00:16:460 (5,6) - it'd match the loopy-ness of the slide whistle (the instrument, not the osu-thingy) if you curved these sliders
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16178874/0dad
00:44:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - very personal, but I'm a bit dissapointed you decided to use the same rhythms you used for the rest of the kiai here when there's so much contrast musically, especially with the decreasing pitch of the synth-whistle in the music. The kiai already feels a bit repetitive, so adding some contrast here by making some jumps to reflect the decreasing pitch would be cool, I'm thinking something with a repeating pattern like this...