You can improve this both slider 00:13:969 (1,1) - maybe like this? https://puu.sh/H4TvG/2dc5fc1f26.jpg
00:29:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - maybe you can improve pattern of this one?
here's my suggestion flow movement. Move 00:30:055 (4) - a bit down to x:386 y:237 then, 00:30:200 (5) - to x:362 y:49 then, 00:30:345 (6) - x:262 y:219, then 00:30:490 (1) - x: 423 y:72 then, 00:30:635 (2) - x:225 y:156 then, 00:30:780 (3) - x:443 y:183
(it would be great if you blanket this slider 00:30:925 (4) - aswell with 00:30:345 (6) - ) -> https://puu.sh/H4TG2/d7243439f3.jpg
00:33:099 (2,3) - it's a bit close and affect of triangle flow, maybe you can move 00:33:244 (3) - to x:225 y:156?
00:35:273 (2,3,4) - can you improve this one? maybe move 00:35:563 (4) - x:64 y:294? or similar like that?
00:53:534 (1) - remove NC, 00:53:969 (3) - NC here, 00:54:403 (1) - remove NC here, 00:54:838 (4) - NC here.
00:57:447 (1,2,3,4) - should be add more distance over there, not same as 00:56:577 (1,2,3,4) -
01:24:258 - 01:27:882 - 01:31:215 - 01:33:679 (1) - 01:33:679 (1) - why it keep changing from 1-3/4 to 1-2 combos?