00:28:856 (5) - maybe ctrl J this and rotate it a bit like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13833711/c1ae I think it flows better that way so that theres a bit of contrast and it isn't linear with this whole section 00:27:918 (2,3,4,5,1) here
ok
00:31:981 (1,2) - flow fo this is really awkward since both sliders are the same direction
flow looks fine to me, no change