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Irobun - Hata Futte Parade

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causticsugar
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 12, 2011 at 9:30:18 PM

Artist: Irobun
Title: Hata Futte Parade
Source: NicoNicoVideo
Tags: axis powers world series hetalia belgium animelover1432 celeste76 Mint Bunny
BPM: 131
Filesize: 11832kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fun Parade (3.32 stars, 192 notes)
  2. Celeste's Parade (4.59 stars, 306 notes)
  3. Mint's Parade (4.78 stars, 286 notes)
Download: Irobun - Hata Futte Parade
Download: Irobun - Hata Futte Parade (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Open for business >w<
(Sort of. I'm grounded from the computer, so it's not as open as it was...)

This is my FIRST MAP! Yay~

I hope it's better by now ^^;

Notice*April 12/2011*: I changed the title of the beatmap, so a lot of things fricked up. But I think it's all better now~ Sorry for the VERY BIG technical difficulties -aims gun at my head-
Sonnyc
Hi, and sorry for delay..

Soft Parade
00:24:819 (7) - New combo
00:29:237 (1) - Delete New combo
00:29:695 (1) - ^
00:30:153 (2) - New combo
01:04:504 (2) - Move 1 Grid left

Celeste76's Parade
00:32:213 (6,7) - Space better.. Like making (6) a line with (4)
01:10:916 (5) - New combo
01:17:786 (8) - Stack with end of (7)

Sweet Song~
I guess it's your first.. "submitted" map? lol
Mint Bunny
CICI-CHAN I FINISHED :D
why did you change map description? ;w;Download: Irobun - Hatte Futte Parade (sasuke24684) [Animelover's Parade].osu
-Lennox-
Heya~

[Generall]

The .osb file's are useless delete both and full sub
Your bg size should be 800x600 or 1024x768


[Soft Parade]


00:08:168 (5) - Add finish?
00:10:000 (1) - ^
00:22:825 (2) - Remove whistle
00:26:489 (6) - Add finish
00:26:947 (1) - Remove finish
00:27:863 (3) - ^
00:29:695 (7) - Add finish
00:32:901 (1) - Pretty short :(
00:52:596 (1,2,3,4) - Looks bad..
01:01:756 (5) - Add finish at the end and remove whistle at the end
01:03:588 (1,2) - Remove finish and add clap
01:08:397 (2,3,4) - Unstack
01:25:115 (7) - Add finish at the end
01:27:863 (1,2) - Stack it in the center
01:36:107 (5) - Add finish
01:39:771 (6) - ^
02:42:061 (6) - ^
02:42:749 (1) - Remove

[Celeste76's Parade]

I can only say try to remap the map with an higher distanc snap.. :roll:
Yusu Aoi
I'll wait with moddings after You'll fix what lennox wrote^^ Let me know on PM when You'll do that;)
Mastodonio
Don't forget,that your background pictures must have size 800x600 or 1024x768

Soft Parade:
00:25:115 - 1 grid right
00:27:863 - 1 grid up
00:28:321 - 1 grid up
01:08:397 - I think it is better to delete this circle
01:10:229 - delete this circle too
01:23:970 - delete this circle
01:58:550 - 1 grid left


Celeste76's Parade:
00:06:794 - I think it is better to change this slider - make it symmetrical.
By the way,I don't know why,but on 'Soft Parade' difficulty your first KIAI mod starts in: 00:12:291 and ends in :00:33:817. And on this difficulty it starts in: 00:12:290 and ends in: 00:33:816 :) and you have the same problem with the second KIAI mod - there is not the same time. You have to make the same time ;)
00:15:267 - add a circle?
00:17:786 - 1 grid left
00:23:969 - make this slider symmetrical
00:32:900 - add here a circle
00:43:893 - add a circle
00:48:129 - delete this circle
00:48:244 - delete this circle
02:20:534 - 02:21:908 - these sliders are not rhytmical. delete them and put there circles

That is all! Star!
Mint Bunny
The .osb file's are useless delete both and full sub
I think i told you this, but MATS and BATS arent gonna care bout this anymore.
(add my diff already D:)
Topic Starter
causticsugar

lennox989 wrote:

