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Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora

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lkp
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lkp
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月13日 at 下午 07:54:46

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: Hishoku no Sora
Source: Shakugan no Shana
Tags: koko6162006 Muya Lunet S_o_r_d_a
BPM: 169
Filesize: 6529kb
Play Time: 03:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Frantic (4.89 stars, 581 notes)
  2. Koko's Taiko (4.78 stars, 1399 notes)
  3. Lunety (4.14 stars, 319 notes)
  4. Muya's Hard (4.85 stars, 585 notes)
  5. S o r d a's Easy (2.01 stars, 187 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th map
Shana~Lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalala
enjoy xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Change the map3.Please redownload if you have this before 9/5
Thanks for kioukiou's mp3 file,S o r d a's Easy,koko's Taiko,Lunet's Nomal and Muya's Hard :DDDDD

pending~
Last edited by lkp , edited 57 times in total.
Muya
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Muya
I make Hard?
lkp
270 posts
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Topic Starter
lkp

Muya wrote:

I make Hard?
ok,you may start now~
Rusty
170 posts
Joined April 2009
Rusty
cooool :)
Kotone
2,402 posts
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Kotone
:D
swish
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swish
8-)
Orgol
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Orgol
:arrow:
Madoka_old
131 posts
Joined January 2010
Madoka_old
:D
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
:oops:

Download: Mami Kawada - Hishoku no Sora (lkp) [Muya's Hard].osu
aesopl19193
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Joined March 2009
aesopl19193

Muya wrote:

:oops:
Moe Map! :)
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
打了两遍感觉不错XD 所以来打星
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
update

Download: Mami Kawada - Hishoku no Sora (lkp) [Muya's Hard].osu
Roddie
osu! Alumni
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Joined June 2009
Roddie
Irc modding on the Frantic difficulty.

Nicely done, man! :)

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!
koko6162006
141 posts
Joined April 2010
koko6162006
The new verison ;)

Download: Mami Kawada - Hishoku no Sora (lkp) [Koko's Taiko].osu
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol
Sorry for very very wait you :o

Download: Mami Kawada - Hishoku no Sora (lkp) [Lunet].osu
Rare
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Joined August 2010
Rare
nice map~
Suzully
osu! Alumni
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Suzully
:!:
lovhin456
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Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Heeey ~ Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Try these colors
Combo1 : 90,95,126
Combo2 : 220,35,35
Combo3 : 234,126,30

Lunet;
- I don't really like your hitsound placing, it sounds random
- To all the green timing sections that have 100% volume, lower them to 90% or 80%, because some claps and finishes sound too loud
- 00:06:936 >> Remove whistle, add finish
- 00:08:001 >> Remove the repeat and extend to the white tick
- 00:42:439 >> The repeat is covered with (2)s hitburts a little, I don't know if it is alright
- 01:03:031 >> Too soon after the spinner, shorten the spinner so it ends at the previous white tick
- 01:03:741 >> New combo and finish at start
- 01:05:161 >> New combo
- 01:52:025 >> Too soon after a spinner
- 02:05:516 (6~1) >> Spacing, a jump isn't a nice idea
- 02:48:119 >> Remove a repeat and extend to the white tick
- 03:05:161 >> Too soon after a spinner
- 03:07:646 (1,2,3) >> Spacing
- 03:16:522 >> Too soon after a spinner
- 03:27:883 >> ^
- 03:36:403 (3,4) >> I think these are unnecessary, delete them
- 03:37:113 >> Move to the previous tick

Muya's Hard;
- 01:28:948 >> Add a note
- Really nice diff Muya

Frantic;
- 02:14:747 >> Delete
- 02:40:309 >> I don't think a kiai fountain here makes sense
- 02:51:610 >> I don't know about this fountain meh
- You have some pretty difficult patterns, there are even difficult for my eyes to follow them !! But I guess is okk since this is Insane

* Star ~
MeLLoN
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Joined July 2009
MeLLoN
:)
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Hey.

Is it for approval? I haven't noticed anything about it in description.
If it's pending ranking,then you need to make easier difficulty,cause Lunet isn't easy enough.

