Be Your Light

00:01:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it would be better to separate this pattern of sliders a bit more, with DS it looks boring

00:01:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The distance spacing in this section shows very little contrast, it would be more effective to separate the sounds into groups of visual patterns to show emphasis

00:02:479 (8,1,2) - Inconsistent from the triple at 00:01:312 (1,2,3) - maybe change 00:02:479 (8) - into a 1/4 slider and replace 00:02:645 - with a circle to continue the triple.

This jump (00:03:729 to 00:03:812) is too difficult for a 5* map.

00:03:979 (1,2,3,4) - this does not follow the sound, just stretch to 1/2 sliders and it matches the sound. ex: https://gyazo.com/b2aed089adfadde1844622ce1e33519e

00:04:145 (2) - this sound is relevant, you should place a note there. With this until the gameplay also improves

00:05:812 (3) - here is a relevant sound, you should map it. I recommend you copy the slider 00:05:645 (2) - and paste in 00:05:812 (3) - place it where it seems best for you

00:06:312 (5) 's circle can't be seen due to 00:05:895 (3) this slider. This pattern isn't the best option and can confuse people when they are playing. Maybe change this?

00:06:979 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - every second note you should place a slider

00:11:312 (3) - i suggest doing this here, for the 2 different record scratch sounds: https://gyazo.com/72a6b260381c40cf2584a0d1097cb7c4

Slider velocity is low from 00:11:979 - to 00:33:303 - for the song considering the intensity of it.

00:12:812 (2) - you should cover this sound

00:12:812 (2) - you should cover this sound

You should probably increase density in this section 00:13:312 - It feels a bit weird that its less dense than the intro even though the music isnt really going down in intensity that much. It gets pretty boring playing those repeat sliders

00:19:645 Circle here maybe?

00:22:312 (2) - nc

Clap here (00:30:145 and 00:30:312), as you did in 00:24:812 + 00:24:979 and 00:27:479 + 00:27:645

00:30:645 (1) - your streams are good d:^)

00:31:979 (9) - would suggest changing last circle to be a slider, repeating or not, to emphasize the last drum sound and also to make the 3 beat gap a little less boring

00:32:312 - 00:32:979 - After the stream there are still parts with percussion and beat. Maybe you should map this part too [Like a small jump section to end the stream or something like that] otherwise it feels like a gap.

00:35:979 (8) - note here

00:36:145 (7,1,2) These notes have a distance snap too short, considering the constant 180 BPM and being 1/1.

00:53:645 (1) - could you fill this space

00:54:645 to 01:05:229 You can add a whistle every time the song makes an high-pitched sound. The whistle could be (Example) in 00:54:812 (3,6,9,12,15)

00:59:395 (10) - a small 1/2 jump section here can divide up the pretty repetitive stream (since it's 2 repeating instrumental sections) with some change

01:13:979 Could look better with the slider tail "looking" at the Northwest

01:19:645 to 01:19:812 's pattern is confusing. Maybe change the pattern?

Umm... Try making 01:26:312 (5) closer to 01:26:145 (4) and further to 01:26:479 (6)

01:30:312 (5,6) These notes have 1/4 and have a similar distance snap to 01:29:312 (1,2,3,4) , which is 1/2. Try making the sliders (1,2,3,4) have a longer distance snap, otherwise this will be confusing.

01:30:312 (5) - You should use a reverse slider here instead of slider and single note. It will fit the rest of your reverse slider pattern which you implemented nearby.

01:31:312 (3,4,5,6) #1191234 but with circles

01:35:645 (5) - Same here try to implement reverse slider instead of slider and note.

01:39:729 (10,11) #1191234 , but here the circles are on the slider.

01:52:645 - Missed sound on the whole beat

Consider having 01:54:645 (1) - be closer to 01:53:312 (1) - since the downbeat would be a good place to reverse the rotation direction.

For 01:56:562 (8,9) - you could make the stream change direction on the strong piano note at 01:56:645 -.

01:56:645 (9) NC

01:57:312 Remove Kiai, as here is where the final soft part starts

In 01:57:979 (3,4,5,6), those notes are all 1/2, but they have a different distance snap. Sometimes people do this in Extra difficulties, but here it looks weird. You should change the pattern to have the same distance snap or different distance snap, but make it look more normal.