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Lon - LeftBehind City

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Reed R Gale
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Reed R Gale
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, May 20, 2012 at 2:18:29 PM

Artist: Lon
Title: LeftBehind City
Source: 40mP
Tags: torinoko city hatsune Miku Vocaloid cover
BPM: 135
Filesize: 23480kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. LeftBehind (4.87 stars, 536 notes)
  2. RightBehind (3.1 stars, 216 notes)
  3. StraightBehind (2.04 stars, 166 notes)
Download: Lon - LeftBehind City
Download: Lon - LeftBehind City (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Note: Chances are you DON'T have the latest version of this map. Whenever you see it, redownload for the most recent updates.

Mapping Style: Puzzle
Mood: Rising Tension

Difficulties:
Straightbehind ~ Easy (Name from usuendan23)
Rightbehind ~ Normal
Leftbehind ~ Hard to Insane

Hello. :D

Technically this map isn't done, because I haven't finished the Storyboard, but the beats are all placed and ready to mod, so have at it.

[To Do]
Rank

[Changelog]
update: Minor SB change
Mar. 12, 2012: Minor SB edit
Mar. 14, 2012: Solved download issue
Mar. 16, 2012: Many NC changes
update: SB changes and updates
Mar. 22, 2012: Changes made, download issue fixed...(?)
Mar. 23, 2012: More SB changes made, minor changes.
update: Video changed to Flv format and color added to some beats.
Mar. 24, 2012: Cleaned up map a bit and rounded Leftbehind to 850 beats.
update: Huge skinning update
update: Another huge skinning update and a color swap
Mar. 25, 2012: Even more skinning changes
Mar. 26, 2012: Background changed, decided to make a new difficulty
Mar. 27, 2012: Edited StraightBehind
update: Made Starry's changes
update: Drain returned to level 6
Mar. 28, 2012: Edited StraightBehind and added custom spinner
Mar. 31, 2012: Artist name corrected, StraightBehind updated
update: aoisundoisabdfiausbdfiuasbdf New Video sexysexysexy
Apr. 2, 2012: Formatting change
update: StraightBehind Edited
update: StraightBehind Edited
Apr. 3, 2012: Minor SB change, minor StraightBehind update
Apr. 6, 2012: Video edit, slightly smaller, credits Lon. Also small Striaghtbehind additions
Apr. 7, 2012: SB changes galore! Straightbehind Minor additions.
Apr. 8, 2012: Bakari changes made :D
Apr. 10, 2012: StraightBehind finished :D
update: Edited the combospam xD
Apr. 14, 2012: Made some of the changes from Crystal, THANKS :D (And thanks for putting up with me >_>)
Apr. 16, 2012: Some of Garven's changes made.
Apr. 18, 2012: Minor hitsound edits.
Apr. 21, 2012: More minor hitsound edits. Some SB changes and additions. Considering large reworking of SB.
Apr. 28, 2012: Slow but steady... kinda steady progress.
May 5, 2012: Crying about Spboxer beating me, further SB updates and general cleanup of LeftBehind
May 11, 2012: Volume edit on LeftBehind
May 20, 2012: Deleted SB; it wasn't that great, moved to pending.
Last edited by Reed R Gale , edited 105 times in total.
bossandy
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bossandy
I can't download this map
Please Full Submit again >_<
Reed R Gale
120 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Reed R Gale
Odd. I checked the map a day ago and the DL worked for me. Oh well. Try it now.
bossandy
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bossandy
  • Hi Reed R Gale ~ request from my queue~
    　
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Bule : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest.
    　
    [ General ]
    　
  4. I think your SB isn't finish , because no SB after 01:13:071 finish it!!!
  5. RightBehind is too hard , I think you need to make a more easier diff
  6. You shoild make all green section snap , Now most of them is unsnap!!
  7. I am very worried about combo color... the combo color too close to the BG. Try this :
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 192,192,192
    Combo2 : 255,255,255
    　
    [ RightBehind ]
    　
  8. 00:20:626 (2,1) - stack notes on easiest diff isn't a good idea >_< move to other place ?
  9. 00:31:959 (3) - it isn't follow the music >_<
  10. 02:09:293 (1) - do not NC here
  11. 02:13:071 (4,5) - it isn't follow the music at all ( I think )
  12. 02:13:959 ~ 02:17:071 Remove this break
  13. 02:27:737 (4) - NC here
  14. 02:34:404 (4) - Spacing
  15. 02:39:959 (2,3,4) - I ma very worried about this part , because I can't see 3 note after 2 , change to other place~
    SPOILER
  16. 02:51:737 (1) - This spinner is too long
  17. 03:11:959 ~ 03:23:071This is the easiest diff!!!, please remap all of this part , It's too hard on easiest diff !!!
    　
    [ LeftBehind ]
    　
  18. 00:11:293 (1) - Remove NC
  19. 00:12:626 (3) - NC
  20. 00:15:737 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 00:16:182 (4) - NC
  22. 00:17:515 (1) - Remove NC
  23. 00:32:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is this part too confusion for some player?
  24. 02:29:959 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - the spacing is too big
  25. You need to put NC carefully , it's too confusion
    　
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Nice song!!!~
Good Luck :3
Reed R Gale
120 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Reed R Gale
To work, to work! :D
What is and isn't changed

bossandy wrote:

