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kuronotsubasa

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

kuronotsubasa 2012-08-27T13:47:56+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年9月30日星期日 at 00:04:12

Artist: Momo kuro tei ichi mon
Title: Nippon Egao Hyaku Kei
Source: Joshiraku
Tags: Joshiraku Nippon Egao Hyaku Kei
BPM: 160
Filesize: 17605kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

(0 `-')~ Ins. (4.99 stars, 250 notes)
>_< Eas. (1.96 stars, 86 notes)
+_+ Nor. (4.28 stars, 167 notes)
Fantasi's Insane (4.98 stars, 249 notes)

Download: Momo kuro tei ichi mon - Nippon Egao Hyaku Kei
Download: Momo kuro tei ichi mon - Nippon Egao Hyaku Kei (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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MY fist beat map XD I try my best, hope you like it

Thanks for Fantasi, Hasegawa kobato, KonataSuzumiya, _YuuKyuu, [Reisen_Inaba], Bangbang93, Lancelotof, Amaris and everyone who care about this map

Thanks for a kind friend who translate the group's name for me

Fantasi's Insanse is also pretty good

Maybe I have poor English? XD

Last edited by kuronotsubasa 2012-09-29T16:04:42+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Takei Hisa

69 posts

Joined January 2011

Takei Hisa 2012-08-28T04:07:58+00:00

hihi~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
问题还是很多的
General
EZ和N难度请开DS作图，对于新手向请保证间距一样
您的难度有6个滑条变速，最多3个，修改
而且变速如果变2倍速必须有SB提示，所以不要变2倍或自己做SB
您整体有很多时间点我认为很奇怪，比如EZ难度01:11:571,01:12:040这两个时间点没有任何变化为什么用两个，请删除多余时间点
您NOTE的颜色太多了，我认为最多4种（主要您都深色还全不同. .
Music Track=1

>_< Eas.
Slider Tick Rate=0.5
00:04:352(1)去掉或换成Circle
00:10:352(5,6)放开一点，这样重叠滑条好像不允许（？）
00:13:727(2)去掉
00:19:352(1)去掉，将spin终点放在这里
00:21:227(3)去掉
00:21:602(1)为什么要NC？而且最好不要头尾同位置往返
00:28:352(1,2,3,4)你确定这样放？感觉不但不美观而且那个滑条也不好控制，别头尾同位置
00:40:352(5)NC
00:41:477(2)EZ最好别有隐藏NOTE
00:44:290(2,3,4)EZ不能有这种连打
00:45:040(5)NC（我是感觉这一段节奏有点怪）
00:50:852(1)去掉，spin终点放在这里
00:53:852(3)NC
00:57:602(1)被滑条覆盖犯法
01:10:352(2)NC
务必开DS作图，这种摆放肯定没法rank

+_+ Nor.
您认为4.49是一个N该有的难度吗？
HP=3
AR=4
OD=4
具体问题和EZ差不多，用DS重做才好MOD

Fantasi's Insane
我不怎么能MODIn难度，最后一个难度我就不MOD了
HP=6
OD=7
00:17:477(1,2,3,4)这4个滑条中间间距不一，改正
00:19:727(5,6,7,8)不建议这种摆放，比较无趣~~可以摆更多难度点XD
00:28:727(4)长时间短往返不好吧,,,,有点创意~~
00:30:227我建议加个circle
00:48:219(1)spin起点放在这里
01:01:118(6)为什么要音量20，100音在01:01:352,01:01:540,01:01:727,01:01:915,01:02:009,01:02:102,01:02:290都加一个whistle（当然这只是个人建议）
01:13:352(6)和前面一样也可以
01:25:727(7)转的弯最好不要贴着起点，挺难控制的

(0 `-')~ Ins.
HP=8
这个......连打间距，这个难度也可以在一些地方使用DS，而且您有些跳也是间距不一，点一个物件右上角有显示它与前一个物件和后一个物件的距离，，看着做吧~

GOOD LUCK~

kuronotsubasa

23 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

kuronotsubasa 2012-08-28T07:00:57+00:00

首先感谢KonataSuzumiya 的各种批评指正:D *★,°*:.☆\(￣▽￣)/$:*.°★* 。
以下为修改情况划线表示已更改

SPOILER

EZ和N难度请开DS作图，对于新手向请保证间距一样
您的难度有6个滑条变速，最多3个，修改
而且变速如果变2倍速必须有SB提示，所以不要变2倍或自己做SB SB入手
您整体有很多时间点我认为很奇怪，比如EZ难度01:11:571,01:12:040这两个时间点没有任何变化为什么用两个，请删除多余时间点[/color]我表示这是因为先做INS.于是在做其他难度的时候偷懒了=。=沿用之前的设置
您NOTE的颜色太多了，我认为最多4种（主要您都深色还全不同. .
Music Track=1

