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Irobun - Hata Futte Parade

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causticsugar
61 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
causticsugar
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 12, 2011 at 9:30:18 PM

Artist: Irobun
Title: Hata Futte Parade
Source: NicoNicoVideo
Tags: axis powers world series hetalia belgium animelover1432 celeste76 Mint Bunny
BPM: 131
Filesize: 11832kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fun Parade (3.32 stars, 192 notes)
  2. Celeste's Parade (4.59 stars, 306 notes)
  3. Mint's Parade (4.78 stars, 286 notes)
Download: Irobun - Hata Futte Parade
Download: Irobun - Hata Futte Parade (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Open for business >w<
(Sort of. I'm grounded from the computer, so it's not as open as it was...)

This is my FIRST MAP! Yay~

I hope it's better by now ^^;

Notice*April 12/2011*: I changed the title of the beatmap, so a lot of things fricked up. But I think it's all better now~ Sorry for the VERY BIG technical difficulties -aims gun at my head-
Last edited by causticsugar , edited 27 times in total.
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hi, and sorry for delay..

Soft Parade
00:24:819 (7) - New combo
00:29:237 (1) - Delete New combo
00:29:695 (1) - ^
00:30:153 (2) - New combo
01:04:504 (2) - Move 1 Grid left

Celeste76's Parade
00:32:213 (6,7) - Space better.. Like making (6) a line with (4)
01:10:916 (5) - New combo
01:17:786 (8) - Stack with end of (7)

Sweet Song~
I guess it's your first.. "submitted" map? lol
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny
CICI-CHAN I FINISHED :D
why did you change map description? ;w;Download: Irobun - Hatte Futte Parade (sasuke24684) [Animelover's Parade].osu
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
Heya~

[Generall]

The .osb file's are useless delete both and full sub
Your bg size should be 800x600 or 1024x768


[Soft Parade]

00:08:168 (5) - Add finish?
00:10:000 (1) - ^
00:22:825 (2) - Remove whistle
00:26:489 (6) - Add finish
00:26:947 (1) - Remove finish
00:27:863 (3) - ^
00:29:695 (7) - Add finish
00:32:901 (1) - Pretty short :(
00:52:596 (1,2,3,4) - Looks bad..
01:01:756 (5) - Add finish at the end and remove whistle at the end
01:03:588 (1,2) - Remove finish and add clap
01:08:397 (2,3,4) - Unstack
01:25:115 (7) - Add finish at the end
01:27:863 (1,2) - Stack it in the center
01:36:107 (5) - Add finish
01:39:771 (6) - ^
02:42:061 (6) - ^
02:42:749 (1) - Remove

[Celeste76's Parade]

I can only say try to remap the map with an higher distanc snap.. :roll:
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
I'll wait with moddings after You'll fix what lennox wrote^^ Let me know on PM when You'll do that;)
Mastodonio
1,120 posts
Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
Don't forget,that your background pictures must have size 800x600 or 1024x768

Soft Parade:
00:25:115 - 1 grid right
00:27:863 - 1 grid up
00:28:321 - 1 grid up
01:08:397 - I think it is better to delete this circle
01:10:229 - delete this circle too
01:23:970 - delete this circle
01:58:550 - 1 grid left


Celeste76's Parade:
00:06:794 - I think it is better to change this slider - make it symmetrical.
By the way,I don't know why,but on 'Soft Parade' difficulty your first KIAI mod starts in: 00:12:291 and ends in :00:33:817. And on this difficulty it starts in: 00:12:290 and ends in: 00:33:816 :) and you have the same problem with the second KIAI mod - there is not the same time. You have to make the same time ;)
00:15:267 - add a circle?
00:17:786 - 1 grid left
00:23:969 - make this slider symmetrical
00:32:900 - add here a circle
00:43:893 - add a circle
00:48:129 - delete this circle
00:48:244 - delete this circle
02:20:534 - 02:21:908 - these sliders are not rhytmical. delete them and put there circles

That is all! Star!
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny
The .osb file's are useless delete both and full sub
I think i told you this, but MATS and BATS arent gonna care bout this anymore.
(add my diff already D:)
causticsugar
61 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
causticsugar

lennox989 wrote:

