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Wing of wonderful journey - Wing of Dreams

posted 2008-09-16T10:47:22+00:00

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al2e10

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al2e10 2008-09-18T13:33:54+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年1月10日 at 下午 05:15:26

Artist: Wing of wonderful journey
Title: Wing of Dreams
BPM: 88
Filesize: 6735kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:

Step 1 (2.65 stars, 122 notes)
Step 2 (3.99 stars, 254 notes)
Step 3 (4.42 stars, 290 notes)

Download: Wing of wonderful journey - Wing of Dreams
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please Gave Me Some Opinion!!

I have change a lot of step 1 .

Please gave me some poinion~

kingcobra52

Think you to give me all opinion~
But I have something are not understand~
So I try me best^^

James

Think you to help me^^

Think You for :

kingcobra52
James
MaxwellDemon
m980

Last edited by al2e10 2009-01-12T11:55:47+00:00, edited 64 times in total.

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-09-19T13:51:08+00:00

CAN YOU GIVE ME SOME Opinion

kingcobra52

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kingcobra52 2008-09-22T13:44:16+00:00

The name of the mp3 can't contain any foreign characters. You'll need to change the mp3 name to something else, then do a full submission.

Peace.

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-09-22T23:17:35+00:00

Thank You !!
I Will Change It.~

DawnII

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DawnII 2008-09-23T02:08:58+00:00

Your BPM was just about spot on. Here's my timing:

88 BPM/200 Offset

There are a few discrepancies with spacing you should go through and adjust with Distance Snap locked (on the right side of the editor). Just click on an already placed note and it will auto-adjust the distance it should be at.

Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda) [a-change].osu

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-09-26T14:52:35+00:00

Thank You!!!

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-09-27T08:15:12+00:00

have some one gave me some opinion?
please~!!!

hank_officer

Joined August 2008

hank_officer 2008-09-27T09:43:29+00:00

some distance of hit-circle or slider is not good.
adjust them so your map can be better.

keep going.

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-09-28T10:26:35+00:00

Thank You !!

Thank For Your Opinion!!

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-09-28T11:00:12+00:00

You can list out some timeming~
with "distance of hit-circle or slider is not good"

because i have some hit-circle or slider is beats time~~

hank_officer

Joined August 2008

hank_officer 2008-09-29T13:07:50+00:00

-- Step 1 --
these is was too close thereunder.
[00:36:336] (5) (6)
-- Step 2 --
these is was too close thereunder.
[00:55:086] (3) (4) (5)
-- Step 3 --
these is was too close thereunder.
[02:08:381] (1) (2)
[02:13:495] (1) (2)
[02:25:407] (1) (2)
these is was too far thereunder.
[00:46:222] (4) (5) (6)

just my comment.
not absolutely correct.

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-10-01T02:25:55+00:00

I have change it !!Thank you!!

have other change??~~
Gave me some opinion!!~!:D

PLEASE!!!!!!!

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-10-06T12:23:53+00:00

Have someone gave me a star~!??

K-S-O

Here since the beginning

K-S-O 2008-10-06T17:04:45+00:00

I find those one-second breaks to be rather unnecessary. Also, I've noticed the spacing is rather inconsistent. I'll point those out later when I find the time.

Other than those issues, I find this to be a pretty solid beatmap.

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-10-13T07:46:54+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

peppy

Here since the beginning

peppy 2008-10-13T09:37:47+00:00

Don't PM me.

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-10-13T10:33:08+00:00

You Don't Have Any Opinion~= =

James

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James 2008-10-15T08:33:46+00:00

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al2e10

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al2e10 2008-10-16T14:18:50+00:00

you are so nice!!^^
I will change it~~
Thing you
!!

I Have change it!!
See See??
Have other thing did I change?
Have other opinion

James

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James 2008-10-17T16:54:13+00:00

another batch of stuffs:

step1:
delete all other timing sections and...
01:46:562 - make a new timing section here, change the hitsound to "soft" and go to "timing setup panel" in "timing" tab, check the "inherit previous timing settings" at the upper left part of the panel.
02:26:109- same as above, but instead change the hitsound to "normal"
..after doing the two above, resnap all notes (timing menu > resnap all notes)

step2:
tickrate to 2
remove ALL the whistle hitsound starting at 02:35:654~END. whistle hitsound does not belong to this song

remove the last timing section, 03:01:904
03:00:881 - put a circle here.

step3:
resnap all notes

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-10-18T05:53:29+00:00

I Have Finash This^^

Thing you

James

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James 2008-10-18T22:23:37+00:00

its "thank you" not "thing you"
or does it have another meaning for it?

anyways,
last one. i overlooked/heard these last time..
step1: remove the whistle hitsound at the last part too...
step3: are you SURE that you snapped all notes here?
(go to timing menu > resnap all notes, and DOUBLE CHECK the whole map.)

al2e10

Joined August 2008

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al2e10 2008-10-18T22:27:15+00:00

James wrote:
its "thank you" not "thing you"
or does it have another meaning for it?

anyways,
last one. i overlooked/heard these last time..
step1: remove the whistle hitsound at the last part too...
step3: are you SURE that you snapped all notes here?
(go to timing menu > resnap all notes, and DOUBLE CHECK the whole map.)

I Have Change It ^^
"thank you"^^

James

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James 2008-10-19T23:44:56+00:00

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al2e10

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al2e10 2008-10-19T23:45:42+00:00

OK^^

James

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James 2008-10-20T03:50:19+00:00

all difficulties:
remove all timing sections for hitsounds, use 19301 offset, then put all timing sections for hitsounds back, and resnap all notes.

step3:
set tickrate to 2, current tickrate doesnt sound good.

