00:22:980 - this finish looks unnecessary for me. You can keep 00:23:333 - as the only finish instead.
Same for 01:36:392 -
yes, I agree with you, the cymbals were sounding but it didn't seem to flow very well.
00:27:921 - same as #3150866 I don't think you need it to emphasize anything.
It sounds different from 01:41:333 -
changed. #3150866/8527549
00:55:980 (313,314,315,316) - kkk d follows the drum in a closer manner. Let's try that?
I changed it a little. Only the most prominent sounds were taken. kkd -> _kd
01:28:803 (473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480) - change to ddkkddk d to represent the cymbal on 01:29:333 - ?
OK！ best color
01:39:215 - you can consider placing finish for this cymbal here.
add finish