00:03:905 (6) - only one reverse slider on this part kinda odd while the sound not really special to be alone :3 ,could make one more in 00:12:838 (6) -
00:09:638 (3) - straight doesnt really make sense, as there is nothing in the music that really changes, and you have curved sliders all the way before aswell
00:14:705 (2,3,4) - would just separate this with 00:14:438 (1) - cuz new vocal phrase start 00:14:705 - feels kinda bland imo stacked them while they separated enough in the song
00:13:905 (3,4,5,6,1) - also since you did pentagon pattern would just nc 00:13:905 (3) - instead 00:14:438 (1) - to make sense the visually that you did here
00:24:438 (2,3) - could make this lower distance to differentiate with this 00:23:905 (4,1) - because 00:24:438 (2,3) - the vocals noticeable more weak than this 00:23:905 (4,1) -
幫我改一下我就有pp吃
00:33:917 (3,4) - 00:34:450 (3,4) - 00:34:717 (1,2) - 00:34:983 (3,4) - ctrl g
原因: 拜託啦
00:59:771 (5,6) - i'd really love if you spaced this more more ,to represent vocals ,vocals goes very hard here lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15552125/1efc
01:10:971 (1) - Recommend making this jumps, as 00:16:571 (1,2,3,4) is the exact same and you keep following the vocals with active clicks afterwards
01:18:038 (4,5) - following vocals while the strong drum appear on here kinda jarring to play ,would change what your following here to drum with make 01:18:038 (4) - this two clickable objects ,the hitsound makes it jarring as well though
01:29:905 (7) - recommend spacing this jumps further away, as one expects a bigger jump, which could lead to missreads
for me you could ctrl g this rhythm 01:41:105 (3,4) - . Moreover, guitar solo restart here 01:41:505 (5) - not 01:41:371 (4) - . here 01:41:371 (4) - there is rhythmic guitar which is ignored here 01:40:838 (2) -
01:52:571 (1,2) - i would to space this jump which doesn't represent enough this guitar solo. Like you did here 01:50:171 (6,1) - imo
02:02:038 (7) - held vocal, slider would make more sense here, as youd also be able to have an active click on the next red line where another vocal is skipped with a sliderend (02:02:305)
i realized they are set to the crashes, but i think moving them to the held vocals would still feel more natural
02:06:450 (1) - this 1/1 slider feels a bit weird when compared with 01:07:783 (1,2) -.
maybe u can make them consistent.
02:06:450 (1) - the gap has similar issue, vs 01:06:717 (1) -
02:25:638 (1,2) - revert the nc ? to make clean visual to 02:26:971 (1) - and consistent since they are same rhythm and vocals
could add hitsound here i think ,03:08:438 (2) - kick hs ,if you wanna keep your jumps ,also change 03:08:305 (1) - to snare hitsound to suit the overral drums sound