for 00:34:135 (1,2) - i think 2 1/4 sliders are like https://celerih.s-ul.eu/q4aDYPuv.png would be best here
00:34:135 (1) - is 1/6, just 2nd one is 1/8
and like celerih said simplifying this one would be good too as 01:43:468 (2,3,4) - was simplified, it's cuz later one has some weird snap.. but simplified rhythm for earlier part would be better for consistency
01:05:968 (1,2) - wouldn't make these notes part of the same stream as 01:06:135 (3,4,5,6,7) - since the drums change so much on 01:06:135 -
01:16:468 (5,6,7) - tho it's understandable to space this a bit more, it's too much spaced, and this one makes other jumps in kiai less impactful imo
01:43:468 (2,3,4) - not sure about snap but last sound is a lot earlier than white tick and it's not clear 1/6
so using (prob) the only active 1/6 doubles wouldn't be correct.. simplifying rhythm like other diff would be good
03:21:385 (4,5) - why the higher spacing here? you didn't do it earlier so looks like a mistake