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Bla bla ~ My mod here ~ >~</
Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
●Raise your MP3 quality plz.Currently 96 kbps , you should have a 128 kbps or higher MP3.
●Delete osb file as it's useless.Then do a full-submit.
●1.5 sec Leadin-time I guess.
●Fix your forum subject.
[Normal]
00:01:841 (1,3) - Ugly ._.
00:09:452 (2,3,4,5) - Not recommend in the easiest diff.
00:26:020 (1) - Starting at 00:26:242 will be better.
00:33:408 (1,2) - Very confused.
01:00:273 (3) - I suggest not overlap here.
01:18:408 (4) - Sounds bad ._.
[Hard]
00:03:184 (2) - Sounds terrible here..
00:14:826 (1) - End at 00:16:169.
00:49:079 (2) - Ugly.....
00:59:602 (4,1) - Confusing spacing.
01:02:736 (3) - Ugly.
01:11:467 (6) - ^ ...
01:15:497 (3) - Not fit to both vocal and rhythm.
[Insane]
01:25:796 (1) - Mute this spinner or reduce the vol step by step.
Sorry I suck at hitsound.But I'm sure they need more effort.
Star~ >w</
Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
●Raise your MP3 quality plz.Currently 96 kbps , you should have a 128 kbps or higher MP3.
●Delete osb file as it's useless.Then do a full-submit.
●1.5 sec Leadin-time I guess.
●Fix your forum subject.
[Normal]
00:01:841 (1,3) - Ugly ._.
00:09:452 (2,3,4,5) - Not recommend in the easiest diff.
00:26:020 (1) - Starting at 00:26:242 will be better.
00:33:408 (1,2) - Very confused.
01:00:273 (3) - I suggest not overlap here.
01:18:408 (4) - Sounds bad ._.
[Hard]
00:03:184 (2) - Sounds terrible here..
00:14:826 (1) - End at 00:16:169.
00:49:079 (2) - Ugly.....
00:59:602 (4,1) - Confusing spacing.
01:02:736 (3) - Ugly.
01:11:467 (6) - ^ ...
01:15:497 (3) - Not fit to both vocal and rhythm.
[Insane]
01:25:796 (1) - Mute this spinner or reduce the vol step by step.
Sorry I suck at hitsound.But I'm sure they need more effort.
Star~ >w</
GOOD 
Revoked a bunch of kudosu here. Please only give kudosu when a helpful post is given.
kudosuは助けるのpost.
"star"も ”8-) ” X
悪い日本語、ごめんなさい
Edit: *facepalm*
kudosuは助けるのpost.
"star"も ”8-) ” X
悪い日本語、ごめんなさい
Edit: *facepalm*
上の方から念の為にもう一度通訳でと頼まれたので書きますね。
Kudosu は その譜面にアドバイス、もしくは何かしらお手伝いしていただいた方にのみあげるシステムです (´◉ω◉｀)
星を投げただけや、ただの書き込みには押す必要はありませんです。
Kudosu は その譜面にアドバイス、もしくは何かしらお手伝いしていただいた方にのみあげるシステムです (´◉ω◉｀)
星を投げただけや、ただの書き込みには押す必要はありませんです。
Hi.
[Insane]:
[Hard]:
That's about it.
Good luck with your map!
[Insane]:
- 00:04:975 (1) - Move this note to 00:05:199, sounds much better.
- 00:15:049 (1) - This is unrankable because you can't hear it. Raise the volume on the timing sections so you can hear this slider.
- 00:18:855 (1) - Start this slider at 00:18:632 instead (but leave the endpoint the same).
- 01:19:527 (1,2) - Unrankable, also because they are silenced. Raise the volume.
[Hard]:
- 00:03:184 (2) - This is very startling, I suggest you keep the same volume here.
- 00:14:826 (1) - End this spinner at 00:16:169.
- 00:43:035 (3) - Fix the spacing a little, 1 grid left. It doesn't look confusing but it looks bad.
- 00:51:878 - Delete this timing section, it's completely unnecessary.
- 01:20:199 (1) - This spinner makes no sense, delete it and add 3 notes at 01:20:199, 01:20:423, and 01:20:646 instead, the spinner would be too short to end at the proper time.
- Your difficulty settings are way off. You can't use AR1, hpdrain 1 and OD1 for a "Normal", that's just not good. Use AR4, OD3 and HPdrain 3 or something. Also reduce the slider velocity, 1.50 seems quite fast, use 1.20 for example.