[Generall]

The .osb file's are useless delete both and full sub As Mint says, MATS and BATS don't really care about this, and the last time my sis deleted an .osb, her map itself deleted. I'm sorry, but I ain't going to risk it :|
Your bg size should be 800x600 or 1024x768 Done, thank you~


[Soft Parade]

00:08:168 (5) - Add finish? Done~
00:10:000 (1) - ^ Done~
00:22:825 (2) - Remove whistle Done~
00:26:489 (6) - Add finish Done~
00:26:947 (1) - Remove finish Done~
00:27:863 (3) - ^ Done~
00:29:695 (7) - Add finish Done~
00:32:901 (1) - Pretty short :( Sorry, but I think it's fine, and there is a break right after ^^;
00:52:596 (1,2,3,4) - Looks bad.. Done~
01:01:756 (5) - Add finish at the end and remove whistle at the end Done~
01:03:588 (1,2) - Remove finish and add clap Done~
01:08:397 (2,3,4) - Unstack Done~
01:25:115 (7) - Add finish at the end Done~
01:27:863 (1,2) - Stack it in the center Done~
01:36:107 (5) - Add finish Done~
01:39:771 (6) - ^ Done~
02:42:061 (6) - ^ Done~
02:42:749 (1) - Remove Remove it? I like it :?
Wow, so many stupid mistakes I didn't notice before xD
causticsugar
61 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
causticsugar

Giorgos wrote:

Don't forget,that your background pictures must have size 800x600 or 1024x768 Did that in the other mod. Thanks for reminding me though xD

Soft Parade:
00:25:115 - 1 grid right Done~
00:27:863 - 1 grid up Done~
00:28:321 - 1 grid up Done~
01:08:397 - I think it is better to delete this circle I like this though. Sorry, it sounds better.
01:10:229 - delete this circle too ^
01:23:970 - delete this circle Done~ (Might as well listen to this piece of advice if I'm ditching the others ^^;
01:58:550 - 1 grid left Done~
Kay kay, thank you.
causticsugar
61 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
causticsugar

animelover1432 wrote:

(add my diff already D:)
Ahh, sorry! I thought I already did this xD
Added~
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Celeste76

Giorgos wrote:

Celeste76's Parade:
00:06:794 - I think it is better to change this slider - make it symmetrical. Done
By the way,I don't know why,but on 'Soft Parade' difficulty your first KIAI mod starts in: 00:12:291 and ends in :00:33:817. And on this difficulty it starts in: 00:12:290 and ends in: 00:33:816 :) and you have the same problem with the second KIAI mod - there is not the same time. You have to make the same time ;) They're the same.
00:15:267 - add a circle? Done
00:17:786 - 1 grid left Done
00:23:969 - make this slider symmetrical Done
00:32:900 - add here a circle No thank you.
00:43:893 - add a circle No thank you.
00:48:129 - delete this circle Done
00:48:244 - delete this circle No thank you.
02:20:534 - 02:21:908 - these sliders are not rhytmical. delete them and put there circlesNo thank you.
CapnDavid
141 posts
Joined March 2010
CapnDavid
Can't do mod but I can at least put a star. :D
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[general]
two osb. files in your.osz, delete one of them.
"continue", "Retry" and "back" in pausing screen is pretty foggy, try to make it clearer? (e.g. glowing effect?)
Tag animelover1432

[Mini's Parade]
00:31:985 (5,6) - spacing
00:33:130 (1,2,3,4) - make a parallelogram
00:47:100 (1,2,3,4,) - ^
01:06:565 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
01:09:084 (1,...) - maybe delete this combo for break?
01:13:665 (5) - up 1 grid
01:29:466 (x) - break
02:14:810 (8) - left 1 grid
02:24:199 (11) - NC

[Celeste's Parade]
00:17:186 (1,2,3,4) - make a square (make sure it's vertical and horizontal and in even spacing)
00:22:824 (10) - right 1 grid looks better
00:25:114 (1,2,3,4) - square
01:16:412 (7,8) - stack properly
02:05:878 (1,2) - looks weird

