End Credits

00:21:926 - 00:43:868 -- too intensive for start of the map imo

00:23:983 (2,3,4,5,1) - All the times you mapped this part with 4 circles you're following the guitar in the background but in reality that should be only the last 3 circles of each instance
00:24:154 (3,4,5) - . If you listen carefully 00:23:983 (2) - doesn't group with 00:24:154 (3,4,5) - . I'd recommend changing that on all the times you stacked two circles in a row rhythmcally. The jumps like 00:32:211 (2,3,4,5) - could work as a variation tho.

00:25:183 (3,4) - / 00:27:926 (3,4) - / 00:30:668 (3,4,5) - /00:33:411 (3,4) - /00:41:640 (3,4,5) - This spacing used in the intro is REALLY big, but botherline acceptable. The reason being that this is the calmest part of the song/map but this spacing is just as big as many jumps on the chorus in some of its instances

00:42:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - would be nice if this had some more noticeable buildup instead of just being slightly expanding 2x triangle, could just nerf first 3 a bit like around https://lasse.s-ul.eu/wup8BxBx.jpg

00:53:811 (1) - dont think this needs nc? random single combo looks kinda unfitting here

00:54:154 (1,2) - maybe make the rhythm gap shorter to give more impact on the circle (2)? Like make the circle (1) 1/2 slider instead

00:55:354 (2,3) - hello that's blanket police you are under arrest

00:56:212 (4) - if you're not gonna nc this then you should probably keep the slider shapes consistent with the curves, similar to what you did here 02:33:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6), otherwise just nc it

(01:07:183 (1,2,3) - especially bc you did it here)

00:58:954 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - have a lot lower spacing than 00:57:583 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - in jump moment

01:05:811 (1) - hello that's stack police you are under arrest

01:05:811 (1,2) - a LOT easier than 00:54:840 (1,2) -.
even 54 imo is not enough spaced for section what highlighed with kiai

01:09:926 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - why. that's really bad moment for sharp-angled bursts

01:15:411 (1,2,3) - I think you space this out more, probably into the top left. It's a little underwhelming, and the playfield usage was nice here 01:26:383 (1,2,3) - when you spaced it out more

01:17:811 (3,4) - really nice moment from first pishifat's lessions

01:27:754 (1) - literally throw this into the top left, the spacing is tiny from 01:27:412 (3)

Unsnapped hit objects.
01:37:870 - Slider head unsnapped by 2 ms.
02:28:251 - Slider tail unsnapped by 2.286 ms.

#2790401 01:37:870 (1) - / 02:28:097 (1) - still unsnapped.

01:46:783 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - so freakin dirty section

01:57:240 (4) - little aesth thing. move 4 so it could be middle between sliderend 2 and sliderstart 5

01:59:126 (4) - playfield usage could be better here, maybe move 01:59:126 (4) - to the left and arrange the following sliders like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19121222/9b88 ?

02:28:097 (1) - accidentally 1/4 slider but should be 1/2 I think

02:55:183 - missing snare?

• snare would be nice here; it lets the quiet stuff on 02:55:526 - have that "quiet" effect thingy

02:55:353 (2) - rhythm here would be nicer if this wasn't mapped, there is such a clear stop in the song here that it just feels pretty unnatural