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jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix)

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ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, March 27, 2011 at 10:52:31 AM

Artist: jun
Title: SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix)
Source: Dance Dance Revolution X OST
Tags: Rucker Samiljul CrimmiSkye
BPM: 192
Filesize: 3596kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4.83 stars, 669 notes)
  2. Crimmi's Dream (3.86 stars, 123 notes)
  3. Easy (1.46 stars, 78 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 293 notes)
  5. Ruc's Dream (4.93 stars, 193 notes)
Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix)
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Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 25 times in total.
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
May I make taiko diff?
~_~
ouranhshc
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

samiljul wrote:

May I make taiko diff?
~_~
yes
subarasikibuta
559 posts
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subarasikibuta
w
Rucker
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
561 posts
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Rucker
Done :D

Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix) (ouranhshc) [Ruc's Dream].osu
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
complete :)

Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix) (ouranhshc) [31's Taiko].osu
Crimmi
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Crimmi
:D
swish
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swish
:)
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
<3
eddieee
253 posts
Joined February 2010
eddieee
why nobody tell me this (rucker!!!!!) i love this song THANK YOUUUU
AdRon Zh3Ro
902 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
As requested~

Enjoy.
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
mod4mod

General
-Add "Rucker", "Samiljul", and "AdRon" "Zh3Ro" to the tags
-make sure the whole mapset has the same offset
-no source?
Easy
00:24:763 (2,3) - i know it's minor but this kind of spacing will confuse beginner players since it's not consistent with the other 1/1s
01:25:388 (3) - 1 grid left
01:26:013 (4) - 1 grid right
AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream
it's so hard to read >_>
this diff has different offset from the others (2866 instead of 2888)
00:11:928 (2) - fix the stack with (1)'s slider end
00:14:897 (4) - fix the stack with (3)'s slider end
00:19:897 (5) - fix the stack with (4)'s slider end
01:33:647 (4) - new combo
31's Taiko
00:38:981 (x) - add a blue note?
00:43:981 (x) - add a red note?
00:44:059 (x) - ^
00:54:138 (378) - add finish to this note
01:24:138 (596) - ^
01:29:138 (638) - ^
Ruc's Dream
00:16:638 (3) - make this slider smoother
00:28:513 (5) - ^
00:52:731 (x) - add a note?
01:18:825 (x) - ^
01:30:856 (5) - make this slider smoother
Insane
no issues

great map as always
STAR!
theMikeAG
308 posts
Joined September 2010
theMikeAG
[-General-] The names you're using for Easy and Insane clash with the guest difficulties. You might want to change Easy into something like Simple Dream and change Insane into something like Nightmare or Insane Dream. Just a suggestion. ;)

[-Easy-] 00:11:638 (2) - You might want to change this from a 2 beat repeator (x2) to a 1 beat repeater (x5). Something that looks like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43156. You might also want to apply more finishes to this repeater to make it sound epic!
00:13:044 ~ 00:13:981 - This section of the song feels sort of... boring. You might want to put some beats here. Similar sections are at 00:15:544 ~ 00:16:481 and 00:18:044 ~ 00:18:981.

[-AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream-] 00:11:950 (2) - Use grid level 4 and stack this under the end of 00:11:638 (1). Also adjust 00:12:888 (1) and the patterns afterward as needed.
00:24:138 (3,4,5) - This pattern seems sort of deceptive. The way it's laid out, it's hard to tell what speed to hit the notes at. Similar patterns are at 00:29:138 (3,4,5) and 01:33:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6).

[-31's Taiko-] If you've ever seen me play Taiko, you'd know why I don't mod Taiko maps. :o

[-Ruc's Dream-] 00:11:638 (4) - You might want to move this one space to the left to match 00:09:138 (2), but it looks fine as it is now. Change it if you want.

[-Insane-] I don't mod Insane difficulties.

