hi
quick heads-up
here's just some acknowledgementsand
(?) this means I'm not sure, you check which sounds better
ALLI think the BPM should be 135.512, I know it's not that much of a problem, but the offset kinda was, move it to 6,824. I find my BPM/Offset by listening for umphs, and that's how it sounds here, forward the map and give it a listen, you will get a cool, umph, umph, umph. . . . where your beats land on correct beats, it can be slightly off, but it is much closer on what you had before, imo.
-BREAKS: I found a couple places on hard, so I'll just post in all so you can look, places like 01:01:510 or 00:30:625, like I said on the other map I modded, probably renew the break, unless it is intended to look like ouendan/eba, cause it does add a cool sense of imagery, if so, just don't do anything
Normal 01:35:82 (4) - I do not know what to say about this, this is a weird looking slider 
01:54:86 (3) - blue tick again? maybe end on next tick, the red one
02:22:31 (4) - this slider is funny02:27:40 (4,5,6,7,8) - if you're mapping to the words, move this two 1/4 ticks forward to the white, then remove (8) I guess
02:42:677 - nothing wrong here, I just like what you did
like the samplesets and hitsounds03:16:105 - 03:17:434 - you wanna try to map something here, cause you have the awesome sampleset changes, and it feels lonely, maybe you could delete it if you don't use it.
03:54:62 (1) - end this 03:57:061 to match with hard, or vice versa, end hard where this ends
Hard00:19:00 (3) - end this on the red tick, well, here 00:19:222
01:33:16 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - idk, you might want to move this up one grid (lever 3 that is), so it is aligned with 01:32:72 (3), ya know
01:46:00 (5) - you can probably add a finish hitsound here too, so both finish (?)
01:55:41 (5) - probably move this forward to red tick (?) and add a note here 01:55:301 (x) to even things out ^^;
02:37:91 (5) - same here ^, think is, I have a problem with blue ticks, even if they are singing to it, I did keep some, but those are still questionable, and I really can't help with mapping to anything over 1/4 beat divisor
02:42:677 - nothing wrong here, I just like what you did
like the samplesets and hitsounds03:11:235 - add a note here (?)
03:14:11 (7) - New Combo (?)
I like it overall, and it deserves a star