  • Hi Reed R Gale ~ request from my queue~
    　
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Bule : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest.
    　
    [ General ]
    　
  4. I think your SB isn't finish , because no SB after 01:13:071 finish it!!! Yup not finished. xD
  5. RightBehind is too hard , I think you need to make a more easier diff Hmmm. I was aiming for normal. Seems normal to me, but I'll see what I can do.
  6. You shoild make all green section snap , Now most of them is unsnap!! It's fine. It doesn't make a huge difference to the map. Still I can see where you're coming from. I'll snap them.
  7. I am very worried aboyt combo color... the combo color too close to the BG. Try this :
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 192,192,192
    Combo2 : 255,255,255
    Erm... this is what I'm using. Did you make a mistake?
    　
    [ RightBehind ]
    　
  8. 00:20:626 (2,1) - stack notes on easiest diff isn't a good idea >_< move to other place? (Fixed)
  9. 00:31:959 (3) - it isn't follow the music >_< (But it synchs well. That's why it's a slider. No change)
  10. 02:09:293 (1) - do not NC here (fixed)
  11. 02:13:071 (4,5) - it isn't follow the music at all ( I think ) (While it synched well, changed)
  12. 02:13:959 ~ 02:17:071 Remove this break (It's a style thing. Keep.)
  13. 02:27:737 (4) - NC here (fixed)
  14. 02:34:404 (4) - Spacing (What about it?)
  15. 02:39:959 (2,3,4) - I ma very worried about this part , because I can't see 3 note after 2 , change to other place~ (fixed)
    SPOILER
  16. 02:51:737 (1) - This spinner is too long (broken up)
  17. 03:11:959 ~ 03:23:071This is the easiest diff!!!, please remap all of this part , It's too hard on easiest diff !!! (Rescaled)
    　
    [ LeftBehind ]
    　
  18. 00:11:293 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
  19. 00:12:626 (3) - NC (Fixed)
  20. 00:15:737 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
  21. 00:16:182 (4) - NC (Fixed)
  22. 00:17:515 (1) - Remove NC (Fixed)
  23. 00:32:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is this part too confusion for some player? (I guess so, but I'm not changing it.)
  24. 02:29:959 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - the spacing is too big (Nope I like it.)
  25. You need to put NC carefully , it's too confusion (I do, and I thank you for that help.)
    　
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Nice song!!!~
Good Luck :3

Done! Eet lukz gud. :D

Let me also clarify something, Rightbehind is thereabouts of a normal mode. Not an easy. I'll clear that up on the upper portion.
popner
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popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

When I clickDownload: 40mP & Lon - LeftBehind City
I can download correctly.
When I clickDownload: 40mP & Lon - LeftBehind City (no video)
there is an error.

Also I can only see [LeftBehind]

[LeftBehind]

00:09:071 (1) - looks bad for me
00:24:182 (2) - unrankable - hidden slider reversearrow
00:30:848 (2) - better not to hid its head under 00:30:182 (1)
00:37:737 (1) - stack its end with head of 00:37:293 (3)?
01:42:616 (1) - unrankable - hidden slider reversearrow
01:59:061 (1) - unrankable - hidden slider reversearrow


That's all I can find. GL~
Reed R Gale
120 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Reed R Gale
Changes made or not made

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

When I clickDownload: 40mP & Lon - LeftBehind City
I can download correctly.
When I clickDownload: 40mP & Lon - LeftBehind City (no video)
there is an error.

Also I can only see [LeftBehind]

[LeftBehind]

00:09:071 (1) - looks bad for me Made simpler
00:24:182 (2) - unrankable - hidden slider reversearrow Reversed.
00:30:848 (2) - better not to hid its head under 00:30:182 (1) I like this, sorry
00:37:737 (1) - stack its end with head of 00:37:293 (3)? I also kinda like how this turns out
01:42:616 (1) - unrankable - hidden slider reversearrow fixed
01:59:061 (1) - unrankable - hidden slider reversearrow I kinda like it how it is.


That's all I can find. GL~

Huh. I'll do another reupload, and test it again. Thanks for the mod!

Cheers~!

