469|4,7550|3,7700|0,7700|1,7852|6,7852|5,8017|2,8017|4) -
I don't really think there is any significant difference among these drums, and considering this is Insane I think you can use double for all of them and try to come up with more Insane-ish pattern for 00:07:389 (7389|5,7469|4,7550|3) -

00:08:673 (8673|4,9135|0) - same for these two: maybe mixing in some anchors would be great. Just saying

00:09:760 (9760|5,9840|4,10077|4,10157|5,10398|5,10478|4) - is that intend to focus on right side or there's other reason? i just worry the pattern not much represent the drumroll and left side just 1/4 grace pattern if take just col123 00:09:601 (9601|0,9680|2,9917|0,9997|1,10237|0,10318|2) - . so would suggest to make it more balance can be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18065897/c29b

00:10:813 (10813|4,10981|3) - this is a bit awkward. I think doing both LNs or both rices are fine, but mixing LN and rice is a bit weird. The LN especially.

00:11:399 - missing double for kick. can add to col4 not stack with previous or next notes

00:14:646 (14646|5,14646|0,15291|5,15291|2,15291|6) -
maybe a bit of consistency issue? I think it is totally fine to just allocate three notes for dnb and have an extra LN for vocal.

00:14:324 (14324|2,14485|6,14969|4,15130|1,15130|0) - ^

00:18:818 - i think need 1/2 LN for guitar ? cuz other LN like 00:17:044 (17044|5,18012|2,18334|4,18980|4,19302|5,19625|4) - follow guitar which is good to represent all the sound instead simplify them

00:19:485 (19485|4) - 00:20:775 (20775|6) - : missing LN for the guitar layering?

because 00:19:162 (19162|0,19324|1,19808|0,19969|2,20453|2,20614|3) - from this alone i thought this part will be guitar-heavy, its slightly incomplete how this part being mapped at the moment

additionally, 00:18:840 (18840|6) - reduce the ln length by 1/2

00:19:808 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16795111/cecf
Just an idea: try to find a bit more space for rices so that you can use pattern that better represents a drum roll?
btw I can hear piano at 00:20:130 00:20:291 00:18:840 00:19:001 and I think those are pretty clear, but I don't know if you want them or not...

00:21:743 (21743|2) - 01:13:356 (73356|4) - i feel like a flair can be added in this silent 1/1 part, there's a 1/4 melodious guitar sound here that can be added, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17023209/6ba4

00:21:743 - 01:13:356 - there's some guitar you can layer along with the vocal, try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17023209/6ba4

00:26:399 (26399|2,26399|4,26480|0,26480|1,26560|6,26560|5,26641|0,26641|1) - and 00:27:689 (27689|6,27770|4,27851|2) - i think better make both of them have same amount note, just feel odd when u make them different while they give a same sound and emphasis feedback

00:32:689 (32689|1,32851|0) - a bit picky, how about move to col2 and 4 ? cuz beside of too over on left side, for 8 beats, it has only 3 notes on col4 00:31:238 (31238|3,32044|3,33818|3) - so better to spread them a bit so balance on left mid and right column

00:37:044 - 00:37:367 - 00:38:334 - maybe can add note for hat sound here? giving 4 beats just for a LN feel empty imo. subjective issue anyway

00:42:388 and 00:42:549 - you could map the piano here as well if you wanted although faint

00:42:711 (42711|0,42872|1,43033|3,43195|4,43356|5,43517|6,43678|0,43840|1,44001|6) - I think you can arrange some fancy LN patterns on 012 456 while leaving thumb for finished. But again just saying; current pattern works perfectly fine

00:49:302 (49302|3,49463|5,49625|1) - a bit curious which sound do u want to follow. vocal appear on 00:49:302 (49302|0,49786|3) - and no guitar piano sound imo. better leave it to SN n remove 00:49:463 (49463|5) -

00:51:722 - maybe add note for tom? idk the name but it noticeable sound for me

00:52:388 (52388|3,52549|5,52711|1,52872|3) - these LN doesn't fit into any previous layering you did (vocal+drum heavy), nor any instrument that's currently playing. consider to simplify the LN to represent sounds & pitches that actually exist

00:54:969 from this point I can hear a lot of heavy piano chords (esp like 00:55:614 00:55:775 etc.), not sure if you want to incorporate them as they are really dominant imo

00:58:818 - 00:59:141 (59141|5,59302|4) - 00:59:463 - making them a LN would be better i guess since all of them have guitar sound which support ur vocal emphasis. and also u did the same guitar structure on 00:57:044 - which need them being LN for consistency

01:01:904 - 01:02:227 - 01:02:549 - missing 1/2 LN for guitar?
considering these 1/2 LN 01:00:130 (60130|3,60291|2,60453|5,60614|3,60775|4,60937|5,61098|3,61259|0) - is probably layer the guitar melody, adding those LN will make up for the missing guitar rhythm

01:02:528 - add note for ride sound ?

01:09:302 - i think need more 1 beat LN for the guitar transition to high pitch, almost same as this structure 01:10:592 (70592|3,70592|0,70915|4,70915|1) -

01:10:372 missing a piano sound here?

01:11:098 01:12:388 I suggest adding 1/1 LN at these two places to represent the high pitch piano sounds.

01:23:657 - should be a note here, missing LN for vocal

01:25:109 - add another LN for "uwwwwuuuuuu" sound asdsadsadsda

01:27:388 (87388|1) - extend this to 01:27:711 to match the vocal

01:37:549 and 01:40:130 - are the vocal LNs deliberately left out here (unsure why if they are)

01:41:904 (101904|0) - I think you can make this longer as it is a slightly stronger piano notes, and by doing that can fill the void after that

01:47:227 (107227|4,107227|6,107227|2) - this just feel way too excessive for a faint sound like that

01:47:227 (107227|6,107227|4) - i feel like its rather overkill to have a 3 chord for a single rim sound, quite the opposite of how silent this part is. remove 1 or 2 notes.

apply the same to 01:47:872 (107872|2) - 01:49:808 (109808|2) - 01:50:453 (110453|1) - 01:52:388 (112388|2) -

01:52:872 (112872|4,112953|2) and 01:42:549 (102549|0,102630|1) - could potentially look more alike for the 1/4 piano trill thing going on if you wanted

02:04:808 missing a drum here

02:04:947 (124947|3) - intend to be triple notes for kick? i think u can move down to 02:04:786 - for same amount note for kick as a double

02:24:001 feels like a ctrl H section? I think that's fine but a bit more rearrangement would help
02:25:453 missing a drum note

02:36:399 (156399|1,156722|5) - i think it should be like 02:37:044 (157044|1,157528|5) - for vocal emphasis ? since ur previous part mainly use vocal oriented represent on LN