[Generall]

The .osb file's are useless delete both and full sub As Mint says, MATS and BATS don't really care about this, and the last time my sis deleted an .osb, her map itself deleted. I'm sorry, but I ain't going to risk it :|
Your bg size should be 800x600 or 1024x768 Done, thank you~


[Soft Parade]


00:08:168 (5) - Add finish? Done~
00:10:000 (1) - ^ Done~
00:22:825 (2) - Remove whistle Done~
00:26:489 (6) - Add finish Done~
00:26:947 (1) - Remove finish Done~
00:27:863 (3) - ^ Done~
00:29:695 (7) - Add finish Done~
00:32:901 (1) - Pretty short :( Sorry, but I think it's fine, and there is a break right after ^^;
00:52:596 (1,2,3,4) - Looks bad.. Done~
01:01:756 (5) - Add finish at the end and remove whistle at the end Done~
01:03:588 (1,2) - Remove finish and add clap Done~
01:08:397 (2,3,4) - Unstack Done~
01:25:115 (7) - Add finish at the end Done~
01:27:863 (1,2) - Stack it in the center Done~
01:36:107 (5) - Add finish Done~
01:39:771 (6) - ^ Done~
02:42:061 (6) - ^ Done~
02:42:749 (1) - Remove Remove it? I like it :?
Wow, so many stupid mistakes I didn't notice before xD
Topic Starter
causticsugar

Giorgos wrote:

Don't forget,that your background pictures must have size 800x600 or 1024x768 Did that in the other mod. Thanks for reminding me though xD

Soft Parade:
00:25:115 - 1 grid right Done~
00:27:863 - 1 grid up Done~
00:28:321 - 1 grid up Done~
01:08:397 - I think it is better to delete this circle I like this though. Sorry, it sounds better.
01:10:229 - delete this circle too ^
01:23:970 - delete this circle Done~ (Might as well listen to this piece of advice if I'm ditching the others ^^;
01:58:550 - 1 grid left Done~
Kay kay, thank you.
Topic Starter
causticsugar

animelover1432 wrote:

(add my diff already D:)
Ahh, sorry! I thought I already did this xD
Added~
Celeste76

Giorgos wrote:

Celeste76's Parade:
00:06:794 - I think it is better to change this slider - make it symmetrical. Done
By the way,I don't know why,but on 'Soft Parade' difficulty your first KIAI mod starts in: 00:12:291 and ends in :00:33:817. And on this difficulty it starts in: 00:12:290 and ends in: 00:33:816 :) and you have the same problem with the second KIAI mod - there is not the same time. You have to make the same time ;) They're the same.
00:15:267 - add a circle? Done
00:17:786 - 1 grid left Done
00:23:969 - make this slider symmetrical Done
00:32:900 - add here a circle No thank you.
00:43:893 - add a circle No thank you.
00:48:129 - delete this circle Done
00:48:244 - delete this circle No thank you.
02:20:534 - 02:21:908 - these sliders are not rhytmical. delete them and put there circlesNo thank you.
CapnDavid
Can't do mod but I can at least put a star. :D
wmfchris
[general]
two osb. files in your.osz, delete one of them.
"continue", "Retry" and "back" in pausing screen is pretty foggy, try to make it clearer? (e.g. glowing effect?)
Tag animelover1432

[Mini's Parade]
00:31:985 (5,6) - spacing
00:33:130 (1,2,3,4) - make a parallelogram
00:47:100 (1,2,3,4,) - ^
01:06:565 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
01:09:084 (1,...) - maybe delete this combo for break?
01:13:665 (5) - up 1 grid
01:29:466 (x) - break
02:14:810 (8) - left 1 grid
02:24:199 (11) - NC

[Celeste's Parade]
00:17:186 (1,2,3,4) - make a square (make sure it's vertical and horizontal and in even spacing)
00:22:824 (10) - right 1 grid looks better
00:25:114 (1,2,3,4) - square
01:16:412 (7,8) - stack properly
02:05:878 (1,2) - looks weird

