00:45:272 (2) - current one works fine but alternatively this can also be moved to 00:45:431 - if you want to focus on the drum kick
00:58:923 (8) - to be honest this note is pretty out of focus to me, like...I am not sure what it is following. Ideally this can be snapped to 00:59:241 - so that it can match the snare and vocal perfectly.
i make a different structure because some instrumen/percussion is also different. Take 01:00:825 (12,13,14,15) - and 01:10:984 (13,14,15,16) - for example where the drumplay is different. There is also 00:57:016 - where the kiai started with D and 01:07:174 - where i there's no note when kiai stopped a bit. Considering that the two sections has slightly different arrangement, making a pattern variation is reasonable there.