>_< Eas.
全篇已调节为统一速度无倍率
Slider Tick Rate=0.5
00:04:352(1)去掉或换成Circle
00:10:352(5,6)放开一点，这样重叠滑条好像不允许（？）
00:13:727(2)去掉
00:19:352(1)去掉，将spin终点放在这里
00:21:227(3)去掉
00:21:602(1)为什么要NC？而且最好不要头尾同位置往返
00:28:352(1,2,3,4)你确定这样放？感觉不但不美观而且那个滑条也不好控制，别头尾同位置
00:40:352(5)NC
00:41:477(2)EZ最好别有隐藏NOTE
00:44:290(2,3,4)EZ不能有这种连打
00:45:040(5)NC（我是感觉这一段节奏有点怪）
00:50:852(1)去掉，spin终点放在这里
00:53:852(3)NC
00:57:602(1)被滑条覆盖犯法
01:10:352(2)NC
务必开DS作图，这种摆放肯定没法rank 全程DS已开

+_+ Nor.
您认为4.49是一个N该有的难度吗？
我表示这是以HARD的心态做出来的NORMAL。。(。﹏。*) 我错了……
HP=3
AR=4
OD=4[/color]
具体问题和EZ差不多，用DS重做才好MOD全程DS已开，但由于变速因此间距还是会有变化囧

Fantasi's Insane
此处表示朋友已经修改
我不怎么能MODIn难度，最后一个难度我就不MOD了
HP=6
OD=7
00:17:477(1,2,3,4)这4个滑条中间间距不一，改正
00:19:727(5,6,7,8)不建议这种摆放，比较无趣~~可以摆更多难度点XD
00:28:727(4)长时间短往返不好吧,,,,有点创意~~
00:30:227我建议加个circle
00:48:219(1)spin起点放在这里
01:01:118(6)为什么要音量20，100音在01:01:352,01:01:540,01:01:727,01:01:915,01:02:009,01:02:102,01:02:290都加一个whistle（当然这只是个人建议）
01:13:352(6)和前面一样也可以
01:25:727(7)转的弯最好不要贴着起点，挺难控制的

(0 `-')~ Ins.
HP=8
这个......连打间距，这个难度也可以在一些地方使用DS，而且您有些跳也是间距不一，点一个物件右上角有显示它与前一个物件和后一个物件的距离，，看着做吧~

表示正在改当中、、咬手指TAT

再次感谢！多摩！_(:з」∠)_ 请多多指正

chaotic_iak

287 posts

Joined February 2012

chaotic_iak 2012-09-04T11:44:50+00:00

From queue!

[Notes]
I don't download the one with the video because of personal reasons.

[Easy]
Slider tick rate 1
00:20:102 (1) - Too small gap
00:20:852 (2) - Preferably make this one on the same side as the 1 (and not on the same side of the reverse arrow); this way I (aka Easy players) expected the slider to repeat three times
00:25:352 - Preferably put something instead of break
00:31:352 - ^
00:41:852 (7) - Same problem as object-after-slider positioning in 00:20:852
00:43:540 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Preferably don't make half-beat objects on Easy
00:46:165 (6,7) - Don't make the gap 1/2-beat in Easy
00:47:852 (8,9) - ^
01:17:852 (1) - Kinda confusing for Easy (3/4-beat slider)? Well it's a slider anyway, so I think no problem.

[Normal]
I think a full remake might be needed. Don't randomly change slider speed and don't use half-beats on unexpected times in Normal.

[Fantasi's Insane]
AR -1 (to 8)
CS -1 (to 4) because there are unintuitive jumps
00:20:477 (9) - Partially hidden by 7
00:30:790 (1) - Inconsistent spacing in inconsistent timing
01:01:352 (6) - Hold slider
01:10:352 (2) - Inconsistent spacing in inconsistent timing
01:13:352 (6) - Hold slider

[Insane]
Don't randomly change slider speed
Slider tick rate 2?
Many spacing violations, but it's Insane.

Yeah, you have problems about slider speeds and object spacings. I hope you can do better.

[Kirisame-Marisa]

[Kirisame-Marisa] 2012-09-20T19:05:44+00:00

您好可以客製一個太鼓難度嗎?

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