[Soft Parade]
00:08:168 (5,6) - right 1 grid
00:!5:497 (2) - left 2 grids
00:57:176 (3) - left 1 grid
01:25:115 (6) - up 1 grid

star~
Mint Bunny

wmfchris wrote:

[Mini's Parade]
00:31:985 (5,6) - spacing
00:33:130 (1,2,3,4) - make a parallelogram
00:47:100 (1,2,3,4,) - ^
01:06:565 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
01:09:084 (1,...) - maybe delete this combo for break?
01:13:665 (5) - up 1 grid
01:29:466 (x) - break
02:14:810 (8) - left 1 grid
02:24:199 (11) - NC
all doneDownload: Irobun - Hatte Futte Parade (sasuke24684) [Mint's Parade].osu
Topic Starter
causticsugar

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
two osb. files in your.osz, delete one of them. Kay kay~
"continue", "Retry" and "back" in pausing screen is pretty foggy, try to make it clearer? (e.g. glowing effect?)
...I don't have a 'continue', 'retry' or a 'back' button. Are you talking about the pause-bg? That's supposed to be a little foggy~

Tag animelover1432 Whoopsie! Done~

[Soft Parade]
00:08:168 (5,6) - right 1 grid Done~
00:!5:497 (2) - left 2 grids Done~
00:57:176 (3) - left 1 grid Done~
01:25:115 (6) - up 1 grid Done~
wmfchris
yeah, as a reuslt I just can't see the "continue" clearly
but this may be because of my own skin so it's ok lol
lovhin456
Hi ~~ Hetalia !! Yay =w=

General;
- Everything's good here

Skin;
- Some of those are from my skin in my APH's map =w=;;
- Here~ Have some new skin elements an I also fixed some of your skin elements
Skin >> http://puu.sh/TYB

Soft Parade;
- You need a 3 or less star diff >w>
- Make curved slider they are better and more fun to play =w=;;
- 00:06:794 (2,3,4,5,6) >> Add whistle to (2,4) then try this pattern and also curve (6) like this
- 00:21:451 >> One grid right
- 00:30:153 >> No. Just, this is supposed to be the easiest diff, and you have a jump ?? Fix the spacing
- 00:32:901 >> Too short for easiest diff, try to replace with a slider
- 00:54:428 >> Make it more pretty, that means slider points symmetrical
- 01:54:428 >> Align with (5)
- 02:02:214 >> Easiest diff, no jumps, fix spacing
- 02:24:199 (1,2) >> Finish at start
- Check the spacing for "jumps" and fix it

Celeste's Parade;
- 00:26:488 >> One grid right
- 02:30:381 >> Ughh too short ;w;

Mint's Parade;
- End second kiai time on a note
- Umm, check your spacing on your jumps, when doing jumps I believe there has to be the same space between each jump

* Star ~
Mint Bunny
Celeste76
Celeste's Parade;
- 00:26:488 >> One grid right Done~
- 02:30:381 >> Ughh too short ;w; I like it that way. Sorry ^^;
Topic Starter
causticsugar

lovhin456 wrote:

Skin;
- Here~ Have some new skin elements an I also fixed some of your skin elements
Skin >> http://puu.sh/TYB OMG Thank you SO much! I feel so... honored xD

Soft Parade;
- You need a 3 or less star diff >w> Kay kay. Done~
- Make curved slider they are better and more fun to play =w=;; I'll try to do so~
- 00:06:794 (2,3,4,5,6) >> Add whistle to (2,4) then try this pattern and also curve (6)Done~
- 00:21:451 >> One grid right Done~
- 00:30:153 >> No. Just, this is supposed to be the easiest diff, and you have a jump ?? Fix the spacing Done~
- 00:32:901 >> Too short for easiest diff, try to replace with a slider Done~
- 00:54:428 >> Make it more pretty, that means slider points symmetrical Done~
- 01:54:428 >> Align with (5) Done~
- 02:02:214 >> Easiest diff, no jumps, fix spacing Done~
- 02:24:199 (1,2) >> Finish at start Done~
- Check the spacing for "jumps" and fix it Kay kay, from now on I'll look for those >.>
lovhin456
Hey again ~~ I download the maps and still get the old skin elements, make sure you full-sub >w<
Topic Starter
causticsugar

