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00:02:193 (2,4,6) - I dont understand these kats following to, there are no exact instruments that could be following up to except for the piano so you may considering to remove these notes as the higher diffs did

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yea

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i prefer it where it is atm because it's too quiet imo at 00:07:493

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00:13:053 - d here? I think it makes this section's variation structure nice and simple with just alternating 1/2 dkk/ddk at the beginning of each measure

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could do the same idea in the later instance:
so like changing 01:22:419, 01:26:763, 01:31:107, 01:35:451 - to ddk
01:33:279 - to dkk

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great idea

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00:38:438 00:39:524 00:41:695 00:42:781 - these kicks could be mapped, matching the note at 00:37:352?

the section from 00:36:809 onwards has more drums compared to the one starting at 00:28:121, so having slightly more density would represent this better

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removed the note at 00:37:352 instead, replacing with a 1/2 doublet like the rest.

doing triples instead of doubles here would reflect the new drum, however i'd prefer to maintain emphasis on the piano and adding the notes on the kick kind of takes away from the piano emphasis

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00:39:801 - given the structure i think it makes more sense to delete this to have 3 breaks like the previous section

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i see what u mean because there aren't any other notes mapped to vocal sounds in this 8 bar section. i decided to add 3 other vocal mapped notes here to increase the density a little bit compared to [00:28:127 to 00:36:815]. ty for pointing this out

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00:40:202 - this could be moved to 00:40:745 since you're following the piano in this section

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yes

idk what i was thinking when i mapped that lol

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00:40:745 - move to 00:40:610 - and 00:41:017 - move to 00:40:881 - , probably the best way to emphasize the vocals is to keep the patterns into 1/1 instead of split up the patterns into kd dk with one note in red tick like before.

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fixed it was quite janky

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00:48:489 - del this similar to 00:52:833 -

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good spot

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00:54:184 - maybe make this a finisher, drum crash is similarly strong to 00:45:496

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02:08:030 - here also

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oops yea ty

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01:01:650 - no sound here, could remove improv

would also distinguish the drums that start from 01:01:786 better

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yea, again idk what i was thinking when i mapped it

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01:49:976 - can be moved to 01:50:248 on the piano there instead

this would follow the vocals more by spacing out the 1/2 triplets

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yes

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01:56:085 - seems to be an unintended finisher here as there's no drum crash to support it

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indeed

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02:13:053 - 02:19:976 - this one is pretty long with no sufficient breaks, considering to remove the slider and changes to triplet 1/2 from 02:15:904 - to covering up the first half piano parts, that would be better than blatantly following up every instruments with slider like that.

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shortened the slider

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02:15:904 - slider here kinda weird tbh, suggest just mapping out the drums

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ok

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02:16:039 - feels weird that this doesn't start on the drums at 02:15:904

i feel it would be more natural to add the break by deleting 02:16:990 02:17:125

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moved the start of the drumroll to the start of the drumroll. if i remove the note on 02:17:125 i can have 3 1/1 gaps without removing the note on 02:16:990.

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02:31:379 - could be moved to 02:31:514 for consistency with following the vocals at 01:17:668

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yes

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03:17:804 - I think it's better to move this note to 03:18:076 - in order to following up the upcoming vocals more better

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i prefer it how it is

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03:21:068 - add note 03:22:154 (829,830) - del 03:22:425 - add note for consistent breaks

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applied

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03:32:736 - 03:41:017 - this one is pretty long section btw, you may remove 03:37:352 - to give a break point

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removed the note on 03:37:759

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03:32:742 - need break, maybe delete 03:36:136 -

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fitting a break here is tricky, but i think deleting the note at 03:36:136 is the best way to do it

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03:41:560 - note can be added for the piano if you're leaving 03:41:424 without a finisher

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yes

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