Reed R Gale
Starry_old
Starry_old
SPOILER
17:27 <Starry> : your mp3 bit rate is 0?
17:27 <Reed R Gale> : Humm. Let me check.
17:27 <Starry> : I scrolled over it and It said 0
17:28 <Reed R Gale> : Huh.
17:28 <Starry> : besides that
17:28 <Starry> : folder is clean
17:28 <Reed R Gale> : Can you get a screenshot of what you see?
17:28 <Starry> : ok
17:28 <Reed R Gale> : Something tells me
17:28 <Reed R Gale> : That you don't have the map. xD
17:29 <Starry> : I do
17:29 <Reed R Gale> : I have a large amount of stuff in the folder. Let me check the download myself.
17:29 <Starry> : But its easy to fix
17:29 <Starry> : Just resubmit
17:29 <Reed R Gale> : I know that one myself
17:29 <Reed R Gale> : I do that for every change because I make many SB changes
17:29 <Reed R Gale> : What I don't get is why nothing is in the folder.. Hmmm.
17:30 <Reed R Gale> : Here, I'm testing the Download.
17:31 <Reed R Gale> : Yeah, my folder is packed with stuff.
17:32 <Starry> : I just scolled over the mp3
17:32 <Starry> : and thats what It said
17:32 <Reed R Gale> : http://puu.sh/mIxi
17:32 <Reed R Gale> : Mine only tells me the size of the mp3, sadly.
17:33 <Starry> : Oh well,
17:33 <Starry> : If you can find a new mp3 that has a bitrate 128-192
17:33 <Starry> : and there no timing change
17:33 <Starry> : then do so
17:33 <Starry> : But if you can't
17:33 <Starry> : then stick to this one
17:34 <Reed R Gale> : Personally, I don't think that a bitrate of 0 is possible. Do you think it's an error?
17:34 <Starry> : Sadly,
17:34 <Starry> : It does say it
17:34 <Starry> : But I can't screen it
17:34 <Starry> : because when I screenshot it doesn't show the mouse
17:34 <Starry> : so >.<
17:35 <Reed R Gale> : Hmmm
17:35 <Reed R Gale> : I just looked it up, the lowest it goes is 48
17:35 <Reed R Gale> : I think it's an error.
17:35 <Starry> : I know but
17:35 <Starry> : Your bitrate needs to be between 128-192
17:35 <Starry> : If I'm not mistaken
17:35 <Reed R Gale> : I know that myself. I'm checking the audio now ;)
17:36 <Reed R Gale> : Or rather...
17:36 <Reed R Gale> : Trying to find out how to check it out. xD
17:36 <Starry> : Yeah.
17:36 <Starry> : On my screen it says 0
17:36 <Reed R Gale> : Does the map work, may I ask?
17:36 <Starry> : Yes,
17:36 <Reed R Gale> : Huh...
17:36 <Starry> : bitrate is like
17:37 <Starry> : when you click on the picture of the map
17:37 <Starry> : it lets you play it
17:37 <Starry> : or at least thats what I heard,
17:38 <Reed R Gale> : I'm pretty sure bit rate refers the the frequency of the wave of the mp3 file.
17:38 <Reed R Gale> : Also, if you'll trust me on this, I remember editing the song file myself to bring the bitrate into range.
17:39 <Reed R Gale> : I'll check it though. Once I find out how. xD
17:39 <Starry> : Well,
17:39 <Starry> : If your like
17:40 <Starry> : Really Really Sure the Bitrate is correct
17:40 <Starry> : then I guess you can stay with it
17:40 <Reed R Gale> : I am rather sure. A bitrate of 0 would be no sound whatsoever. Do you get any sound?
17:41 <Starry> : Ok then stay with it.
17:41 <Reed R Gale> : WIll do.
17:43 <Starry> : Your sliders are...
17:43 <Starry> : Let me put it this way...
17:43 <Starry> : Unique xD
17:43 <Reed R Gale> : Yes I know. I made them like that on purpose.
17:43 <Reed R Gale> : I know, I try to keep the music in mind when mapping. xD
17:43 <Reed R Gale> : The song felt like a puzzle
17:43 <Reed R Gale> : So i aimed for a puzzle. Is it visually appealing, or distasteful?
17:43 <Starry> : its....
17:44 <Starry> : Kind of confusing
17:44 <Starry> : tbh.
17:44 <Reed R Gale> : Then It's doing it's job.
17:44 <Starry> : I know but its not suppode to be like that
17:44 <Starry> : D:
17:44 <Reed R Gale> : I don't mind.
17:44 <Starry> : Put yourself in beginner perspective
17:44 <Starry> : >.<
17:44 <Starry> : when you map easy diffs
17:44 <Reed R Gale> : Oh!
17:45 <Reed R Gale> : Thats a normal map.
17:45 <Reed R Gale> : I'm making the easy mode now.
17:45 <Reed R Gale> : Just checked the bitrate
17:45 <Reed R Gale> : 192.
17:45 <Starry> : ok
17:46 <Starry> : Your mapping is nice :D
17:46 <Starry> : Just some things
17:47 <Reed R Gale> : Thank you!
17:47 <Reed R Gale> : Yes?
17:47 <Starry> : on normal
17:49 <Starry> : This slider : 00:12:626 (1) - You are missing a whistle at the end?
17:49 <Starry> : or it was intentional
17:49 <Reed R Gale> : yeah. That's intentional, but let me hear it with the whistle.
17:49 <Reed R Gale> : Yeah. That sounds good. I'll add it.
