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Suara - Musouka

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phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月3日 at 16:17:44

Artist: Suara
Title: Musouka (TV size)
Source: Utawarerumono
BPM: 134
Filesize: 1273kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.73 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Insane (4.97 stars, 234 notes)
  3. Normal (2.97 stars, 97 notes)
Download: Suara - Musouka (TV size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please give mod and ster to me.

The person who can make the
music score of the drum is being recruited.

Utawarerumono...

Done! :D
Last edited by phonic , edited 72 times in total.
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Artist is wrong. It should be Suara. Utawarerumono goes in source.
taNa_Coppola
169 posts
Joined August 2009
taNa_Coppola
:)
momoyo_old
1 post
Joined October 2010
momoyo_old
ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
sexy-voice
3 posts
Joined December 2010
sexy-voice
(´・ω・｀)
Kentoo_old
5 posts
Joined March 2011
Kentoo_old
(´・ω・｀)
MuoooN
3 posts
Joined May 2011
MuoooN
(´・ω・｀)ｂ
itigosama
4 posts
Joined June 2010
itigosama
( ﾟДﾟ)
Linn
57 posts
Joined April 2010
Linn
im having problems downloading this map ;<
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Give kudosu only to those posts that are helpful to your map. And no, just starring is not helping.

Also, I also have problems downloading this map. Try full uploading.
amritan
5 posts
Joined November 2010
amritan
:)
- Suima -
- Suima -
It's better that the speed of slider changed so many times.
You can try my method to make beatmap.

While singer is singing~ I make point.
sentence1:︱︱︱︱︱—︱︱︱︱—︱———
1 ...........子供の.........頃の夢......は
sentence2:︱︱︱︱︱︱—︱︱︱—︱︱—
2............色...褪せない....落書..... きね

straight means singing
horizontal means long
You can find more example in my beatmap (Taiko) .
Hope it can help you.
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By the way. I don't know what you said in reply.
Sorry for my bad English. If you don't what I said, just send me a PM.
Endy Mion
6 posts
Joined October 2010
Endy Mion
good
Aeven
69 posts
Joined April 2010
Aeven
nice!
Rigeru_old
426 posts
Joined January 2009
Rigeru_old
赤は直した方がいい、黄色はただの意見です　＼(^o^)／

Distancesnapを使って配置を見なおしてみてください。　→　http://gowwwgowww.blog129.fc2.com/blog-category-6.html

Utawarerumono　を　source　に追加

easyはレート3以下が望ましいです。

insaneの遅いスライダーは曲にあってないような気がします

01:13:706 (2) - ここの無音はいらないかもしれません

star
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
I like this song~
Rigeru_old
426 posts
Joined January 2009
Rigeru_old
Insane

00:05:423 (2) - スライダーを1grid伸ばす
00:06:990 (6) - ３連打のスペーシングがおかしいのですがdistancesnap使ってますか？
00:30:945 (2)~(4) - スペーシング
00:39:450 (5) - newcombo
00:57:363 (6) - newcombo
01:02:288 (1)~(3) - スペーシング
01:17:960 (3) - newcombo

Hard

ちょっと難しすぎます、まずリズムを簡単にしてdistancesnapを使って配置してください。

Normal
rankedを目指すならレート3.0以下にしてください
白線重視で置くといいかも、これもdistancesnapを使って配置してください。
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
Long post orz (things in green are only suggestions)

[General]
mp3
  1. Open the folder of the map.
  2. You have two mp3 here. Remove the one with strange characters, that is "éñé¢éÝéÛéÚéÓé¦ü|û¦æzë¦.mp3"
  3. Rename the remaining mp3 from ".mp3" to "Suara - Musouka.mp3"

osu/osb files
  1. Open .osu file.
  2. Now change the "AudioFileName" field in "Suara - Musouka.mp3" (see code under spoilerbox).
    SPOILER
    Change from
    osu file format v9

    [General]
    AudioFilename: .mp3
    to 
    osu file format v9

    [General]
    AudioFilename: Suara - Musouka.mp3
  3. Do it for all diffs.
  1. Remove this file: Utawarerumono - Musouka (Elize).osb
After all these things, do a full-submission.