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey again ~~ I download the maps and still get the old skin elements, make sure you full-sub >w<
I JUST started tofull- submit it. It's taking a long time xD
You downloaded a little too early? ^^;
lovhin456

sasuke24684 wrote:

I JUST started tofull- submit it. It's taking a long time xD
You downloaded a little too early? ^^;
I think so xD
Then it should be fine once you full-sub it, good luck with your map !! >w<
KiriNoMorii
Belly <3333333333
Star, Nya~
lovhin456
Hey ~~
Here's a cursor, if you want me to change the color just tell me =w= (Actually this is the cursor I made for the skin I use but whatever)
I wasn't sure what color will fit so yeah ~(=w=~)U
Anyways ~ You need to add both cursor and cursortrail (maybe you can't see it but is under the cursor) >w<

senaya
[Soft Parade]
02:22:367 (5,6) - add another repeat to both sliders so they would follow music better?
02:42:749 (1) - move this to the left like this http://puu.sh/V1A ?

[Celeste's Parade]
only nazi stuff here:
01:23:511 (7) - 1 grid left to make that pattern look better?
02:19:160 (5) - 1 grid up to keep the distance between beats even?

[Mint's Parade]
00:30:382 (4) - 1 grid down?
01:08:620 - add a break here? this space feels empty :'(
02:27:176 (8,9,10) - 1 grid up?

Cute song :)
Topic Starter
causticsugar

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~~
Here's a cursor, if you want me to change the color just tell me =w= (Actually this is the cursor I made for the skin I use but whatever)
I wasn't sure what color will fit so yeah ~(=w=~)U
Anyways ~ You need to add both cursor and cursortrail (maybe you can't see it but is under the cursor) >w<
SPOILER
[attachment=1:8d9a5]cursor.png[/attachment:8d9a5]
[attachment=0:8d9a5]cursortrail.png[/attachment:8d9a5]
Thank you so much sweetheart <3

*Showers with love as promised~*

@senaya: I'll get to your mod when I leave school and I'm at home. Osu glitches massively if I try using it at school.
Topic Starter
causticsugar

senaya wrote:

[Soft Parade]
02:22:367 (5,6) - add another repeat to both sliders so they would follow music better?Not too keen on this one, but I still did it <3
02:42:749 (1) - move this to the left like this http://puu.sh/V1A ?Done~
Thank you~ Keep the mods coming people >:3
Mint Bunny
mmkDownload: Irobun - Hatte Futte Parade (sasuke24684) [Mint's Parade].osu

senaya wrote:

[Mint's Parade]
00:30:382 (4) - 1 grid down?
01:08:620 - add a break here? this space feels empty :'(
02:27:176 (8,9,10) - 1 grid up?
pieguyn
Cute song ^o^

Soft Parade:

00:08:168 (5,6) - Move up 2 level 3 grids. Also, 6 isn't symmetrical. Additionally, perhaps put a new combo on (6)
00:15:955 (3) - New combo
00:23:283 (3) - ^
00:25:115 (5) - Not symmetrical
00:32:901 (6) - ^
00:54:428 (5,6) - ^
00:56:260 (1) - Too far from (6)
00:58:550 (6) - Make this a copy of (5), and stack (7) under it
01:01:756 (5) - Align with (4), and not symmetrical
01:14:581 (7) - New combo and remove it from the next note
01:25:115 (6) - Not symmetrical
01:34:275 (3) - Align with (2)
01:37:939 (4) - Point it in the opposite direction as (5)?
01:50:306 (5) - Too far from 4
02:22:366 (5,6) - Move 1 level 3 grid left
02:24:198 (1) - Too far from (6)
02:27:404 (4) - Move one level 3 grid right (if you do fix the spacing afterward)
02:27:862 (5) - New combo
02:37:023 (6) - New combo and align with (5)
02:41:603 (5) - Too far from (4)

Celeste's Parade:

-AR/OD +1 or 2? (Note: if you do this make sure Auto still gets 2000 on that spinner at the end)