17:50 <Starry> : ok :3
17:50 <Starry> : next is
17:50 <Starry> : Add it to this slider too?
17:50 <Starry> : 00:19:737 (1) -
17:51 <Reed R Gale> : Since I've changed the first one, I'll change that too.
17:53 <Starry> : Your mapping is good
17:54 <Starry> : I didn't really see anything wrong
17:54 <Reed R Gale> : Thank you very much :D
17:54 <Starry> : So I'll do hitsounds
17:54 <Starry> : because your hitsounds could do a little more work
17:54 <Reed R Gale> : That woudl be cool
17:54 <Reed R Gale> : Thanks
17:54 <Starry> : Can you add a clap at the beginning?
17:54 <Starry> : 01:09:515 (2) -
17:55 <Reed R Gale> : Yeah, that sounds good, and it matches a pattern I missed. Thanks :D
17:56 <Starry> : Whistle this whole slider?
17:56 <Starry> : 01:27:293 (1) -
17:57 <Reed R Gale> : I'll do that, but at the end, I'll take off the whistle hitsound, if that's fine with you.
17:57 <Starry> : Alright,
17:58 <Starry> : Uh
17:58 <Starry> : 01:36:182 (4) - New combo?
17:58 <Reed R Gale> : Yes, good call. :D
17:59 <Starry> : and do you mind clapping that too?
17:59 <Reed R Gale> : No i don't mind changing that at all.
18:00 <Starry> : 01:55:293 (4) - Finish?
18:01 <Reed R Gale> : No, I'm trying to avoid finishes in the calm parts. If I use any then I'm doing it wrong.
18:01 <Starry> : Oh alright
18:02 <Starry> : I was kinda expecting a clap here
18:02 <Starry> : 02:13:071 (4) -
18:02 <Reed R Gale> : yeah, I'll add it.
18:03 <Starry> : Finish at end of this 02:22:404 (1) -
18:03 <Starry> : and finish at
18:03 <Starry> : 02:23:515 (2) -
18:03 <Reed R Gale> : Yeah, those sound good.
18:04 <Reed R Gale> : I should probably make custom spinners
18:04 <Reed R Gale> : for that one part.
18:04 <Reed R Gale> : xD
18:04 <Starry> : Go ahead :o
18:05 <Reed R Gale> : I'll get to it at some point. xD
18:05 <Starry> : Oh and
18:06 <Starry> : Finish at the beginning of this 02:44:404 (2) -
18:06 <Starry> : and
18:06 <Starry> : 02:45:071 (3) -
18:06 <Reed R Gale> : Yeah, sounds good :D
18:07 <Starry> : ok
18:07 <Starry> : You missed some claps here 02:45:071 (3) -
18:07 <Starry> : asdeasudxzc
18:07 <Starry> : I mean
18:07 <Reed R Gale> : xD
18:07 <Starry> : 03:11:959 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -
18:08 <Starry> : Or was it intentional?
18:08 <Reed R Gale> : Intentional.
18:08 <Reed R Gale> : Slowly falling tension.
18:08 <Starry> : OK
18:08 <Starry> : I think
18:08 <Reed R Gale> : 03:15:515 Claps shoudl end here.
18:08 <Starry> : Whistle fits
18:08 <Starry> : 03:19:071 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -
18:08 <Starry> : there
18:09 <Reed R Gale> : Ahh they're supposed to be there too xD
18:09 <Starry> : and decrease volume of note
18:09 <Starry> : for those
18:09 <Starry> : and make then all 1 combo
18:09 <Starry> : besides that
18:09 <Starry> : Everything else is goood!
18:10 <Reed R Gale> : You sure? I think I shoudl keep it at 1, 2, 3, 4, 5.
18:10 <Starry> : Well,
18:10 <Starry> : If your doing volume decrease
18:10 <Starry> : they all should be 1 combo
18:10 <Starry> : If your not
18:10 <Starry> : then you can stick with that
18:10 <Reed R Gale> : Hum. I guess I'll change it. The volume is already decreasing.
18:11 <Starry> : because it makes more sense to make them 1 combo if your doing volume decrease
18:11 <Reed R Gale> : Also, I'm doing the new combo thing so I'll change that on LeftBehind as well.
18:11 <Starry> : ok
18:11 <Starry> : and I won't mod easy diff yet
18:11 <Starry> : cause your not done
18:11 <Reed R Gale> : Yeah.
18:11 <Reed R Gale> : By far. xD
18:12 <Starry> : uh
18:12 <Reed R Gale> : Yeah?
18:12 <Starry> : I think approach rate is a bit too fast
18:12 <Starry> : for your hardest diff
18:12 <Reed R Gale> : I rather like it personally.
18:12 <Reed R Gale> : But if two more people comment on it
18:13 <Reed R Gale> : I'll change it.
18:13 <Starry> : because
18:13 <Reed R Gale> : You're the first.
18:13 <Starry> : the small circle size and the high AR
18:13 <Starry> : >.<
18:13 <Reed R Gale> : I understand.
18:13 <Reed R Gale> : If two more comment on it, I'll change it.
18:13 <Starry> : HP rate is too low
18:14 <Starry> : Can you increase it by 1?
18:14 <Reed R Gale> : Huh. I like that too. Hmm... Tell you what
18:14 <Reed R Gale> : I'll lower approach by 1
18:14 <Reed R Gale> : and increase drain by 1
18:14 <Starry> : Ok o-o
18:14 <Reed R Gale> : As you can tell, I don't like doing things by the book often. xD