Anyway, this is a really cool map. Starred.
gowww
429 posts
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gowww
good!!
AdRon Zh3Ro
902 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
...
Thite
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Thite
:D
Sander-Don
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Sander-Don
ok
rEdo
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rEdo
as requested

[Insane]
0:04:919 (1,1,1) - blargh, those new combos...i'd suggest deleting them?
0:40:388 (2) - i'd like you to add finish here, too c:
0:42:419 (1,1) - those new combos.
0:42:888 (1) - should that finish appear at the begging of this slider, not at it's end?
1:10:388 (2) - add a finish here
1:10:544 (3,4) - (3) should go a grid to the left, and (4) a grid to the right i guess
1:14:138 (4) - new combo?

[Ruc's Dream]
0:11:638 (4) - a grid to the left
0:11:716 (1) - spinners shouldn't start this shortly after a note, it feels to start artifically early. try to begin it at least 1/2 after
1:23:434 (1) - ^
in general: imo some of the hitfinishes should be replaced with hitwhistles, f.e. at 0:42:575 (7)

[AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream]
0:41:950 (7) - it stands out pretty much comparing to the rest of the notes
1:01:638 - 1:02:888 - insert break time
1:06:638 (1,2) - ctrl + j?
1:12:888 - 1:13:669 - ...oh my, those fountains...x_x
in general: whoa, this spacing.

[Easy]
0:32:341 (1) - just like in Rucker's - spinners shouldn't start so shortly after a note
1:11:013 (4) - move it a grid to the right


[General]
kiai times are different in almost every diff =w=

good luck ó.ó
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
~AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream~
0.4 Spacing here causes confusion - having to heavily rely on approach circles like that is really hard ;_;

~31's Taiko~
I think its sounds better with soft hitsounds

~Ruc's Dream~
hitsoundmod
Remember, just a suggestion you don't have to use them
00:22:888 (1) – finish
00:27:888 (4) - ^
00:34:138 (4) -^
00:44:138 (3) - ^
00:49:138 (9) - ^
00:51:638 (4) - ^
01:11:638 (1) -^
01:12:888 (3) -^
01:19:138 (2) - ^
01:21:638 (1) - ^
01:22:263 (3) - ^
01:22:888 (1) - ^ (remove whistle)
01:29:138 (1) – finish
01:33:044 (1) – ^
01:33:200 (2) – remove whistle
01:33:669 (1) - remove whistle add finish


~Twinkle twinkle little star~
AdRon Zh3Ro
902 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
~_~

Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix) (ouranhshc) [AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream].osu
Rucker
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
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Rucker

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Ruc's Dream
00:16:638 (3) - make this slider smoother
- Fixed.
00:28:513 (5) - ^
- Fixed.
00:52:731 (x) - add a note?
- No.
01:18:825 (x) - ^
- Add.
01:30:856 (5) - make this slider smoother
- No.

theMikeAG wrote:

[-Ruc's Dream-]
00:11:638 (4) - You might want to move this one space to the left to match 00:09:138 (2), but it looks fine as it is now. Change it if you want.
- Move a grid to left.

rEdo wrote:

[Ruc's Dream]
0:11:638 (4) - a grid to the left
- Fixed.
0:11:716 (1) - spinners shouldn't start this shortly after a note, it feels to start artifically early. try to begin it at least 1/2 after
- Fixed.
1:23:434 (1) - ^
- Fixed.
: imo some of the hitfinishes should be replaced with hitwhistles, f.e. at 0:42:575 (7)
- Fixed.

Haneii wrote:

~Ruc's Dream~
hitsoundmod
Remember, just a suggestion you don't have to use them
00:22:888 (1) – finish
00:27:888 (4) - ^
00:34:138 (4) -^
00:44:138 (3) - ^
00:49:138 (9) - ^
00:51:638 (4) - ^
01:11:638 (1) -^
01:12:888 (3) -^
01:19:138 (2) - ^
01:21:638 (1) - ^
01:22:263 (3) - ^
01:22:888 (1) - ^ (remove whistle)
01:29:138 (1) – finish
01:33:044 (1) – ^
01:33:200 (2) – remove whistle
01:33:669 (1) - remove whistle add finish
- Add, nice suggestion :3
Thanks everyone's mod :D

Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix) (ouranhshc) [Ruc's Dream].osu
ouranhshc
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc
updated
Natteke
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Natteke
i loves jun
Patchouli
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Patchouli
:)
Pereira006
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Pereira006
:)
AdRon Zh3Ro
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AdRon Zh3Ro
Well, you'll need to update my diff yourself now >.>

Not much of a problem, i think.
La Cataline
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La Cataline
AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream;
huge circle size, low AR and low distance makes this map unreadable to me D:
AR at least +1 would help a lot
00:56:638 - 00:59:138 - dont be lazy, map something here D:
01:26:638 - 01:29:138 - ^


insane;
00:31:638 (1,2) - that rhythm doesnt fit the music,
i can hear in the song, so you should probably move 2 to the next white tick and add a circle at 00:32:106.
aston_old
aston_old
[Easy]
- 00:36:638 (4) - Finish Sound?
- 01:33:044 (1) - Triplets would sound better; reverse sliders?
- Preview point not set.

[AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream]
- ADD hitsounds - Taiko is uneventful without them
- Preview point not set..

[31's Taiko]
- Sorry, I can't mod taiko well yet, so I'll stay away from this.

[Ruc's Dream]
- 01:23:513 (1) - Unrankable
- Lower your use of Kiai - there's too much.

[Insane]
- I would've liked this better if you used "mini" kiai after the main kiai you had (placed at some points; example : 01:14:138 (4), one quick one there would've been nice, irc/pm if you want me to tell you where i'd like to see them).
- 00:12:263 (2) - screams "make me into a stream!"

Other than those, looks like an almost ranked map.
Starred cause I love playing this insane.
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
[Easy]
01:26:638 (1,1) - Just a very minor thing, but maybe move the ends of these sliders so that they don't overlap? :3

[AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream]
J-j-j-just WHAT is this spacing. It's really, and I mean REALLY confusing to play. ;__;
00:11:638 (1,2) - Maybe delete (2) and add a repeat to (1)?
00:36:638 (7) - New combo
00:42:263 (7) - ^
00:46:638 (6) - ^
00:51:638 (5) - ^
01:16:638 (7) - ^
01:21:638 (7) - ^

Kiai-time is different almost in every diff? Other than that, nothing bad found. Starred~
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
[Easy]
00:36:638 (4) - New combo
00:51:013 (2) - Can you try to make so the slider didn't touch the HP bar.
01:33:044 (1,2) - (Suggestion) move this 1/2 forward on the timeline and make it 1/2 shorter, Will be easer to follow.

[AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream]
This is the most awkward map I've played in a LONG time, the spacing is far from fun and is just out of place, can't you make it a bit more spaced please, this difficulty sticks out like a sore thumb and feels like it dragging the quality down in this set.

Pretty good, only AdRon Zh3Ro's map that I didn't like,
ouranhshc
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Xgor wrote:

[Easy]
00:36:638 (4) - New combofixed
00:51:013 (2) - Can you try to make so the slider didn't touch the HP bar. :) moved 1 grid down on Lv 4
01:33:044 (1,2) - (Suggestion) move this 1/2 forward on the timeline and make it 1/2 shorter, Will be easer to follow.nty

[AdRon Zh3Ro's Dream]
This is the most awkward map I've played in a LONG time, the spacing is far from fun and is just out of place, can't you make it a bit more spaced please, this difficulty sticks out like a sore thumb and feels like it dragging the quality down in this set.