Now you must change the title of the map from "Suara - Musouka (TV size)" to "Suara - Musouka (TV Size)", that is you must put the "s" capitalized.
Since you had already changed the title one time, I assume that you know how to do it.
Btw, if you are unsure read this guide.
Once fixed, you must full-submit.


video
  1. Please consider to add a video. I can find it for you if you want add it.


NOTE: This is only a general mod.
[Normal]
00:01:841 (1) - End this slider at 00:02:288 - and move 2 grid up (Grid size level 3).
00:02:736 (2) - Move the slider and fix the waypoint like the image (waypoint are the little white squares on the slider)
SPOILER
00:14:826 (1) - Move this at 00:15:049 -. I also suggest to end it at 00:16:169 -
00:27:363 (2) - Spacing. This beat is too far from 00:26:020 (1) - I suggest to move 3 grid down and 6 left.
00:28:706 (4) - Move to 00:28:482 -?
00:33:184 (1) - Remove 2 repeat, Move to 00:33:408 - and extend like the image:
SPOILER
00:31:841 (4) - Spacing.
00:34:527 (3) - End this slider at 00:35:870 -
00:39:452 (5) - Add a repeat?
00:44:378 (1) - Spacing. Too close to 00:42:139 (4) -
00:48:408 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing.
01:04:303 (4,5) - Move to 01:04:079 -
01:11:020 (2) - Move to 01:10:796 -
01:17:512 (2) - Extend at 01:18:408 -
01:19:303 (1) - Move to 01:19:527 -


The main problem of your mapset is the inconsistent spacing.
To fix it I suggest to use AImod, that can be used by pressing CTRL+SHIFT+A on the editor.
If you have any problem with my mod, feel free to find me in-game and ask ;)

No star for now.

S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
:) My noob modding :

[Easy] AR might be higher

[Hard] AR might be higher,6 at least.
00:04:303 (5,6) - wrong position
00:05:423 (2) - wrong distance
00:38:109 (5) - remove

[Insane]
01:13:035 (1,2) - remove, 5連打 instead. I give the example : http://puu.sh/2rwN
01:18:855 (3,4) - remove, they would spoil the rythem
01:25:572 (2) - remove, put one note on the following red line

Nice song, star~
MileiyHrmirlt
35 posts
Joined June 2010
MileiyHrmirlt
チャットで話したmodは無事修正できたようですね。
他にもなにかあればいつでも聞きますよー。
Ayeen_old
316 posts
Joined October 2010
Ayeen_old
Translate my mod to japanese if anyone can.
BPM : 134. 09
Offset 84
Snap all notes after changing the BPM and offset

Normal:
Lower down the Slider Velocity.
00:15:049 Ugly slider. Try this:
SPOILER
use grid level 2 for that
00:37:661 (2,3,4)- Spacing. Use constant spacing on normal (0.8)
00:39:005 (4) ugly slider
00:59:094 (7,1) make this slider symmetry
00:56:467 (3,4) spacing inconsistent
01:20:646 ( Spinner) silence spinner
Last edited by Ayeen_old , edited 1 time in total.
romchan67
71 posts
Joined May 2011
romchan67
nice
Opan_old
10 posts
Joined February 2011
Opan_old
nice
Kentoo_old
5 posts
Joined March 2011
Kentoo_old
good
YaMaO04
214 posts
Joined June 2010
YaMaO04
:)
makeamove
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
makeamove
I like it ^^.
KayeSara
KayeSara
nice songs~like suara's music and some style similar to this~ :)
Miu Matsuoka
662 posts
Joined May 2008
Miu Matsuoka
Star~
RIP95
28 posts
Joined January 2011
RIP95
Star~
DesuEagle
49 posts
Joined April 2010
DesuEagle
Cool! Star
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
Bla bla ~ My mod here ~ >~</

Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.

[General]
●Raise your MP3 quality plz.Currently 96 kbps , you should have a 128 kbps or higher MP3.
●Delete osb file as it's useless.Then do a full-submit.
●1.5 sec Leadin-time I guess.
●Fix your forum subject.

[Normal]
00:01:841 (1,3) - Ugly ._.
00:09:452 (2,3,4,5) - Not recommend in the easiest diff.
00:26:020 (1) - Starting at 00:26:242 will be better.
00:33:408 (1,2) - Very confused.
01:00:273 (3) - I suggest not overlap here.
01:18:408 (4) - Sounds bad ._.