00:06:794 (6) - Not symmetrical
00:20:992 (4) - Align with (3)
00:24:427 (4,5) - Move one level 3 grid right
00:45:267 (8) - Out
00:59:923 (1,2) - Not symmetrical
01:07:023 (1) - Start it 1/2 later?
01:16:412 (7) - Too close to (6)
01:17:786 (8) - Stack it perfectly under (7) using 0.0x distance snap
01:28:778 (1) - End it a beat later
01:34:732 (5) - New combo
01:38:397 (5) - ^
01:42:977 (7) - New combo on this or on (4)
01:46:641 (7) - ^
01:49:160 (4) - Move it down so it's not stacked, and also put a New combo
01:49:160 (4) - Move it up so it's not stacked, and also put a New combo
01:54:885 (1) - Too close to (11)
01:56:717 (2) - Align with (1)
01:58:549 (6) - New combo
02:11:717 (6) - Align with (5)
02:16:870 (1) - Align with (9)
02:19:160 (5) - Too close to (4)
02:21:450 (3,4) - Make this part like (1) and (2) before it
02:22:366 (5) - New combo

Mint's Parade:

-Make the combo colors the same as in the other diffs

00:16:871 (6) - Not symmetrical
00:25:115 (1) - ^, but it should be fine
00:47:100 (1,2,3,4) - Make this symmetrical about the y-axis?
00:50:764 (1) - Align with (5)
01:01:756 (9) - Move it up and right one level 3 grid?
01:32:901 (1) - (nazi) Not symmetrical, but it's probably fine
01:36:565 (1) - ^
01:37:481 (2,3) - Left one level 3 grid?
01:39:313 (8) - Not symmetrical
01:48:703 (5) - ^
01:46:642 (6) - Odd-shaped slider?
01:51:451 (5) - New combo
01:54:886 (1,2,3) - It'd be nice if you made this symmetrical about the y-axis
02:08:626 (1,3) - Center these (maybe move 1 down a level 3 grid and 3 up one to keep the spacing from (6) correct)
02:12:061 (6) - Make this a mirrored version of (7)?
02:13:207 (2) - Too close to (1)
02:15:039 (9) - Too close to (8)
02:16:413 - Add a note?
02:22:367 (7) - New combo

Nice map (almost all those issues are only aesthetic) and cute song. :) *stars*
Topic Starter
causticsugar
I did all of the above~ Thankies <3

At least, I think I did... :?

But I'm pretty sure I did. :)
Mint Bunny

pieguy1372 wrote:

Mint's Parade:
-Make the combo colors the same as in the other diffs

00:16:871 (6) - Not symmetrical um, yes it is?
00:25:115 (1) - ^, but it should be fine ^
00:47:100 (1,2,3,4) - Make this symmetrical about the y-axis? mmhmm
00:50:764 (1) - Align with (5) uh-huh
01:01:756 (9) - Move it up and right one level 3 grid? looks fine to me ._.
01:32:901 (1) - (nazi) Not symmetrical, but it's probably fine it wasn't actually, thanks
01:36:565 (1) - ^ ^
01:37:481 (2,3) - Left one level 3 grid? mmhmm
01:39:313 (8) - Not symmetrical oh well, Dosn't look noticeable
01:48:703 (5) - ^ ^
01:46:642 (6) - Odd-shaped slider? [color=#4000]yup[/color]
01:51:451 (5) - New combo mhmm
01:54:886 (1,2,3) - It'd be nice if you made this symmetrical about the y-axis yup
02:08:626 (1,3) - Center these (maybe move 1 down a level 3 grid and 3 up one to keep the spacing from (6) correct) mhmm
02:12:061 (6) - Make this a mirrored version of (7)? yup
02:13:207 (2) - Too close to (1) ya
02:15:039 (9) - Too close to (8) yup
02:16:413 - Add a note? yup
02:22:367 (7) - New combo yup

Nice map (almost all those issues are only aesthetic) and cute song. :) *stars*
Download: Irobun - Hatte Futte Parade (sasuke24684) [Mint's Parade].osu
Topic Starter
causticsugar

pieguy1372 wrote:

Celeste's Parade:

-AR/OD +1 or 2? (Note: if you do this make sure Auto still gets 2000 on that spinner at the end) Done~

