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cranky - Libera me [Osu|Taiko]

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wmfchris
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 18 October, 2011 at 21:55:54

Artist: cranky
Title: Libera me
Tags: al2e10 Kochiya Sanae KingsAL2
BPM: 165
Filesize: 3173kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alarmable (5 stars, 387 notes)
  2. Normal (2.2 stars, 138 notes)
  3. Sanae (4.73 stars, 267 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.89 stars, 814 notes)
Download: cranky - Libera me
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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11th beatmap,

Normal - wmf
Hard - Sanae
Insane - al2e10
Taiko - wmf

9/10/10 Easy finished, taiko edited.
21/10/10 Added al2's diff, BG image.
13/1/11 Added Sanae's diff
Last edited by wmfchris , edited 37 times in total.
Colin Hou
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aabc271
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Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Taiko]

The 1/4+1/3 patterns in 00:06:727~00:12:545, 01:34:362~01:36:180 and 01:53:453~01:57:999 are quite complicated compared to others~ Consider simplifying them a bit? I know these are style issues and not really a problem, so just ignore me if you want to keep that~

01:21:999~01:24:544 (612~623) This is quite difficult to place notes here. I think deleting all notes or adding a spinner here is better~

01:51:453 (749) Add finish?

Consider adding a timing point at 02:04:544 and use X1.5 BPM so that the last few notes are faster?

No errors found~ Nice job~ :)
Star and good luck~
wmfchris
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all fixed~
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climbb65588
BG here. star.

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Hey!

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wmfchris
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uploaded~
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go chris
gl :D
avira0922
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avira0922
I love Cranky (/ω＼)
thanks mapping
star~

These are just suggestions~
You don't have to change anything

The position of a normal whistle might be a little worried

[Alaramble]

Approach Rate & Overall is very low
Please rise it ;_;

00:59:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think that I should not change the spacing.
01:38:544 (2) - piles it up at the end of 01:37:817 (2)
01:39:089 (2) - piles it up at the end of 01:38:544 (2)
02:03:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that I should not change the spacing

I am waiting for other difficulties to finish :3
I am not good at English,sorry TAT
kanpakyin
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star~
-Lennox-
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Hello there~
I try to mod your map D:

[General]

fine~


[Easy]

Circle Size -1?
Approach Rate -1?
I ask you.. it is an easy diff >.<

00:02:209-00:6:545(1,2,3,4): Remove whistel and add finish?
00:34:544 The spiner starts too early D: Maybe you make it so?
SPOILER
00:57:271: (x) Add note with finish sound?
01:33:899(4): remove this beat? It's very hard for a beginner to click so fast :D
01:48:908(1,2,3) Remove whistel... i does not fit with the music D:

Fine~

[Alaramble]

Add kiai?
I think circle size -1 is better D:
And approach rate/overall +1/2?

02:06:725(4) : remove this beat

I can't mod taiko sorry :P

Fine... great map's and great song!

Star~


ps: + = one right and - = one left :P
Kochiya Sanae
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Kochiya Sanae
没音效 以后有空下 ;)

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Ulysses
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Ulysses
Star this map! (does not use kudosu)
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
All comments are suggestions only, feel free to ignore them

[General]
change combo colour?
Off count down?

[Alaramble]
OA and AR +3
HP Drain Rate +2
00:25:271 (10) - It touch the HP bar
01:06:180 (6) - ^
01:47:271 (7) - ^
01:50:544 (3) - this jump is hard to read
01:51:635 (1) - ^
01:52:726 (3) - ^
Nice rhythm

[Sanae]
Not finished

[Easy]
AR-1
SV too high, So the sliders is hard to play ( I can't FC that )
00:25:635 (6) - too hard for easy. consider not overlap it?

Star for Alaramble
Kochiya Sanae
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Kochiya Sanae
久等了!! >:(

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>w</
Curisu
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Curisu
加上彼岸雨的PV= =效果好一些?(2007静止画MAD大賞第一名作品)
看过上面那个视频 难怪那么熟悉这BGM...

(另外...最后一个难度note那么慢没问题?)


star*3~
Last edited by Curisu , edited 1 time in total.
Mok
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Heya:D

Map's good, so there's nothing too wrong for me...
Only, in [Normal] 00:15:453 (3) - Stack this correctly. tha'ts all! :D
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[General]
Alaramble难度preview time没设。

[Normal]
高SV低DS略别扭
00:02:909 (1,2,3,4) - oox oox oox xxx
00:24:908 (5) - 尾finish
00:43:089 (3) - new combo
01:27:089 (3) - 折返clap
01:53:453 (1) - 这长度只让人觉得烦

[Sanae]
卧槽触姐实力飞升啊
00:59:089 (9) - new combo
01:13:998 (6) - 这已经出边界了，拉回来吧
01:44:726 (5) - 方向右下好一些

[Alaramble]
00:07:272 (1) - 红线slider目前还是unrankable，有人在争取，但是看你能不能等到那时候了。如果急的话，改吧。
00:12:545 (1) - 尾whistle，以及前几个音都略大声了
01:04:908 (3) - finish或者其他表示重音
01:28:908 (1,2) - 交换一下new combo吧，2的变速略坑
01:38:544 (2) - 下一格
01:53:271 (1) - 红线slider
Kochiya Sanae
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>:(