Pretty good, only AdRon Zh3Ro's map that I didn't like,

Lanttu wrote:

[Easy]
01:26:638 (1,1) - Just a very minor thing, but maybe move the ends of these sliders so that they don't overlap? :3 fixed
crimmi is making a normal to replace adron's diff
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Crimmi
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Crimmi
orz.. my dreams have been broken already ;_;

Download: jun - SILVER DREAM (Twinkle Mix) (ouranhshc) [Crimmi's Dream].osu
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
Let's go!
Garven
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Garven
Now with new-and-improved preview points! and a little IRC modding on all diffs - rhythm changes, spinner snapping, fountain spam reduction, blah blah

SPOILER
09:22 <Garven> : In easy:
09:22 <Garven> : 00:32:341 (1) - Feels really short, starts soon, and ends in a bad spot. >_>
09:22 <Garven> : And the note afterward is pretty soon for an easy.
09:23 <ouranhshc> : soo
09:23 <ouranhshc> : is this better: http://puu.sh/1luS
09:24 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/1luV ?
09:25 <ouranhshc> : lol onelove
09:26 <ouranhshc> : fixed
09:26 <Garven> : 01:04:763 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner too (which was kinda short)
09:26 <Garven> : Kind of a dull Easy, but it's pretty. ;p
09:27 <ouranhshc> : this map is old >.<
09:27 <Garven> : Oh, disable countdown on all diffs too, since it's not being used
09:28 <Garven> : In crimmi's:
09:28 <Garven> : 00:31:638 (1) - End this at 00:33:356 -
09:28 <Garven> : 00:41:638 (1) - End at 00:43:356 -
09:29 <Garven> : 00:52:888 (7) - Maybe remove finish on end of this slider?
09:29 <Garven> : 01:01:638 (1) - End at 01:03:356 -
09:30 <Garven> : 01:32:888 (1) - End at 01:33:981 -
09:30 <Garven> : Didn't like how long the combos were for a normal, but oh well.
09:32 <ouranhshc> : updated
09:32 <ouranhshc> : with preview times
09:32 <Garven> : Ah, k
09:33 <Garven> : Just opening Ruc's... so many kiai fountains orz
09:35 <Garven> : 00:54:138 - Entend the break to start here
09:36 <Garven> : 01:13:356 - Yeah, all these kiai fountains are kinda dumb
09:36 <Garven> : Just do one rekiai and it'd be fine
09:36 <ouranhshc> : rekiai @ 01:14:138 ?
09:37 <Garven> : Yeah, that'd be good
09:37 <Garven> : 01:12:575 (3,6) - These could be aligned better
09:38 <Garven> : 01:24:450 - Didn't like having a break here, but oh well.
09:39 <Garven> : On insane...
09:40 <Garven> : That combo color #4 is really hard to see at this AR when the notes appear on the bottom against the BG
09:40 <ouranhshc> : i noticed that while playing it in multi
09:40 <Garven> : Just combo hax around it
09:40 <ouranhshc> : do you think BLack would be better?
09:40 <Garven> : Change the color for those particular combos to another one
09:40 <Garven> : You know how to do that?
09:40 <ouranhshc> : nope
09:41 <Garven> : When you select "New combo" there's an arrow on the left http://puu.sh/1lvh
09:41 <Garven> : Pretty self-explanitory from there
09:41 <ouranhshc> : i'll just change the combo color itself D:
09:41 *Garven shrugs
09:41 <Garven> : k
09:42 <ouranhshc> : done
09:43 <Garven> : Yeah, mapping is fine in Insane. Just that combo color thing.
09:44 <ouranhshc> : updated
09:48 <Garven> : You know, in Ruc's... 00:53:825 - this fountain feels weird. It'd be better at 00:54:138 - but there's no note there. :/
09:49 <ouranhshc> : i could still move the kiai fountain there D:
09:50 <Garven> : I suppose so
09:50 <Garven> : 01:23:513 (1) - Unrankable lol
09:50 <Garven> : Start it on the blue tick and it's fine
09:51 <ouranhshc> : fixed
09:51 <Garven> : k, update
09:54 <ouranhshc> : fixed
09:54 <ouranhshc> : *updated
09:54 <Garven> : Posted
09:54 <Garven> : G'luck
09:54 <ouranhshc> : thx
ztrot
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ztrot
I wanna dance tonight, can you keep up now~
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc

ztrot wrote:

I wanna dance tonight, can you keep up now~
I WANNA LET YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I REALLY LOVE YOU
Anto
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Anto
Oh Yeah :D gratz
AdRon Zh3Ro
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*Mad Face*
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