[Lunet]
Why soft hitsounds? They don't fit this song at all.

Hitsounds are way random..
00:29:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Absolutely nothing here,and then 00:36:403 (4,5,6) - 3 claps in a row all of a sudden.
I think it'd be better if you use them to keep/create some rhytm.

So now I can't really mod hitsounds,cause everything looks wrong to me,sorry.

01:42:084 (5,6,7,8) - It's kinda out of rhytm and lyrics. Try this:
1)Move 01:42:439 (6) - to 01:42:261.
2) Then add a note at 01:42:616.
3) Then remove both 01:42:794 (7,8)
4) Finally add 2 notes at 01:42:971 and 01:43:149.

02:00:545 (4) - Repeat should be at 02:01:256.
02:05:871 (1) - Huh,jump? Fix distance please.
02:17:764 (x) - This break is over 20 seconds. I'm not sure if it's rankable.
02:50:250 (6) - Move to 02:50:086?

[Muya]
01:23:622 (1) - Finish?
02:11:906 (2) - ^
02:40:309 (9) - Whistle?
03:37:113 (1) - Finish?

Nice one.

[Frantic]
00:59:658 (3) - Stack with 00:58:770 (3)?
01:00:900 (1) - Finish?
01:10:664 (1) - ^
01:22:025 (1) - ^
01:26:463 (1) - ^
01:54:865 (1) - ^
02:04:628 (4) - ^
02:48:119 (1) - Reverse-arrow is almost invisible.

Interesting square-spaced jumps.

Nice mapset,star.
koko6162006
141 posts
Joined April 2010
koko6162006
I changed something ;)

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Koi no Shirushi (Madoka) [Koko's Taiko].osu
Last edited by koko6162006 , edited 1 time in total.
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol

lovhin456 wrote:

Lunet;
- I don't really like your hitsound placing, it sounds random
- To all the green timing sections that have 100% volume, lower them to 90% or 80%, because some claps and finishes sound too loud fixed
- 00:06:936 >> Remove whistle, add finish fixed
- 00:08:001 >> Remove the repeat and extend to the white tick ?
- 00:42:439 >> The repeat is covered with (2)s hitburts a little, I don't know if it is alright fixed
- 01:03:031 >> Too soon after the spinner, shorten the spinner so it ends at the previous white tick fixed
- 01:03:741 >> New combo and finish at start fixed
- 01:05:161 >> New combo fixed
- 01:52:025 >> Too soon after a spinner fixed
- 02:05:516 (6~1) >> Spacing, a jump isn't a nice idea bit changed
- 02:48:119 >> Remove a repeat and extend to the white tick ?
- 03:05:161 >> Too soon after a spinner fixed
- 03:07:646 (1,2,3) >> Spacing fixed
- 03:16:522 >> Too soon after a spinner fixed
- 03:27:883 >> ^ fixed
- 03:36:403 (3,4) >> I think these are unnecessary, delete them ?
- 03:37:113 >> Move to the previous tick ?

IceBeam wrote:

[Lunet]
Why soft hitsounds? They don't fit this song at all. changed to Normal hitsounds

Hitsounds are way random..
00:29:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Absolutely nothing here,and then 00:36:403 (4,5,6) - 3 claps in a row all of a sudden.
I think it'd be better if you use them to keep/create some rhytm.bit changed~

So now I can't really mod hitsounds,cause everything looks wrong to me,sorry.

