00:05:031 - 00:05:211 - A bit subjective mod depending on how you listening/mapping the song but if you want you can place 1 note on the 2 beats I mentioned and either lower the volume or put a hitsound like snare or something not too loud, as there indeed is a background noise on the 2 beats. Also would compliment note placement decision on 00:05:571 (5571|2).
00:07:553 - Place 2 note jack here for the sake of consistency with 00:04:130 (4130|3,4130|2).
00:09:355 (9355|1,9535|1) - Do an 2 LN jack on these 2 parts as I feel (imo) that it expresses the strong sounds much better.
00:23:949 (23949|2,23949|1) - Move this jack to 00:23:949 (23949|0,23949|1) (1st and 2nd lane). Same for 00:23:769 (23769|1,23769|2) if you applied the jack I mentioned on previous mod. No need to change 00:24:130 (24130|2,24130|1) as it's a new beat.
00:26:652 (26652|3,26652|2,26652|0,26787|1,26832|2,26877|0,26877|3,26968|2,26968|1,27058|0,27058|3,27103|2,27193|3) - This whole LN should be not used/cut off after 00:27:013.