00:17:150 (3) - could remove this note here since here its a calm part
okie
00:24:400 i would add note here, or you could turn 00:24:234 (4) - into a 1/2 slider
00:53:233 (1,2) - i would stack with 00:52:233 (4) - and 00:53:566 (1,2) - with 00:51:900 (3) - looks better and way clean umo
okiee