[Hard]
00:03:184 (2) - Sounds terrible here..
00:14:826 (1) - End at 00:16:169.
00:49:079 (2) - Ugly.....
00:59:602 (4,1) - Confusing spacing.
01:02:736 (3) - Ugly.
01:11:467 (6) - ^ ...
01:15:497 (3) - Not fit to both vocal and rhythm.

[Insane]
01:25:796 (1) - Mute this spinner or reduce the vol step by step.

Sorry I suck at hitsound.But I'm sure they need more effort.

Star~ >w</
HolylaN_old
12 posts
Joined March 2011
HolylaN_old
GOOD :)
Suzoku
186 posts
Joined November 2010
Suzoku
STAR :D
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Revoked a bunch of kudosu here. Please only give kudosu when a helpful post is given.

kudosuは助けるのpost.

"star"も ”8-) ”　X

悪い日本語、ごめんなさい

Edit: *facepalm*
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
上の方から念の為にもう一度通訳でと頼まれたので書きますね。
Kudosu は その譜面にアドバイス、もしくは何かしらお手伝いしていただいた方にのみあげるシステムです (´◉ω◉｀)

星を投げただけや、ただの書き込みには押す必要はありませんです。
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
Hi.

[Insane]:
  1. 00:04:975 (1) - Move this note to 00:05:199, sounds much better.
  2. 00:15:049 (1) - This is unrankable because you can't hear it. Raise the volume on the timing sections so you can hear this slider.
  3. 00:18:855 (1) - Start this slider at 00:18:632 instead (but leave the endpoint the same).
  4. 01:19:527 (1,2) - Unrankable, also because they are silenced. Raise the volume.


[Hard]:
  1. 00:03:184 (2) - This is very startling, I suggest you keep the same volume here.
  2. 00:14:826 (1) - End this spinner at 00:16:169.
  3. 00:43:035 (3) - Fix the spacing a little, 1 grid left. It doesn't look confusing but it looks bad.
  4. 00:51:878 - Delete this timing section, it's completely unnecessary.
  5. 01:20:199 (1) - This spinner makes no sense, delete it and add 3 notes at 01:20:199, 01:20:423, and 01:20:646 instead, the spinner would be too short to end at the proper time.
[Normal]:
  1. Your difficulty settings are way off. You can't use AR1, hpdrain 1 and OD1 for a "Normal", that's just not good. Use AR4, OD3 and HPdrain 3 or something. Also reduce the slider velocity, 1.50 seems quite fast, use 1.20 for example.
  2. 00:05:870 (3) - This note is too close to (2). Use distance snap for this combo, also reduce the spacing a little, it's too big for a normal difficulty.
  3. 00:30:049 (1,2,3) - Fix the distances, use distance snap.
  4. 01:18:408 (4) - Uh, delete this and use something else here. It sounds way off. Try this instead. Notice how I repositioned the spinner as well, because the spinner is off as well.
Suggestions
Okay here's some suggestions you might consider. First of all, insane is overmapped and it doesn't really fit the song. By this, I mean you have triplets in an "empty" space. 00:03:296 (5), 00:07:102 (7), etc. are examples. They sound bad, especially with Normal sound set. What you should do is remove notes like this. If the Insane is too easy, that's just fine if it fits the song, there is nothing wrong with an easier map done right, rather than a harder map done wrong. Instead, where you should use such triplets are moments like this: 00:11:020 - 00:11:243. Can you hear the voice changing fast? This is an awesome spot for a triplet, also use soft hitsounds for it.
Next, you're just mapping white ticks, that's kinda boring. Try to be more creative, listen to the background of the music, if you can hear some faint rhythms or something, that would add spice to your map and would be much more fun to play.
I won't comment on hard, but for normal, you should completely remap it if you can. As it is now, it's just not right, sliders are too fast, notes seem random and the spacing is too big.
These are only the suggestions though, it's up to you how you take them.