18:15 <Starry> : Oh my suggestion aren't always from the book
18:15 <Starry> : and the book is based on us
18:15 <Reed R Gale> : True. True. xD
18:16 <Starry> : Ok
18:16 <Starry> : I'll start modding your hardest diff then.
18:16 <Starry> : Hmmmm.
18:16 <Reed R Gale> : Ya know. It really does feel too slow now >_>
18:16 <Reed R Gale> : xD
18:16 <Starry> : Ok well
18:16 <Starry> : Stay with 9 then
18:17 <Starry> : But keep the hp drain rate
18:17 <Reed R Gale> : I'll do that.
18:17 <Starry> : because high ar and low hp drain rate is bad
18:17 <Reed R Gale> : Why?
18:17 <Starry> : cause notes go faster with higher ar
18:17 <Reed R Gale> : I know that part.
18:17 <Starry> : and if you put low hp rate
18:17 <Starry> : its going be like
18:17 <Starry> : really easy to pass.
18:18 <Reed R Gale> : That's actually a mapping strategy
18:18 <Reed R Gale> : Make an easy map to pass but hard to do right xD
18:18 <Starry> : Your aiming for that?
18:18 <Reed R Gale> : Not really. This map is hard to pass in itself.
18:18 <Reed R Gale> : But I did do that once.
18:19 <Reed R Gale> : It was amusing to say the least.
18:19 <Reed R Gale> : xD
18:19 <Starry> : Oh well
18:19 <Starry> : the same suggestion for hitsounds on normal
18:19 <Starry> : for your hard diff
18:19 <Reed R Gale> : Ant specific spots?
18:19 <Reed R Gale> : Any
18:20 <Starry> : Whistle here
18:20 <Starry> : 00:09:071 (1) -
18:20 <Reed R Gale> : Added
18:20 <Starry> : 00:16:182 (2) -
18:20 <Starry> : ^
18:20 <Reed R Gale> : What is?
18:20 <Starry> : Whistle on that
18:20 <Starry> : and
18:20 <Starry> : 00:19:737 (1) -
18:21 <Starry> : Uhm
18:21 <Starry> : 00:31:959 (4) -
18:22 <Starry> : New combo here?
18:22 <Reed R Gale> : Nah. I think it's fine, personally.
18:22 <Reed R Gale> : If anything, I shoudl take out the new combo afte rit.
18:23 <Starry> : Ok so,
18:23 <Starry> : A Slider would fit here better
18:23 <Starry> : 00:36:182 (6,7,8,1,2) -
18:23 <Starry> : Or was it intentional >.<
18:23 <Reed R Gale> : Its intentional. But what did you have in mind?
18:24 <Reed R Gale> : One slider through?
18:24 <Starry> : Yeah
18:24 <Reed R Gale> : Hmmm. I kinda like the way it is. Sorry.
18:25 <Starry> : well not 1 slider too
18:25 <Starry> : just something different
18:25 <Starry> : through*
18:25 <Reed R Gale> : Hmmm.
18:25 <Reed R Gale> : I'll keep it in mind, but I don't see anything that I'd really want to change there.
18:26 <Reed R Gale> : Sorry if I'm being unreasonable ._.
18:26 <Starry> : Yeah I'm just saying things that
18:26 <Starry> : quite don't make sense
18:27 <Reed R Gale> : Mmm. I did aim for harmony there rather than melody, huh.
18:28 <Starry> : 01:11:071 (4) - New combo?
18:28 <Reed R Gale> : Yeah. That seems about right.
18:28 <Starry> : and clap at the beginning of that
18:29 <Reed R Gale> : Changed
18:30 <Starry> : Clap at the end?
18:30 <Starry> : 01:11:737 (6) -
18:30 <Reed R Gale> : Yeah, that's good. Changed.
18:31 <Starry> : Noisy >.<
18:31 <Starry> : 01:15:737 (2,3,4,5) -
18:32 <Reed R Gale> : I took away the clap at:
18:32 <Reed R Gale> : 01:16:071
18:33 <Starry> : This combo is too long shorten please 01:16:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
18:34 <Reed R Gale> : 01:18:182 (1)
18:34 <Reed R Gale> : NC there.
18:34 <Starry> : ok
18:34 <Starry> : You could have made a
18:34 <Starry> : Mirror here
18:34 <Starry> : 01:27:737 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
18:35 <Reed R Gale> : It was originally. In fact it was a mirror stream before
18:35 <Reed R Gale> : But it didn't look or sound good.
18:35 <Reed R Gale> : So I changed it.
18:35 <Starry> : oh alright
18:37 <Starry> : So
18:38 <Starry> : I don't like the sound of the clap here 01:39:071 (6) -
18:39 <Reed R Gale> : Hmmm
18:39 <Starry> : Oh nvm,
18:39 <Starry> : You can stick with it
18:39 <Reed R Gale> : Oh. Alright.
18:39 <Starry> : But add a clap at
18:39 <Starry> : At the end of this 01:39:293 (1) -
18:40 <Reed R Gale> : Alright.
18:42 <Starry> : 01:45:959 (3) - Clap at beginning for this
18:42 <Starry> : and
18:42 <Starry> : 01:46:404 (4) - This
18:42 <Starry> : Remove whistle on that slider sound bad ._.
18:42 <Reed R Gale> : Ha, didn't even notice it.
18:42 <Reed R Gale> : I'm gonna have to leave for a bit
18:42 <Reed R Gale> : Can you continue to mod?
18:42 <Starry> : Uhm,
18:43 <Starry> : Sure xD
18:43 <Reed R Gale> : xD
18:43 <Reed R Gale> : Alright bye
18:44 <Starry> : 02:29:960 (1,1,1,1) - Clap all of this
18:45 <Starry> : That's it Wooooo!