- 00:05:870 (3) - This note is too close to (2). Use distance snap for this combo, also reduce the spacing a little, it's too big for a normal difficulty.
- 00:30:049 (1,2,3) - Fix the distances, use distance snap.
- 01:18:408 (4) - Uh, delete this and use something else here. It sounds way off. Try this instead. Notice how I repositioned the spinner as well, because the spinner is off as well.
Suggestions
Okay here's some suggestions you might consider. First of all, insane is overmapped and it doesn't really fit the song. By this, I mean you have triplets in an "empty" space. 00:03:296 (5), 00:07:102 (7), etc. are examples. They sound bad, especially with Normal sound set. What you should do is remove notes like this. If the Insane is too easy, that's just fine if it fits the song, there is nothing wrong with an easier map done right, rather than a harder map done wrong. Instead, where you should use such triplets are moments like this: 00:11:020 - 00:11:243. Can you hear the voice changing fast? This is an awesome spot for a triplet, also use soft hitsounds for it.
Next, you're just mapping white ticks, that's kinda boring. Try to be more creative, listen to the background of the music, if you can hear some faint rhythms or something, that would add spice to your map and would be much more fun to play.
I won't comment on hard, but for normal, you should completely remap it if you can. As it is now, it's just not right, sliders are too fast, notes seem random and the spacing is too big.
These are only the suggestions though, it's up to you how you take them.
Next, you're just mapping white ticks, that's kinda boring. Try to be more creative, listen to the background of the music, if you can hear some faint rhythms or something, that would add spice to your map and would be much more fun to play.
I won't comment on hard, but for normal, you should completely remap it if you can. As it is now, it's just not right, sliders are too fast, notes seem random and the spacing is too big.
These are only the suggestions though, it's up to you how you take them.
That's about it.
Good luck with your map!
faito~
good 
star 
General
mp3 with 96kbps is unrankable atm.try to find with 128kbps as example.
Capitilize "s" in title, " Musouka (TV Size) ".
Make name of topic like your artist/title in game.
Audio file without name? D: " .mp3" is working, but... oh, nevermind.
Set audio lead-in 0.5 or 1 sec in all diffs, because player has ~2 sec.
White color is not recommended, but okay.
One of your diffs must have less than 3 stars. I guess you could make your normal a bit easier.
Make end of kiai time in all diffs at 01:20:646.
Add "ending" or "opening" (I don't know what is it) to the tags in all diffs.
Your offset looks a bit off, it must be 1846 (yours +15ms). Change it in all diffs + resnap all notes
Insane
HP -1 (too high)
00:04:527 (7) - remove note
Use claps constantly, at this moment, claps sounds randomly and weird.
00:48:967 (4) - remove note
00:49:079 (5) - imo, must be : 01:18:408 (2) - add whistle to the end
01:23:221 (5,6) - remove 2 notes
Hard
AR -1 (too high, like in Insane), OD +1 (too low)
Claps suggestion, like in Insane
Normal
OD +3 , AR +4 , because AR 0 and OD 0 used never, especially in Normals
check AImod, you have some distance problems + make this diff easier (under 3 stars). Or add Easy.
mp3 with 96kbps is unrankable atm.try to find with 128kbps as example.
Capitilize "s" in title, " Musouka (TV Size) ".
Make name of topic like your artist/title in game.
Audio file without name? D: " .mp3" is working, but... oh, nevermind.
Set audio lead-in 0.5 or 1 sec in all diffs, because player has ~2 sec.
White color is not recommended, but okay.
One of your diffs must have less than 3 stars. I guess you could make your normal a bit easier.
Make end of kiai time in all diffs at 01:20:646.
Add "ending" or "opening" (I don't know what is it) to the tags in all diffs.
Your offset looks a bit off, it must be 1846 (yours +15ms). Change it in all diffs + resnap all notes
Insane
HP -1 (too high)
00:04:527 (7) - remove note
Use claps constantly, at this moment, claps sounds randomly and weird.
Claps
Finishes are usually placed at high white ticks.
00:39:229 (x) - add noteFinishes are usually placed at high white ticks.
00:48:967 (4) - remove note
00:49:079 (5) - imo, must be : 01:18:408 (2) - add whistle to the end
01:23:221 (5,6) - remove 2 notes
Hard
AR -1 (too high, like in Insane), OD +1 (too low)
Claps suggestion, like in Insane
Normal
OD +3 , AR +4 , because AR 0 and OD 0 used never, especially in Normals
check AImod, you have some distance problems + make this diff easier (under 3 stars). Or add Easy.
mod&star ~:)
-normal-
song setup
HP AR OD Those three+3
00:09:229 slider star point change 0:09:452
00:26:020 space check
00:39:497 1grid down
00:50:192 1gird down
01:04:303 and 01:04:751 circle delete
It will be easy for the beginner to do.