00:06:794 (6) - Not symmetrical Done~
00:20:992 (4) - Align with (3) Done~
00:24:427 (4,5) - Move one level 3 grid right Done~
00:45:267 (8) - Out I like it like that.
00:59:923 (1,2) - Not symmetrical Done~
01:07:023 (1) - Start it 1/2 later? Done~
01:16:412 (7) - Too close to (6) I like it that way.
01:17:786 (8) - Stack it perfectly under (7) using 0.0x distance snap It won't go?
01:28:778 (1) - End it a beat later Done~
01:34:732 (5) - New combo Done~
01:38:397 (5) - ^ Done~
01:42:977 (7) - New combo on this or on (4) Done~
01:46:641 (7) - ^ Done~
01:49:160 (4) - Move it down so it's not stacked, and also put a New combo Done~
01:49:160 (4) - Move it up so it's not stacked, and also put a New combo Done~
01:54:885 (1) - Too close to (11) Done~
01:56:717 (2) - Align with (1) Done~
01:58:549 (6) - New combo Done~
02:11:717 (6) - Align with (5) Done~
02:16:870 (1) - Align with (9) Done~
02:19:160 (5) - Too close to (4) I like it like that.
02:21:450 (3,4) - Make this part like (1) and (2) before it Done~
02:22:366 (5) - New combo Done~
Topic Starter
causticsugar
~Tee hee...
The post above was Celeste. She didn't realize she was sort of on my user. I'm going to have to change my password xD
SapphireGhost
Oh guess what, I'm late.

Soft Parade
00:08:626 (6) Make the slider look nicer, please.
00:32:901 (6) Make the slider more symmetrical.
00:58:550 (6) This stacking pattern is kind of difficult for an Easy. (And I modded three 6s in a row)
01:07:252 (1) Don't have this overlap with the yellow slider.
01:20:077 (3,4,5,6) Tricky stacking for an easy.
01:49:390 (4) I don't care that this slider isn't perfectly symmetrical but I'll warn you someone might.
Celeste's Parade
00:16:412 (2,3) No overlap, please.
01:05:878 (6) Tricky... it's your call how/if you want to fix it.
01:14:112 (1) No overlap with (9), please.
Slider Velocity confused me :?
Mint's Parade
This difficulty is fine.

Take this Star and run with it.
Topic Starter
causticsugar

SapphireGhost wrote:

Oh guess what, I'm late.

Soft Parade
00:08:626 (6) Make the slider look nicer, please. Yes yes >.>
00:32:901 (6) Make the slider more symmetrical. Kay kay. Tried m' b'st.
00:58:550 (6) This stacking pattern is kind of difficult for an Easy. (And I modded three 6s in a row)It's... It's not an easy ^^; It's meant to be normal...
01:07:252 (1) Don't have this overlap with the yellow slider. Kay kay
01:20:077 (3,4,5,6) Tricky stacking for an easy.Again... Not an easy ^^;
01:49:390 (4) I don't care that this slider isn't perfectly symmetrical but I'll warn you someone might. Fixed~
Thank you sweetheart~
Waiting on you Celeste <33
Celeste76

SapphireGhost wrote:

Celeste's Parade
00:16:412 (2,3) No overlap, please. Done.
01:05:878 (6) Tricky... it's your call how/if you want to fix it. No, I like it.
01:14:112 (1) No overlap with (9), please. I like it the way it is, thank you.
Slider Velocity confused me :? I like it the way it is.
dkun
IRC mod on all diffs.