Mod - Done GL~
Kanari
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Kanari
Herro~

Lon is the artist so take out 40mp.
40mP would go in the source.
Reed R Gale
120 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Reed R Gale
Thank you. Fixed. (Well "fixing").
Kanari
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Kanari
Irc modded(ish) with some skin elements~
riffy
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riffy
yo~

Just want to help :D

General
AiBat


StraightBehind


RightBehind
00:10:182 (2,3) - stack start (2) and end (3)
00:35:737 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/otgf a bit messy?
new-combo spam in the end ><

LeftBehind
Kiai Times Not On Downbeat
00:11:293 (6,7) - maybe better to find another way? ><
like this
00:15:071 (7) - a bit weird shape ><
00:17:515 (1,2) - you really want to cross them? crossing sliders aren't good for me :<
00:22:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - whaaat? i can't hear rythm here ><
00:30:182 (1,2,3) - try to stack instead of crossing ><
00:38:626 (3,4) - crossing sliders
00:41:071 (3) - weird shape D:
a bit confusing
00:59:515 (5) - new combo
00:47:071 (7,8) - don't cross ><
01:01:959 (9,10) - don't cross / also: boring shape
01:04:182 (1,1,2,3,4) - can't hear rythm
01:15:293 (6) - new combo
01:39:959 (2,3,4,5,1) - don't cross :D
01:45:293 (2) - weird
01:47:515 (6) - NC (new combo)
02:09:737 (3) - TIME FOR IMPOSSIBLE JUMPS \:D/
02:45:293 (1) - YOU ARE AWESOME. no need to fix it :3
02:56:404 (3,5,7) - stack them?
03:11:960 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - new-combo-spam

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

GL~

Star!
Reed R Gale
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Topic Starter
Reed R Gale
MODDING BEGIN! Let-sa-go!

Corrections taken and/or not taken

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

Just want to help :D

StraightBehind


RightBehind
00:10:182 (2,3) - stack start (2) and end (3) Humm... Actually I kinda like it as is.
00:35:737 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/otgf a bit messy? I agree, let me work this out.
new-combo spam in the end >< The next combo spam stays.

LeftBehind
Kiai Times Not On Downbeat Fixed!
00:11:293 (6,7) - maybe better to find another way? >< Nope, I like the crossing as is.
00:15:071 (7) - a bit weird shape >< Part of the theme.
00:17:515 (1,2) - you really want to cross them? crossing sliders aren't good for me :< Yes. I am obstinate on crossing them.
00:22:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - whaaat? i can't hear rythm here >< It's a harmonic rhythm. Someone in your thread suggested some on your hard mode. I like them because they spice up a map :D
00:30:182 (1,2,3) - try to stack instead of crossing >< It's the theme I chose and the theme I will stick with for better or for worse.
00:38:626 (3,4) - crossing sliders Keeping.
00:41:071 (3) - weird shape D: Keeping. But I will fix that weird thing there.
00:59:515 (5) - new combo Fixed.
00:47:071 (7,8) - don't cross >< I'll keep.
01:01:959 (9,10) - don't cross / also: boring shape I agree with you on this one. Changed.
01:04:182 (1,1,2,3,4) - can't hear rythm Harmonics.
01:15:293 (6) - new combo No thank you.
01:39:959 (2,3,4,5,1) - don't cross :D Sorry, i like it the way it is.
01:45:293 (2) - weird
01:47:515 (6) - NC (new combo)
02:09:737 (3) - TIME FOR IMPOSSIBLE JUMPS \:D/ YUP! But seriously, I can make these. Still I've gotten a few complains, so I'll change it. But only a little...
02:45:293 (1) - YOU ARE AWESOME. no need to fix it :3 Thanks :D
02:56:404 (3,5,7) - stack them? I don't like the way things looked stacked there.
03:11:960 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - new-combo-spam Ibid most corrections

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

GL~

Star!

Sorry about all the crossing, but that's the style I'm using for this map.

Thanks for the mod and the star :D

Cheers~!

Reed R Gale
Last edited by Reed R Gale , edited 2 times in total.
riffy
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Reed R Gale wrote:

Sorry about all the crossing, but that's the style I'm using for this map. it's up to you! but rythm is great!

Thanks for the mod and the star :D u r welcome :3

Cheers~! :3

Reed R Gale
:3



maybe a problem? ><
Reed R Gale
120 posts
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Topic Starter
Reed R Gale
That's problem happens EVERY TIME I SUBMIT. Don't worry, i usually fix it immediately. That was just a slip up.
Kanari
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Kanari
Harrllowww again~
General mod with unsnapped timing points~

[General]
- Make sure to change the skin dimensions as I told you before~
- default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, and default-x.png are no longer used, so deletee them

[StraightBehind]
- Approach Rate +1
- Your spacing is wayy off ;w; But anyway, try 0.8 for this diff, your gunna have to change the spacing between each note anyway~
And use Distance Snap!
- Sider velocity is sorta high for an easy diff.
- You have unsnapped timing points at the following:
SPOILER
00:26:162
00:26:717
00:42:162
00:42:384
00:43:717
00:43:939
00:45:051
00:45:273
00:48:162
00:48:384
00:50:606
00:51:273
01:05:939
01:12:828
01:13:051
01:13:273
01:20:384
01:42:828
01:43:717
01:47:051
02:17:051

[RightBehind]
- Apporach Rate +3
- Watch your spacing~
- Slider velocity... ermmm... I guess its alright..
- Unsnapped timing points on:
SPOILER
00:21:717
00:23:051
00:26:162
00:26:717
00:27:273
00:27:384
00:29:939
00:30:051
00:32:606
00:33:717
00:36:828
00:42:162
00:42:384
00:43:717
00:43:939
00:45:051
00:45:273
00:48:162
00:48:384
00:50:606
00:51:273
00:51:606
01:05:939
01:12:828
01:13:051
01:13:273
01:20:384
01:34:384
01:34:606
01:34:828
01:35:717
01:37:051
01:39:273
01:40:162
01:42:162
01:42:399
01:42:828
01:43:717
01:45:495
01:45:717
01:46:162
01:47:051
02:17:051