01:42:084 (5,6,7,8) - It's kinda out of rhytm and lyrics. Try this:
1)Move 01:42:439 (6) - to 01:42:261.
2) Then add a note at 01:42:616.
3) Then remove both 01:42:794 (7,8)
4) Finally add 2 notes at 01:42:971 and 01:43:149. not kinda out of rhythm,I think.
02:00:545 (4) - Repeat should be at 02:01:256. bit changed~
02:05:871 (1) - Huh,jump? Fix distance please.Fixed
02:17:764 (x) - This break is over 20 seconds. I'm not sure if it's rankable.ok~ =~=
02:50:250 (6) - Move to 02:50:086? ?
Thank you for modding~ :arrow:

Download: Mami Kawada - Hishoku no Sora (lkp) [Lunet].osu
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
感觉不错，没什么可说的。。

直接star~

再附加个pink star~

Lunet的hitsound应该再调整一下。。
S o r d a
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S o r d a
:p
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
Hi~

一点建议:

[General]


  • 我看到了两个osb文件…
    如果要Rank的话需要个Easy（需要的话我给你做个 :D
    Normal和太鼓难度的Stack Leniency和另外两个的不一样
[Lunet]


  • 00:42:794 (4): The reverse arrow is covered by the “hit300”
    00:48:474 (5): Remove this finish
    01:03:741 (1): Add finish to the beginning
    01:29:303 (7): Finish
    02:00:545 (4,1): Too close
    02:14:924 (1): Spinner starts here
    02:25:398 (4): Add finish to the end
    02:44:924 (6): Move to 02:45:279
    02:50:960 : Add a circle
    03:05:871 (2): Add finish and start Kiai Time here
    03:28:593 (4): Add finish to the beginning
    03:44:924 (1): Add whistle to the beginning
    03:51:315 (1): Add finish
[Muya’s Hard]
Great diff :D I love your style~

  • 00:45:812 (6): The reverse arrow is covered by the “hit300”
    01:00:900 (1): Add finish to the beginning
    01:26:463 (2): ^
    01:40:664 (1): Remove whistle at the beginning
    02:11:906 (2): Add finish to the beginning
    02:35:871 (3): This finish hitsound sounds strange
    02:40:309 : Kiai Time here is unnecessary
    03:37:113 (1): Add finish to the beginning
[Hard]


  • 00:33:208 (1,2,1): 间距有点混乱 :o
    01:45:989 (1,2): …这也太措手不及了 建议拖近点
    01:54:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8): 有点难辨认
    02:48:474 (1): 这个箭头被前面note的“hit300”d挡住了
Good map~

星+星 :D
lkp
270 posts
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Topic Starter
lkp

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

一点建议:

[General]


  • 我看到了两个osb文件…
    如果要Rank的话需要个Easy（需要的话我给你做个 :D
    Normal和太鼓难度的Stack Leniency和另外两个的不一样
    對不起,有人在弄了t^t
[Lunet]


  • 00:42:794 (4): The reverse arrow is covered by the “hit300”
    00:48:474 (5): Remove this finish
    01:03:741 (1): Add finish to the beginning
    01:29:303 (7): Finish
    02:00:545 (4,1): Too close
    02:14:924 (1): Spinner starts here
    02:25:398 (4): Add finish to the end
    02:44:924 (6): Move to 02:45:279
    02:50:960 : Add a circle
    03:05:871 (2): Add finish and start Kiai Time here
    03:28:593 (4): Add finish to the beginning
    03:44:924 (1): Add whistle to the beginning
    03:51:315 (1): Add finish
[Muya’s Hard]
Great diff :D I love your style~

  • 00:45:812 (6): The reverse arrow is covered by the “hit300”
    01:00:900 (1): Add finish to the beginning
    01:26:463 (2): ^
    01:40:664 (1): Remove whistle at the beginning
    02:11:906 (2): Add finish to the beginning
    02:35:871 (3): This finish hitsound sounds strange
    02:40:309 : Kiai Time here is unnecessary
    03:37:113 (1): Add finish to the beginning
[Hard]


  • 00:33:208 (1,2,1): 间距有点混乱 :o
    01:45:989 (1,2): …这也太措手不及了 建议拖近点
    01:54:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8): 有点难辨认
    02:48:474 (1): 这个箭头被前面note的“hit300”d挡住了
Good map~

星+星 :D
我等等fix :D
Ulysses
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Ulysses
nice map,,star^^
S o r d a
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S o r d a
Done.

Add tags s_o_r_d_a sorda Please~>~</

Download: Kawada Mami - Hishoku no Sora (lkp) [S o r d a's Easy].osu
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
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NoHitter
General
Change source to Shakugan no Shana. All other ranked maps use it instead of Shana of the Blazing Eyes.