What weird song choice, but good mapset nevertheless.
:)

★!
Reiji-RJ
Hi~

You should remove sound from video

Soft Parade

00:04:962 (1) - add finish in the beginning of slider
00:08:626 (6) - ^
00:12:291 (1) - finish
00:19:619 (1) - ^
00:23:283 (1) - spacing
00:26:947 (1) - whistle
00:27:863 (3) - ^
00:28:779 (5) - ^
00:29:695 (7) - remove finish and add whistle
00:30:611 (1) - in the end of slider add finish
00:32:443 (5) - finish
00:48:932 (1) - in the beginning finish
00:52:596 (1) - ^
00:55:344 (6) - one grid right
00:56:260 (1) - finish
00:58:550 (6) - don't stack with (5)
01:03:588 (1) - in the beginning add finish and in the end clap
01:04:504 (2) - in the beginning remove finish and in the end add clap
01:07:252 (1) - finish
01:09:084 (4) - ^
01:10:000 (5) - in the end finish
01:10:916 (1) - finish
01:14:581 (1) - one grid up and add finish
01:18:245 (1) - finish in the beginning
01:20:077 (3,4,5) - one grid down
01:20:993 (6) - don't stack with (3,4,5)
01:21:909 (1) - finish
01:25:573 (6) - in the end finish?
01:32:901 (1) - finish in the beginning
01:33:817 (2) - clap
01:34:733 (3) - in the end clap
01:35:191 (4) - ^
01:36:565 (1) - in the beginning finish
01:37:481 (3) - clap
01:38:397 (4) - in the end clap
01:39:313 (5) - ^
01:40:229 (1) - in the beginning finish
01:41:145 (2) - clap
01:42:061 (3) - ^
01:42:978 (5) - ^
01:43:894 (1) - finish
01:44:810 (3) - clap
01:45:726 (4) - ^
01:46:642 (5) - ^
01:47:558 (1) - finish
01:48:474 (3) - clap
01:49:390 (4) - ^
01:50:306 (5) - ^
01:51:222 (1) - finish
01:52:138 (2) - clap
01:53:054 (4) - ^
01:53:970 (6) - ^
01:56:260 (1) - finish
01:56:718 (1) - ^
02:02:214 (1) - ^
02:09:542 (1) - ^
02:23:283 (6) - don't stack with (5)

Celeste's Parade

00:12:290 (1) - finish
00:16:412 (2) - clap
00:19:618 (1) - finish
00:33:358 (2) - ^
00:48:931 (1) - ^
00:56:259 (1) - ^
01:10:000 (2) - ^
01:16:412 (7) - move it farther from (6)
01:28:778 (1) - extend to 01:32:442
02:02:213 (1) - finish
02:08:626 (7) - one grid left
02:09:084 (8) - ^
02:09:542 (1) - finish

Mint's Parade

00:12:291 (1) - finish
00:19:619 (1) - ^
00:26:947 (1) - ^
01:03:588 (1) - ^
02:05:649 (1) - remove finish
02:06:565 (3) - ^
02:31:069 (3) - change it with circle?
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omg sorry for so long mod D:
but it's just hitsounds suggestion

Good luck, star~
Topic Starter
causticsugar

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hi~

You should remove sound from video

Soft Parade

I did all of the above~
Except...


02:23:283 (6) - don't stack with (5)I think it's just fine. It's not that difficult.
Mint Bunny

Reiji-RJ wrote:

You should remove sound from video I'll can do this if she wants me to, I'll just see if she asks


Mint's Parade

00:12:291 (1) - finish nope, that sounds horrid :P
00:19:619 (1) - ^ yup
00:26:947 (1) - ^ nope, that sounds horrid :P
01:03:588 (1) - ^ ^
02:05:649 (1) - remove finish mhmm
02:06:565 (3) - ^ ^
02:31:069 (3) - change it with circle? maybe, not sure yet.
Download: Irobun - Hatte Futte Parade (sasuke24684) [Mint's Parade].osu
Hushu_old
Hii, i love the song, i love hetalia :]

General: Gray combo color is... quite... yeah. I would put pink or green instead. More importantly, i think you should ask in timing queue for a new timing. This one feels weird to me, so please double check it with someone more acknowledged in timing.