[LeftBehind]
- HP Drain Rate +2
- Overall Difficulty + 2
- Fix the spacing for this diff as well~
- Timing points need to be snapped at:
SPOILER
00:21:162
00:22:606
00:23:273
00:23:939
00:24:606
00:25:051
00:26:162
00:26:828
00:27:495
00:28:162
00:28:606
00:29:051
00:29:495
00:30:162
00:30:384
00:31:051
00:31:384
00:32:384
00:32:606
00:33:273
00:33:495
00:34:162
00:35:273
00:35:717
00:35:939
00:36:717
00:36:939
00:37:051
00:37:273
00:37:495
00:38:162
00:38:384
00:41:051
00:41:495
00:41:939
00:42:606
00:43:495
00:43:717
00:44:384
00:44:828
00:45:495
00:46:162
00:46:384
00:46:828
00:47:051
00:47:273
00:48:606
00:48:828
00:50:162
00:50:606
00:51:717
00:57:051
00:57:939
01:04:162
01:04:384
01:04:606
01:04:828
01:06:384
01:06:606
01:33:051
01:33:498
01:37:495
01:37:717
01:39:051
01:39:717
01:40:384
01:41:051
01:41:717
01:42:606
01:43:273
01:43:495
01:43:939
01:44:162
01:45:051
01:45:273
01:45:717
01:46:384
01:47:051
01:48:051
01:48:828
01:49:717
01:49:939
01:50:273
01:50:828
01:51:051
01:51:495
01:52:162
01:52:606
01:53:495
01:53:939
01:57:051
01:57:939
01:58:384
01:59:051
01:59:717
02:00:162
02:02:606
02:14:828
02:50:853
Reed R Gale
120 posts
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Topic Starter
Reed R Gale
Ughhhh I don't wanna snappp themmmmmm takes so long.... AUGHHHHH

[translation]

I'll get to it but I'm a lazy fuck.

ANYWAY ONWARDS

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Harrllowww again~
General mod with unsnapped timing points~

[General]
- Make sure to change the skin dimensions as I told you before~ I'm waiting to see if I can get away with it. If a BAT tells me they don't work they don't, but so far as I know, the logic behind it is if it isn't distracting and it's functional, then it works. If a BAT or MAT says it's a no no, it's a no no, but until then...
- default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, and default-x.png are no longer used, so deletee them All gone! Totally my bad. xD

[StraightBehind]
- Approach Rate +1 Nah, it stays at the lowest.
- Your spacing is wayy off ;w; But anyway, try 0.8 for this diff, your gunna have to change the spacing between each note anyway~
And use Distance Snap! But... but... I did... I used 0.7x
- Sider velocity is sorta high for an easy diff. But it functions, so it's okay.
- You have unsnapped timing points at the following:
SPOILER
00:26:162
00:26:717
00:42:162
00:42:384
00:43:717
00:43:939
00:45:051
00:45:273
00:48:162
00:48:384
00:50:606
00:51:273
01:05:939
01:12:828
01:13:051
01:13:273
01:20:384
01:42:828
01:43:717
01:47:051
02:17:051

oaisndfoisbndfoisabdofigasbgoabfgoadifgbaoidfgd I don't wanna deal with thoseeeeeeee. I'll get to them, but they are LOW priority.

[RightBehind]
- Apporach Rate +3 Mmk, sounds reasonable.
- Watch your spacing~ I will strain my eyes doings so, sir!
- Slider velocity... ermmm... I guess its alright..
- Unsnapped timing points on:
SPOILER
00:21:717
00:23:051
00:26:162
00:26:717
00:27:273
00:27:384
00:29:939
00:30:051
00:32:606
00:33:717
00:36:828
00:42:162
00:42:384
00:43:717
00:43:939
00:45:051
00:45:273
00:48:162
00:48:384
00:50:606
00:51:273
00:51:606
01:05:939
01:12:828
01:13:051
01:13:273
01:20:384
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01:34:606
01:34:828
01:35:717
01:37:051
01:39:273
01:40:162
01:42:162
01:42:399
01:42:828
01:43:717
01:45:495
01:45:717
01:46:162
01:47:051
02:17:051

I am foaming from the mouth. Good thing that doesn't affect my typing.

[LeftBehind]
- HP Drain Rate +2
- Overall Difficulty + 2 I have made these changes before, and I won't do them, they make the map nigh impossible.
- Fix the spacing for this diff as well~ No.
- Timing points need to be snapped at:
SPOILER
00:21:162
00:22:606
00:23:273
00:23:939
00:24:606
00:25:051
00:26:162
00:26:828
00:27:495
00:28:162
00:28:606
00:29:051
00:29:495
00:30:162
00:30:384
00:31:051
00:31:384
00:32:384
00:32:606
00:33:273
00:33:495
00:34:162
00:35:273
00:35:717
00:35:939
00:36:717
00:36:939
00:37:051
00:37:273
00:37:495
00:38:162
00:38:384
00:41:051
00:41:495
00:41:939
00:42:606
00:43:495
00:43:717
00:44:384
00:44:828
00:45:495
00:46:162
00:46:384
00:46:828
00:47:051
00:47:273
00:48:606
00:48:828
00:50:162
00:50:606
00:51:717
00:57:051
00:57:939
01:04:162
01:04:384
01:04:606
01:04:828
01:06:384
01:06:606
01:33:051
01:33:498
01:37:495
01:37:717
01:39:051
01:39:717
01:40:384
01:41:051
01:41:717
01:42:606
01:43:273
01:43:495
01:43:939
01:44:162
01:45:051
01:45:273
01:45:717
01:46:384
01:47:051
01:48:051
01:48:828
01:49:717
01:49:939
01:50:273
01:50:828
01:51:051
01:51:495
01:52:162
01:52:606
01:53:495
01:53:939
01:57:051
01:57:939
01:58:384
01:59:051
01:59:717
02:00:162
02:02:606
02:14:828
02:50:853
I wish I could autosnap timing points just like hits...