-hard-
song setup
HP+1 AR-1or2 OD+1
00:08:557 round trip slider delete . single slider is recommended.
00:25:572 new combo delete
Hard was a very good map.
-insane-
song setup
HP-1
00:04:751 and 00:04:975 add circle . Otherwise, it becomes not Insane but a Hard+.
00:13:706 add circle or slider. Please think.
00:17:906 add circle
00:18:408 Please take the point and do shape well a little more.
00:19:303 Please add something.
00:30:273 will stop slider.
00:33:855 It is not suitable for the rhythm. Please do other methods.
00:54:124 add circle
Please review the sound in the latter half.
-normal-
song setup
HP AR OD Those three+3
00:09:229 slider star point change 0:09:452
00:26:020 space check
00:39:497 1grid down
00:50:192 1gird down
01:04:303 and 01:04:751 circle delete
It will be easy for the beginner to do.
-hard-
song setup
HP+1 AR-1or2 OD+1
00:08:557 round trip slider delete . single slider is recommended.
00:25:572 new combo delete
Hard was a very good map.
-insane-
song setup
HP-1
00:04:751 and 00:04:975 add circle . Otherwise, it becomes not Insane but a Hard+.
00:13:706 add circle or slider. Please think.
00:17:906 add circle
00:18:408 Please take the point and do shape well a little more.
00:19:303 Please add something.
00:30:273 will stop slider.
00:33:855 It is not suitable for the rhythm. Please do other methods.
00:54:124 add circle
Please review the sound in the latter half.
私は木、それがその後、私は非常に恐ろしい持ってスターに変身してスターのために家に帰ってきた後、そこにいたある日歩いていた
hi~
General
mp3 without name lol
Del 2 osb files
For future use distance spacing 1.0x (not 0.8x)
Snap kiai on all diffs 00:51:990 - 01:20:646
Normal
00:09:229 (2) - move to 00:09:452
00:09:900 (3) - remove and you will have this ↓↓↓ i think it better
01:04:751 - need a note
00:51:094 (1) - remove NC (new combo)
01:04:975 (1) - ^
Hard
More symmetry/o/
00:05:870 (3) - 1 grid up
00:06:094 (4,5) - 1 grid up and 1 left
00:23:781 (3,4) - look like spacing error
00:29:602 (9,1) - ^
01:05:423 (2) - add finish
01:05:870 - make soft section
01:18:408 (2) - clap
01:06:318 (1) - remove finish
01:09:452 - add note with clap
01:15:497 (6,7,8,9) - More symmetry/o/
Insane
00:04:527 (7) - move to 00:04:975?
00:18:408 (5) - More symmetry/o/
Try improve your map self. I think after all these suggestion it will easier. Good Luck!
General
mp3 without name lol
Del 2 osb files
For future use distance spacing 1.0x (not 0.8x)
Snap kiai on all diffs 00:51:990 - 01:20:646
Normal
00:09:229 (2) - move to 00:09:452
00:09:900 (3) - remove and you will have this ↓↓↓ i think it better
01:04:751 - need a note
00:51:094 (1) - remove NC (new combo)
01:04:975 (1) - ^
Hard
More symmetry/o/
00:05:870 (3) - 1 grid up
00:06:094 (4,5) - 1 grid up and 1 left
00:23:781 (3,4) - look like spacing error
00:29:602 (9,1) - ^
01:05:423 (2) - add finish
01:05:870 - make soft section
01:18:408 (2) - clap
01:06:318 (1) - remove finish
01:09:452 - add note with clap
01:15:497 (6,7,8,9) - More symmetry/o/
Insane
00:04:527 (7) - move to 00:04:975?
00:18:408 (5) - More symmetry/o/
Try improve your map self. I think after all these suggestion it will easier. Good Luck!
Shael_old
very good~~~~~
i think it will be rankd~~~~~
but i think the insane last spinner is from 125.796 to 129.378:))
good luck~~~~!!!!!!!
star~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
i think it will be rankd~~~~~
but i think the insane last spinner is from 125.796 to 129.378:))
good luck~~~~!!!!!!!
star~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~