You make big problems, like the DS wich is too op for this kind of difficulty, like the discusion made by Spagyrie on #1580041 but also you make problems like stacking 2 objects perfectly like you did on 00:12:101 (4,5) - this is too hard for new players to react, so I highly recommend that you dont do this on your easy diffs, you can just space it out like: https://gyazo.com/80821b5248ae58ff92e666ea01392452 But for your learning in the future, these kind of mistakes are usually often, so don't feel bad about it, hope you don't make these kind of issues on future maps!
For easy diff, you should always map with distance snap on (because it's easier for new players, players that can't properly follow different DS), I can see you stick with 1.3 DS for many notes, but sometimes I can also see some notes that are a bit too far or to close of the previous and/or next object (exemple : 00:08:627 (2), 00:06:101 (2) or 00:21:258 (3), too close. 00:15:258 (1) or 01:04:206 (2), too far, I won't link them all) You can move them a little to keep the same DS while keeping the same pattern.
To be honest this difficulty has so many problems, I think is the best for the set that you delete it, since I don't think you really need an obligatory easy diff on the set due to its drain time, or you can search a GDer to make one for you, you still need to learn more knowledge for easy diffs, not trying to be mean, but you can go and check the ranking criteria for easy difficulties on this website: https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu%21
Good luck on future easy diffs!