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qinche
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qinche
:D hi hi bakachris


source没写？我不太熟这种音乐不知道有没有D:

[normal]

sv挺快的，问题倒没有什么

[sanae]

00:58:362 (8) - finish? 这里的建议是，8声音弱一点，00:59:089 (1) - 开始持续减弱，00:59:817 (5) - 开始绿线加强
01:04:908 (1) - 绿线声太弱了，重复上一段的绿线其实就挺不错的
02:06:908 (6) - 这之后把kiai关掉吧

这绿墙看得我压力好大……其实完全可以放个normal音效的档进去换掉clap就几乎不用这么来回切换了……一个wav也只不过20来kb不会被nazi的[stress]

[Alarmable]

whistle时有时无……可以试试看稍微用它打点节奏，00:21:999 (3) - 比如这里也可以加
00:23:817 (10) - 漏了个finish？
感觉排列的节奏不够稳，经常上一个小节一个地方在三连下一个小节就没了D:比如这里00:53:998 (3) - 其实放你上一小节用的三连也不错的……
01:04:908 (3) - 这里后面的白线上感觉像漏了一拍，补个note或者折返吧？
02:03:089 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - DDDD: didnt expect this at all


对不起我不会mod taikoD:so have my star >w</
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Hey guys
Here my mod
=========================
Blue=Suggestion Only
ReD=I think you should fix this
*Major issue are in Blod..You need to fix this

[General]
Fine for me

[Normal]
I think it's a bit weird if you're use CV1.4....Maybe CV1.0 is more suitable?
00:19:817(x)-add a note here?
00:25:817(x)-weird break :/ Probably map something here
00:43:817(3)-2 grid up
00:45:635(2)-ugly slider..well feel free to change or not
01:28:180(4.1)-swap new combo
01:34:362(1.2)-Make it more symmetrical
01:37:635(x)-add a note here and stack with (2)-like this
SPOILER

01:50:362(2)-Remove whistle

[Taiko]
00:14:544(89)-d?
00:19:453-k?
00:22:726-k?
00:30:180-No need to use 1/6 here
00:30:908-^
00:54:908(403~)-Weird 4-plets
00:55:635-^

[Sanae]
00:05:818(8)-New combo
00:18:362(11)-Weird rhythm..
00:39:089(7)-New combo
00:44:908(9)-^
Good map

[Alaramble]
00:23:090(4~6)-Remove this triplet?that's mean remove (5)
00:24:545(4~6)^
00:25:999(4~6)^
00:27:454(4.5.6)-^
00:39:454(1)-Don't change the slider speed suddenly and it 's not necessary here
00:40:909(1)-Weird rhythm
01:09:909(x)-add a note here
01:10:181(x)-^
01:45:272(7)-ugly slider
02:06:727(4)-Remove this note
Kochiya Sanae
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>:(

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wmfchris
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al2的他叫我盡力改一下 >_<
SV我下次自己注意好了 ._.
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[Normal]
:3

[Sanae]
00:07:272 (1) - [Suggestion] Delete new combo?
00:16:908 (8) - Add new combo
00:28:362 (2,3,4) - [Suggestion] Dunno but sudden 1/4 stack combo might be... ;_;
00:37:817 (5) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down(lv4) to solve spacing issue orz?
01:46:180 (2,3,4) - [Nazi] Seems little... How about fixing this spacing :3?

[Taiko]
00:03:999 (9,10,11) - Delete finish since finish position is enough on 1st part ;_;
00:22:726 ~ 00:25:635 - I can imagine some kkdkk d parts on here but patterns seems easier than others which are with less hard points on music ;_;
00:24:180 (166) - Kat
01:21:271 (609) - Delete this note and move 01:21:453 (1) into here. Make sure about spin length :3
01:34:847 (82,83) - Wonder about sudden 1/3 but seems weird imo, change into something else ;_;?
02:05:817 (3,4) - Big Kat not Big Don :3

[Alaramble]
At least, you need to check about 12 unsnapped things ;_; [Ctrl+Shift+A]
00:12:545 (1) - [Nazi] http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/50827 Dunno but it seems better shape imo ;_;
344,48,12545,6,0,B|351:184|256:152|162:184|169:46,1,320,0|2
00:13:999 - Wonder why no red line on here unlike other diffs orz
00:22:362 (4) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down?
00:59:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - Umm... Some like stacked ;_;
01:43:089 (1) - [Nazi] http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/50840 :3
01:46:544 (3,4,5) - [Nazi] Some spacing but 0.1x whatever ;_;



Da don :3?
wmfchris
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00:22:726 ~ 00:25:635 - I can imagine some kkdkk d parts on here but patterns seems easier than others which are with less hard points on music ;_;

- slow part due to the pattern refers to different instrument?
string+drum (fast) - electronic (slow) - string+drum (fast)

01:21:271 (609) - Delete this note and move 01:21:453 (1) into here. Make sure about spin length :3

My usual practice to put spinner after notes to make sure there's a sound at that point >_<

01:34:847 (82,83) - Wonder about sudden 1/3 but seems weird imo, change into something else ;_;?