Thanks for the mod again. I dunno if I'm allowed to star you again, but I will anyway. Thanks!
Kanari
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Kanari
LOOL For LeftBehind, you really should change the spacing, its placed closer then it really is for example: 00:09:960 (2) http://puu.sh/pxVw
The spacing should be something like this: http://puu.sh/pxWQ
Reed R Gale
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Topic Starter
Reed R Gale
To me, if it plays well, that's the important part. Very few people care about stats as long as the map plays well, and ultimately, that's the point, right? I think it's fine as is.
Garven
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Just peeked at this since it's torinoko city and Lon.

Comments on the skin: Honestly, having phrases as the hitbursts is plain strange. Also very hard to read while playing. The grey color scheme in general is rather difficult to see - especially against the video.

Combo burst is way too wide. Find another image, please.

The star2.png is really fugly when kiai is active. And when they appear for combo bursts.

Strange that you have a kanji in the center of the cursor when everything else is in English characters.

The black text is difficulty to see against the video and the BG. Might be cooler if you could do a blue text with white glow like in the video.

Poked at [LeftBehind] and a couple of comments here too:

Your rhythms used really don't match the song very well.
Rhythms such as 00:14:404 (5) - and 00:15:737 (8,9,1) - aren't anywhere in the music at all and leads to an awkward rhythmic transition to three long sliders that don't really feel like they're going with anything.

02:45:293 (1) - Sounds really weird since the sliderslide sound changes after the repeat.

03:19:071 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Fade these more aggressively. Also, all that new combo spam is meh. Messes with the HP drain to boot. Keep 'em in sets of 4 or 8.

Hitsounds in general during non-chorus felt quiet.

[StraightBehind]'s AR is waaay too slow compared to the amount of overlaps going on. Makes it much more difficult to follow.
Reed R Gale
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Topic Starter
Reed R Gale

Garven wrote:

Just peeked at this since it's torinoko city and Lon. Tank ye~

Comments on the skin: Honestly, having phrases as the hitbursts is plain strange. Also very hard to read while playing. The grey color scheme in general is rather difficult to see - especially against the video. I like them, honestly. But I'll apply your later advice. I'll change the color scheme to match the video... and as it turns out, it looks bad. I'll change it back. As per policy if I get three more complaints I'll change it.

Combo burst is way too wide. Find another image, please. Darn. Too bad.

The star2.png is really fugly when kiai is active. And when they appear for combo bursts. Really? I'll see if I get more complaints I kinda like it.

Strange that you have a kanji in the center of the cursor when everything else is in English characters. It is. I need another center point. Maybe I'll just go without.

The black text is difficulty to see against the video and the BG. Might be cooler if you could do a blue text with white glow like in the video. Once I'm done with the SB I'll go over it again and edit all the text, I like this idea. :D

Poked at [LeftBehind] and a couple of comments here too:

Your rhythms used really don't match the song very well.
Rhythms such as 00:14:404 (5) - and 00:15:737 (8,9,1) - aren't anywhere in the music at all and leads to an awkward rhythmic transition to three long sliders that don't really feel like they're going with anything. My favorite maps are the same way. So I'll disagree with you here.

02:45:293 (1) - Sounds really weird since the sliderslide sound changes after the repeat. Edited.

03:19:071 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Fade these more aggressively. Also, all that new combo spam is meh. Messes with the HP drain to boot. Keep 'em in sets of 4 or 8. Sigh. I've gotten three complaints. I'll change it.

Hitsounds in general during non-chorus felt quiet. Oh? I'll look into that. Yeah you're right. I'll change them to 65% when I get the chance.

[StraightBehind]'s AR is waaay too slow compared to the amount of overlaps going on. Makes it much more difficult to follow. I guess I'll +2 it then.
Thank you very much :D
Garven
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The problem with having phrases as the hitbursts is that it's difficulty to discern whether you got a 300, 100, or 50. A single word would do wonders, though honestly keeping in the same spirit of 300, 100, 50, and X would be preferred if you look at it from a gameplay standpoint. These would be fine for the end-of-combo bursts, but not the regular ones.
Reed R Gale
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Topic Starter
Reed R Gale
Hmmmm... If I must. But I don't really want to...

And no. If I were to go the standard way, i would simply go full standard. It would just look weird if not everything were in suit.
Garven
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With that logic, the default skin that mimics the original game is also weird. It just uses Japanese instead of English.
Reed R Gale
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Not sure I get what'cha mean. Are we still talking about my map? xD

Man now I feel I'm missing another something glaring in my face...
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