Alace

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Alace 2008-10-20T04:27:46+00:00

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al2e10

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al2e10 2008-10-27T13:59:04+00:00

多謝你~
我會改的!!^^
thank you!!
i will　change!!
I have Change

James

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James 2008-10-28T07:55:38+00:00

all good for me~

James gained 6xp~

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-10-28T23:10:14+00:00

This Is My First Song Give Someone RANK^^
Thank You !!
James!!

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James

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James 2008-10-31T09:49:57+00:00

Rank.

And First.

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-11-05T09:36:25+00:00

Have someone can rank my song?

m980

Elite Mapper

Here since the beginning

m980 2008-11-10T10:03:20+00:00

Step 1
Resnap
00:24:06 (2) - Move closer to 1, then move 3 closer to 2, then 4 closer to 3. and make sure spacing is even.
00:32:92 (2) - Move this abit to the left
00:40:42 (3) - Move this abit down.
00:52:01 (1,2,3) - Put these closer to eachother.
01:23:38 (4) - Move this abit down.
01:26:10 (4) - Move closer to 3.
02:41:44 (3) - Move this down so that is in right inbetween 2,4.
02:49:28 (2) - Move abit to the left.

Step 2
Resnap
Change slider tick rate to 2 or 4.
01:30:54 (4,5) - Move these away from 3.
02:27:47 (2) - Move just a little bit away from 1.

Step 3
This isn't snapped properly. Resnap.
00:53:22 (4) - Move abit away from 3.
01:09:03 (2) - Move abit down.
02:08:35 (1) - Move abit up.
02:09:54 (4) - Move away from the end of 3.
02:14:14 (3) - Move closer to 2.
02:36:30 (2) - Move abit to the right.
02:57:44 (3,4,5) - Spread these out.

These were all spacing inconsistencies except for the fact that they weren't snapped properly.

Jeez. Who bubbled this.

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-11-11T06:26:39+00:00

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MaxwellDemon

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MaxwellDemon 2008-12-10T20:48:40+00:00

I am not gonna nazi about the beatspacing too much, but here we go... On a side note, I don't really agree with the claps in this song, but eh, your choice.

Step 2:
01:47:25 (2,3) - Talk about misleading with beatspacing. :O

Step 3:
Er... this isn't snapped? :/
01:05:32 (x) - Break?
02:22:49 (1) - Start 1/4th earlier, end at same time though
02:23:69 (3) - Don't get what is this mapped to? D:

Other than that, pretty nice... no bubble yet though. XD

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-12-11T11:47:22+00:00

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al2e10

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al2e10 2008-12-17T11:44:13+00:00

Can someone give me some opinion??

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-12-23T01:09:42+00:00

have some one can rank me ??

kingcobra52

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kingcobra52 2008-12-23T06:14:38+00:00

2nd offset: 66,391
3rd offset: 106,572
4th offset: 155,662

Step 1

01:48:60 (1) - Place farther from 3. Distance snap accordingly.

Step 2

Put a break after 02:29:86 (1).

Step 3

Looks fine.

Also, when you make map in the future, use grid level 3 for best results.

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-12-23T09:44:52+00:00

I have change it ~~^^

think you kingcobra52

Loginer

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Loginer 2008-12-24T01:26:03+00:00

Step 2 and 3 look pretty good to me, but there are some problems with the spacing in Step 1 (for example, the distance between 02:39:071 and 02:39:752. Pro-tip: Always use distance snap when beatmapping. You'll never have to move a beat again.

lukewarmholiday

Joined June 2008

lukewarmholiday 2008-12-24T01:33:46+00:00

Loginer wrote:
Step 2 and 3 look pretty good to me, but there are some problems with the spacing in Step 1 (for example, the distance between 02:39:071 and 02:39:752. Pro-tip: Always use distance snap when beatmapping. You'll never have to move a beat again.

HOLY SHIT LOGINER MODS

kingcobra52

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kingcobra52 2008-12-24T01:55:21+00:00

Loginer wrote:
Step 2 and 3 look pretty good to me, but there are some problems with the spacing in Step 1 (for example, the distance between 02:39:071 and 02:39:752. Pro-tip: Always use distance snap when beatmapping. You'll never have to move a beat again.

Even considering he's using grid level 1?

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-12-24T01:56:14+00:00

Think you!!

lukewarmholiday and Loginer

I have change it ~

But I don't know where have problem = =

Can you list the problem??

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-12-25T00:42:45+00:00

grid level 1?

I think is okey~~

Bet what do you think??

kingcobra52

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kingcobra52 2008-12-26T05:04:53+00:00

All you did was change the offset. You need to resnap and recheck afterwards.

You also still need to fix the issues i noted above with step 1 and step 2.

Peace.

al2e10

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al2e10 2008-12-26T13:17:54+00:00

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al2e10

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al2e10 2009-01-06T10:33:18+00:00

I Have Change The Step 1. (All is change)
And some step 2 and 3.

Step 3 (I change 02:00 before . And the after I have not change.)^^
Step 2 is the same~

kingcobra52

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kingcobra52 2009-01-06T15:32:34+00:00

...Wow my offsets are off ><

Since you're just changing the sounds,do this on all difficulties:

1. Go into the timing setup panel.

2. Hold Ctrl and select all 4 timing sections.

3. Check "Inherit previous timing settings"

4. Click Apply.

Afterwards, You will need to resnap and recheck your notes again.

al2e10

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al2e10 2009-01-07T09:21:29+00:00

I have change^^

Thank you!!

You can see see the first pg.

and I think....

this is my first time to try my best to finash~

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