S o r d a's Easy
02:02:498 (1) - Not too sure about this start at an offbeat. Though it does follow the vocals.
02:56:640 (1) - Shorten by 1/1?
02:59:480 (2) - New combo? Or move this further?
03:05:161 (x) - Start third kiai at 03:05:871 instead?
03:27:883 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. Move the spinner back?

Lunet
Maybe rename this Lunet's Normal?

00:38:179 (4,5,6,7) - Perhaps not make these overlap? They don't look so good.
01:15:102 (4) - Unstack this?
01:27:883 (6) - Looks ugly and plays weirdly. Remove?
02:00:545 (4) - ^
02:02:676 (1) - Don't anti-jump this?
03:05:161 (x) - Start third kiai at 03:05:871 instead?

Muya's Hard
Very nice. A Solid difficulty.

Frantic
Not a fan of spacing changes like that, but I guess fair enough.

00:33:563 (1) - I was kind of expecting this to form a triangle with the same distance between 00:33:208 (1,2).
01:00:013 (2) - This note is hard to see. It's being concealed by the hitbursts of 00:59:480 (2,3).
01:50:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern here is very confusing. I suggest to remove it. The less spacing every even to odd combo note.
01:54:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Confusing too. The cluster of notes makes it hard to figure out that every note is is evenly spaced in timeline.
02:30:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same with 01:50:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6).
02:40:309 (x) - Is this fountain intentional?
net45291
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DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
IRC modded.

Bubbled
Muya
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Muya
-Frantic-
  1. 01:58:238 (2,3) - WTF
lkp
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Topic Starter
lkp

Muya wrote:

-Frantic-
  1. 01:58:238 (2,3) - WTF
Oh Shi*
Still not change
Modder please notice it t^t
KSHR
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KSHR
;)
Muya
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Muya
and..

please delete "soft-hitclap.wav" orz
I hate this hitsound
lkp
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lkp

Muya wrote:

and..

please delete "soft-hitclap.wav" orz
I hate this hitsound
Just DJPop tell me to add it
However,even if you want,I'll do it
DJPop
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DJPop

Muya wrote:

and..

please delete "soft-hitclap.wav" orz
I hate this hitsound
Non-custom soft-hitclaps are sounds weird for me :<
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Bubbled.
whymeman
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whymeman
Need to do a quick pop before someone makes an overlooked mistake....

I've noticed [Koko's Taiko] has 1,264 ms for the offset and the other difficulties at 1,256 ms. Please make sure to get that corrected. Also, you have two .osb files in the song folder & an unused Taiko BG. Make sure to deal with that as well.
lkp
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Topic Starter
lkp
all fixed.
whymeman
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whymeman
Alright then, bubbled.
wmfchris
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wmfchris
sorry for late.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
-Removed the silenced timing sections that didn't make much sense in [Easy].

Ranked!
S o r d a
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S o r d a
grats~ :oops:
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
MP3 quality horrible.

And..
02:33:918 (2,1) - WTF this in Frantic diff.
Gabi
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Gabi
hehe, a shame that the hitburst overlaps the return slider, not sure if BATs think that it's a big enough issue to unrank, however if this does get unranked, i suggest finding a new mp3 or steal kioukiou's mp3 from this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/3535 :P ( i think kioukiou will let you have it )
Beuchi
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Beuchi

ykcarrot wrote:

02:33:918 (2,1) - WTF this in Frantic diff.
Yeah, I'm sorry but hidden reverse arrows are hidden ;~;

I'm unranking the map, sorry for the inconveniences. I don't really know what's the issue with the mp3 quality so I'll ask around... Catch me in-game whenever you can so we can discuss about it, ok?

Again sorry for this :c
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost

Still ranked for me?
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Try refreshing scores? The scores present in the map is at 0, and everything seems to be consistent to an Unranked map, at least online in the BSS.
Andrea
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Andrea
Moved back to Pending Beatmaps.
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