[Soft Parade]
00:08:168 (5,6) - right 1 grid
00:!5:497 (2) - left 2 grids
00:57:176 (3) - left 1 grid
01:25:115 (6) - up 1 grid

star~
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny

wmfchris wrote:

[Mini's Parade]
00:31:985 (5,6) - spacing
00:33:130 (1,2,3,4) - make a parallelogram
00:47:100 (1,2,3,4,) - ^
01:06:565 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
01:09:084 (1,...) - maybe delete this combo for break?
01:13:665 (5) - up 1 grid
01:29:466 (x) - break
02:14:810 (8) - left 1 grid
02:24:199 (11) - NC
all doneDownload: Irobun - Hatte Futte Parade (sasuke24684) [Mint's Parade].osu
causticsugar
61 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
causticsugar

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
two osb. files in your.osz, delete one of them. Kay kay~
"continue", "Retry" and "back" in pausing screen is pretty foggy, try to make it clearer? (e.g. glowing effect?)
...I don't have a 'continue', 'retry' or a 'back' button. Are you talking about the pause-bg? That's supposed to be a little foggy~

Tag animelover1432 Whoopsie! Done~

[Soft Parade]
00:08:168 (5,6) - right 1 grid Done~
00:!5:497 (2) - left 2 grids Done~
00:57:176 (3) - left 1 grid Done~
01:25:115 (6) - up 1 grid Done~
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
yeah, as a reuslt I just can't see the "continue" clearly
but this may be because of my own skin so it's ok lol
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi ~~ Hetalia !! Yay =w=

General;
- Everything's good here

Skin;
- Some of those are from my skin in my APH's map =w=;;
- Here~ Have some new skin elements an I also fixed some of your skin elements
Skin >> http://puu.sh/TYB

Soft Parade;
- You need a 3 or less star diff >w>
- Make curved slider they are better and more fun to play =w=;;
- 00:06:794 (2,3,4,5,6) >> Add whistle to (2,4) then try this pattern and also curve (6) like this
SPOILER
- 00:21:451 >> One grid right
- 00:30:153 >> No. Just, this is supposed to be the easiest diff, and you have a jump ?? Fix the spacing
- 00:32:901 >> Too short for easiest diff, try to replace with a slider
- 00:54:428 >> Make it more pretty, that means slider points symmetrical
- 01:54:428 >> Align with (5)
- 02:02:214 >> Easiest diff, no jumps, fix spacing
- 02:24:199 (1,2) >> Finish at start
- Check the spacing for "jumps" and fix it

Celeste's Parade;
- 00:26:488 >> One grid right
- 02:30:381 >> Ughh too short ;w;

Mint's Parade;
- End second kiai time on a note
- Umm, check your spacing on your jumps, when doing jumps I believe there has to be the same space between each jump

* Star ~
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny
doooooone

Download: Irobun - Hatte Futte Parade (sasuke24684) [Mint's Parade].osu
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Celeste76
Celeste's Parade;
- 00:26:488 >> One grid right Done~
- 02:30:381 >> Ughh too short ;w; I like it that way. Sorry ^^;
causticsugar
61 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
causticsugar

lovhin456 wrote:

Skin;
- Here~ Have some new skin elements an I also fixed some of your skin elements
Skin >> http://puu.sh/TYB OMG Thank you SO much! I feel so... honored xD

Soft Parade;
- You need a 3 or less star diff >w> Kay kay. Done~
- Make curved slider they are better and more fun to play =w=;; I'll try to do so~
- 00:06:794 (2,3,4,5,6) >> Add whistle to (2,4) then try this pattern and also curve (6)Done~
- 00:21:451 >> One grid right Done~
- 00:30:153 >> No. Just, this is supposed to be the easiest diff, and you have a jump ?? Fix the spacing Done~
- 00:32:901 >> Too short for easiest diff, try to replace with a slider Done~
- 00:54:428 >> Make it more pretty, that means slider points symmetrical Done~
- 01:54:428 >> Align with (5) Done~
- 02:02:214 >> Easiest diff, no jumps, fix spacing Done~
- 02:24:199 (1,2) >> Finish at start Done~
- Check the spacing for "jumps" and fix it Kay kay, from now on I'll look for those >.>
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