That's about it.
Good luck with your map!
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
faito~ :)
otaru-soad
50 posts
Joined August 2009
otaru-soad
good 8-)
J i n t a n_old
2 posts
Joined July 2011
J i n t a n_old
star :idea:
Ruka-03
2 posts
Joined February 2011
Ruka-03
:) good!
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
General
mp3 with 96kbps is unrankable atm.try to find with 128kbps as example.
Capitilize "s" in title, " Musouka (TV Size) ".
Make name of topic like your artist/title in game.
Audio file without name? D: " .mp3" is working, but... oh, nevermind.
Set audio lead-in 0.5 or 1 sec in all diffs, because player has ~2 sec.
White color is not recommended, but okay.
One of your diffs must have less than 3 stars. I guess you could make your normal a bit easier.
Make end of kiai time in all diffs at 01:20:646.
Add "ending" or "opening" (I don't know what is it) to the tags in all diffs.
Your offset looks a bit off, it must be 1846 (yours +15ms). Change it in all diffs + resnap all notes

Insane
HP -1 (too high)
00:04:527 (7) - remove note
Use claps constantly, at this moment, claps sounds randomly and weird.
Claps

Finishes are usually placed at high white ticks.
00:39:229 (x) - add note
00:48:967 (4) - remove note
00:49:079 (5) - imo, must be :
SPOILER
01:18:408 (2) - add whistle to the end
01:23:221 (5,6) - remove 2 notes

Hard
AR -1 (too high, like in Insane), OD +1 (too low)
Claps suggestion, like in Insane

Normal
OD +3 , AR +4 , because AR 0 and OD 0 used never, especially in Normals :D
check AImod, you have some distance problems + make this diff easier (under 3 stars). Or add Easy.
WeisCrahe
82 posts
Joined March 2011
WeisCrahe
star~ :)



My pending beatmap
SPOILER
Ikakakakaka!
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/32402
stiss
69 posts
Joined July 2009
stiss
mod&star ~:)

-normal-
song setup
HP AR OD Those three+3

00:09:229 slider star point change 0:09:452
00:26:020 space check
00:39:497 1grid down
00:50:192 1gird down
01:04:303 and 01:04:751 circle delete 　　
It will be easy for the beginner to do.

-hard-
song setup
HP+1 AR-1or2 OD+1

00:08:557 round trip　slider delete . single slider is recommended.
00:25:572 new combo delete

Hard was a very good map.

-insane-
song setup
HP-1

00:04:751 and 00:04:975 add circle . Otherwise, it becomes not Insane but a Hard+.
00:13:706 add circle or slider. Please think.
00:17:906 add circle
00:18:408 Please take the point and do shape well a little more.
00:19:303 Please add something.
00:30:273 will stop slider.
00:33:855 It is not suitable for the rhythm. Please do other methods.
00:54:124 add circle

Please review the sound in the latter half.
sirokuro123
sirokuro123
star :)

thank you give me nice map :D

this map is good map !

fight ;)
friendok
127 posts
Joined September 2010
friendok
私は木、それがその後、私は非常に恐ろしい持ってスターに変身してスターのために家に帰ってきた後、そこにいたある日歩いていた
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
hi~

General
mp3 without name lol
Del 2 osb files
For future use distance spacing 1.0x (not 0.8x)
Snap kiai on all diffs 00:51:990 - 01:20:646

Normal
00:09:229 (2) - move to 00:09:452
00:09:900 (3) - remove and you will have this ↓↓↓ i think it better
SPOILER

01:04:751 - need a note
00:51:094 (1) - remove NC (new combo)
01:04:975 (1) - ^

Hard
More symmetry/o/
00:05:870 (3) - 1 grid up
00:06:094 (4,5) - 1 grid up and 1 left
00:23:781 (3,4) - look like spacing error
00:29:602 (9,1) - ^
01:05:423 (2) - add finish
01:05:870 - make soft section
01:18:408 (2) - clap
01:06:318 (1) - remove finish
01:09:452 - add note with clap
01:15:497 (6,7,8,9) - More symmetry/o/

Insane
00:04:527 (7) - move to 00:04:975?
00:18:408 (5) - More symmetry/o/
Try improve your map self. I think after all these suggestion it will easier. Good Luck!
Shael_old
Shael_old
staaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar

Star this map! (does not use kudosu) Star this map! (does not use kudosu)Star this map! (does not use kudosu)
kriles
3 posts
Joined July 2011
kriles
-
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Dino99
1,830 posts
Joined May 2011
Dino99
very good~~~~~
i think it will be rankd~~~~~
but i think the insane last spinner is from 125.796 to 129.378:))
good luck~~~~!!!!!!!
:)
:)
:) star~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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