I'm really not sure how else i can help you. The song is quite jumpy so theres just a bunch of jumps and streams which are quite straight forward. Your spacing and emphasis between notes are generally fine. There are just some general issues with slider velocity matching to the song and your streams being rather jagged. I'm not very informed on how to make nice streams so I can't be of much help here. But a general is to keep your streams shape and spacing consistent if the music indicates no change
It also seems like most your maps are very cramped in the middle. Try spreading out your notes to the entire playscreen. Use the corners on the top and bottom of the playfield
I'd highly recommend to check on the latest ranking criterias https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/de/Ranking_Criteria/osu%21 before you keep pushing the map. Easy and Normal diffs NEED a huge improvement. :(
Thanks, I need that since I'm not that yet experienced at mapping especially those diffs :v