Soft Parade:
0:30:153 - Here you continue 1/1 beat without a reason... 1/1 beat is boring and should be only used when there is a need to, (there was the vocal on yellow combo, i cant hear it in this place). So remove this slider and put a circle where it ended, because there is a sound there, make that circle the new combo, add finish sound what was there before when u had the slider.
0:32:901 - I don't like this neighter. The melody has 1/1 beats all aong, so you really do have to use vocals where possible. shorten it by half, move to 0:33:359. And to make it rhytmic, add a circle at 0:33:130 too~
0:15:039 - that feels rather like a break place... remove and add a cricle where it ended
1:16:871 (5,6) - Those beats are great as a slider, and make it have same sounds as the previous slider (3)
1:22:367 - Remove as again feels like a break.
1:38:168 - Use sounds from the slider after. Both should be the same.
1:42:520 (4,5, '6') - Hard patterns can be avoided, make that a circle and repeat 5 instead of having the note (6) after. And this bit is quite weird... They all would have the same sounds, so they cant have patterns which are not making same sounds. By that i mean that there has to be a beat of anykind at where you placed beat in previous combo in this part of the song (till the spinner). So recheck.
1:56:718 - Mm, remove. place a circle at this point and a slider from 1:57:176 1/1 long.
1:58:550 - Remove circle '5' and make the slider as long to get to where it was.

Celeste's Parade:
1:10:916 - Is this fast speed needed here..? Multiple timing should be used only when the song changed its speed or there is additioncal instrument or background beat joining... And I don't think this speed is anywhere else than in this combo, yet the same melody repeats, so this timing point is very weird...
lovhin456
I'm so dumb ~ I just noticed you have different offsets for each diff. also there is another big problem, you start to map in Easy before the metronome starts (before the red timing section) and that is bad. There are 2 options, one is to start mapping where the metronome starts and the other is to change the offset for all diffs. so the metronome starts earlier, I got this offset, of course I'm not an expert (I can barely get the timing for my own maps ;w;) So it may not be perfect and you'll need to get other people to check it, anyways I got 4987 for offset >w< Remember offset must be the same for all diffs, also don't forget to RESNAP ALL NOTES after you change offset.
Celeste76

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Celeste's Parade

Done all of the above~
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osuyo
:)
ziin
[general]
this is a simple map to storyboard. I suggest you put a little effort into it, rather than using a crappy video.
you just recolored the default hitbursts (and only slightly). As many people use custom skins, I don't see a reason to even bother skinning them.
It would be neat to see the waffle being colored by skinning the hitcircleoverlay rather than the hitcircle itself. I don't know if it will look okay though. You can use OverlayPosition under [general] in the osu file to set whether the numbers are above or below the hitcircle overlay.
your spinner isn't centered. You can also use that pink/yellow/gray background color on it. It's also very easy to lose the cursor on that peach color, so all the more reason to vary it up a little bit.

I'm pretty impressed by the beatmaps themselves, nothing terrible in them, but this isn't that hard of a song to map.
Vass_Bass
Hi

General
You have a beautiful skin..nice BG..but video spoils it ><
May be you will delete this video and do text of the song in SB?

Another is good and cute
Starr~
Celeste76

ziin wrote:

[general]
this is a simple map to storyboard. I suggest you put a little effort into it, rather than using a crappy video.
you just recolored the default hitbursts (and only slightly). As many people use custom skins, I don't see a reason to even bother skinning them.
It would be neat to see the waffle being colored by skinning the hitcircleoverlay rather than the hitcircle itself. I don't know if it will look okay though. You can use OverlayPosition under [general] in the osu file to set whether the numbers are above or below the hitcircle overlay.
your spinner isn't centered. You can also use that pink/yellow/gray background color on it. It's also very easy to lose the cursor on that peach color, so all the more reason to vary it up a little bit.

I'm pretty impressed by the beatmaps themselves, nothing terrible in them, but this isn't that hard of a song to map.
I understand some people would rather a storyboard than the video, but can you think for a minute? This is sasue's FIRST map! Which means, well duh, she wouldn't know the first thing about storyboarding. And if you really have that much of an issue with the video, I'd like to see you make a storyboard yourself. Yet, I don't see you doing that. Since you didn't, you have no right to speak to her that way. (sorry for outlandish rant, I'm just defending my sis :? _
Topic Starter
causticsugar
SO sorry I haven't been on guys. I have TOTALLY not been busy playing Pokemon Black or anything ^^ (surreeee)
I'll get back to Hushu, ziin, and Vass_Bass in a quick moment's time. Again, Super SORRY >w<
Sekai
wow nice map
:)
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