I think it's fine >_<

others all fixed.

Sanae: I fixed the spacing stuffs only so if you want to fix the stackings feel free to do so lol
Kochiya Sanae
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im super noob !! >:(

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yaya
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[Sanae]
为什么多一条红线？为了修正offset？
00:54:362 (4) - no clap
00:54:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段声音太小。我感觉效果不好
01:25:635 (3) - 从这个slider开头就加大音量。
02:03:089 (1) - 停在02:04:544 最后一个音正好在白线结束。
这张音效还可以。音量掌握上比较一般。

[Alaramble]
00:16:181 (3) - bad hitsound
00:19:090 (3) - ^
00:29:636 (3) - 为什么不跟前面hitsound一致？
01:04:908 (3) - 3折+1note 。 so confused
01:25:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bad rhythm . like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51129
wmfchris
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fixed :D
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:(

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cranky~ :D
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sane
01:52:725 (4) - snap
01:53:316 (1) - snap .
wmfchris
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ok fixed~
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ok
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bubble
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[Alaramble]

Rename this difficulty to "Alarmable".

01:53:272 (1) ~ 02:04:181 (4) - Everything sounds off on this part, I suggest to remove all the notes.
wmfchris
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ok fixed
Andrea
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Much better, but I still want another BAT to check through the map before ranking it so...

Re-Bubbled~
arien666
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Not going to pop bubble but something about Taiko orz

[Taiko]
Use this timing points to seperate time signature on Taiko :3?
da code
[TimingPoints]
2909,363.636363636364,3,1,0,100,1,0
7272,363.636363636364,4,1,0,100,1,0
13999,363.636363636364,4,1,0,100,1,0
60544,363.636363636364,3,1,0,100,1,0
68180,363.636363636364,4,1,0,100,1,0
85635,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
108907,363.636363636364,3,1,0,100,1,0
125088,363.636363636364,4,1,0,100,1,0
01:21:453 (1) - Move this spinner into 01:21:270. Make sure about length :3
01:48:999 (208) - [Suggestion] Delete this note?



Whatever ;_;
Keep going orz
wmfchris
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wmfchris
timing point - fixed~

spinner - My usual practice is to add a note before spinner to show denote the musical note there, so it's ok

remove note - done.

<3
arien666
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Apple pizza again orz
Krisom
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General-
·Please, don't just repair the timing on taiko diff wihout applying it to the other diffs as well. The metronome goes crazy in the osu standars diffs and that should be fixed with arken's timing sections. Please add them to the other diffs as well.
·Offset feels off, I get around 15~17ms early. If you apply this, please don't forget to apply it to all your timing sections on all diffs.

Normal-
Consider ending your kiai at 01:48:909 - Like in the taiko diff, it feels more musically correct.

Sanae-
Lovely diff, start your kiai time at 01:25:636 - like in the other diffs though, it feels weird starting on a blue tick.
Consider ending your kiai at 01:48:909 - Like in the taiko diff, it feels more musically correct.

Alarmable-
Why is this the only diff wihout Kiai Time?
00:36:545 (1,2,1) - I strongly advise you against using symmetrical sliders that have different sliderspeeds if there are no sliderticks to recognize wich one is slower. This can throw out people who doesn't knows the song.

Popped over the bolded stuff, everything else is highly adviseable to repair too, specially the offset. and the kiai stuff. Call me back when fixed.
wmfchris
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I think the offset is fine~

other all fixed~
Krisom
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Ok then, asked around and offset seems stable.
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:)
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;)
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Hello old bubble :)

~General~
- Remove al2e10 from the Tags? I don't see any Insane diff oxo nvm x3;
- Aaaaargh... The timing at 00:07:272 - 00:12:544 and 01:53:270 - 02:05:088 is just... too unstable imo (specially the second one). If you really want to map them you would need lots of timing sections, and you're right now using only 1 for each of them x_x

~Normal~
00:07:999 (2,3,4,5,6) - This sounds so off ;~;
01:53:453 (1) - Finish this spinner 1/2 earlier, sound better (remember to move the timing section too!)

~Sanae~
00:46:544 (R) - Raise the volume to this note a bit.
00:47:817 (2) - ^
01:04:271 (x) - ^
01:15:271 (4) - ^?

~Taiko~
00:07:272 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,[...],80,81) - This sounds COMPLETELY off. As I said before, if you really need to map this piano solo you need to time it properly...
01:53:453 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,[...],293,294) - This sounds COMPLETELY off. As I said before, if you really need to map this piano solo you need to time it properly...

~Alarmable~
00:09:453 (1,2,1,1,2) - Again, this sounds off :/

I'm so sorry to pop this, but the timing is a nightmare on those two parts T__T (and unfortunately I can't help you with that x.x). Also I'd really love to see a medium diff between [Normal] and [Sanae] but oh well... xP
wmfchris
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ok all fixed~
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