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Hamazu Masashi - Cocoon de Chocobo

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Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mianki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16. tammikuuta 2011 at 16:15:06

Artist: Masashi Hamauzu
Title: Cocoon de Chocobo
Source: Final Fantasy XIII
Tags: Mukku OST
BPM: 128
Filesize: 2841kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,92 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Hard (4,79 stars, 370 notes)
  3. Mukku's Insane (5 stars, 458 notes)
  4. Normal (3,77 stars, 178 notes)
Download: Masashi Hamauzu - Cocoon de Chocobo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Chocobo theme from Final Fantasy XIII
Last edited by Mianki , edited 54 times in total.
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
~General~
Put Final Fantasy 13 OST under source and nothing in tags
Delete .osb file then full submission

~Easy~
00:57:811 (5) - Spacing
00:58:046 (6) - ^
01:17:733 (11) - 1 down grid
01:43:515 (4) - bring it down 1 grid so it’s aligned with 3

~Hard~
01:16:327(8) - looks a bit weird to me, maybe align with 7?
02:30:390 (1) - move up 1 grid to right
02:37:890 - remove kiai time

cute map
~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mianki

Haneii wrote:

~General~ Fixed
Put Final Fantasy 13 OST under source and nothing in tags
Delete .osb file then full submission

~Easy~ Fixed
00:57:811 (5) - Spacing
00:58:046 (6) - ^
01:17:733 (11) - 1 down grid
01:43:515 (4) - bring it down 1 grid so it’s aligned with 3

~Hard~ Fixed
01:16:327(8) - looks a bit weird to me, maybe align with 7?
02:30:390 (1) - move up 1 grid to right
02:37:890 - remove kiai time
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi,
notes felt a tad early, might just be me though

[easy]
fine for me
almost feels like a normal
00:42:108 (6) - new combo?

[hard]
also fine for me

could find much
nice map ;)
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~~

[Overall]
Try and keep your easy difficulty combos at ~6
You need to tone down your easy difficulty, since it is sitting over 3 stars. You need to have a difficulty under three stars to get this ranked. Either tone it down, or rename it normal and make a really easy, easy difficulty.

[Easy]
00:23:593 (3) - Too many rebounds for new players. Consider changing this.
00:42:108 (6) - New combo. Getting a bit high in combos for an easy difficulty. I'll stop mentioning this, and put a comment about it under [Overall]

[Hard]
00:52:890 through 01:03:671 - This feels more like an insane difficulty right here. Just my opinion.
02:19:140 (stream) - You could map this better. Be creative.

Nothing seriously wrong with this mapset.
You can have a star
*star*
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mianki
Both fixed
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
Hello,

[Easy]

- 00:42:577(x) : Add circle ?

[Normal]

Good !

[Hard]

- 00:28:866(x) : Add circle ?
- 00:29:100(x) : ^
- 00:32:265(8) : New combo ?


Pretty map !
Get my star !
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mianki

Slanox wrote:

[Easy]

- 00:42:577(x) : Add circle ? Didn't add

[Normal]

Good !

[Hard]

- 00:28:866(x) : Add circle ? Added
- 00:29:100(x) : ^ Didn't
- 00:32:265(8) : New combo ? Put new combo few circles ahead of this one
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Hi~
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-chocobo.jpeg resize it to 1024x768 or 800x600 or look for a better BG (remember full submit)

Nice~ Star
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
Nonii tuli tehtyä offline tilassa valmiiksi kun tää netti mikä nyt on ollu pari päivää on ihan surkea. Sen verran kuitenki toimii että pääsin tänne tuomaan tän

Saat korjailla ite modaukset kun olen lähössä lomalle tuossa parin päivän päästä. Viikon taidan viipyä.



Jaha. Jos on OD 9 jääny siihen diffiin niin voit vaihtaa kasiin jos se näyttäis paremmalta. Ei ollu tarkotus olla 9.

Download: Hamazu Masashi - Cocoon de Chocobo (Mianki) [Mukku's Insane].osu
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mianki

Astom wrote:

Hi~

[General]
-chocobo.jpeg resize it to 1024x768 or 800x600 or look for a better BG (remember full submit) Fixed

Nice~ Star
Kert
2,079 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
[General]
Delete .osb, please. Because of that, I have no BG while playing the map :#
You can add Square Enix to tags :3

[Easy]
01:42:108 (2) - maybe 1 down?

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
00:38:358 (1) - 1 right?

[Mukku's Insane]
Also fine.

Star ☆
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mianki

CracK wrote:

[General]
Delete .osb, please. Because of that, I have no BG while playing the map :#
You can add Square Enix to tags :3

[Easy]
01:42:108 (2) - maybe 1 down? Fixed

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
00:38:358 (1) - 1 right? FIxed

[Mukku's Insane]
Also fine.

Star ☆
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Nice song, you'll get a hoshi (star)!!!
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
there's an unused .osb file in your folder, delete it and full-submit again.
offset:+13
when you want to add whistle on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, add hitsounds on every beats plz.
don't use the same green line to start (or end) kiai and change the hitsounds sample (or volume). add one more timing point before kiai to change hitsounds. example:00:30:390

[Easy]
00:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is different from before... and any reason to repeat the same shape (in fact same notes?)...?
01:00:390 (2,3,4,5) - here's some to nazi...5 is not align with (3)

[Normal]
00:54:765 (5) - new combo here... and why you like this shape so much..
01:11:640 (5) - new combo

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate-1
00:39:530 (5) - move it left a bit
00:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...
01:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it's more than a Hard imo.. make them closer?
02:03:671 (2,3,4,5,6) - strange shape
02:19:140 (6) - the streams... orz... well new combo on this one.

[Mukku's Insane]
01:04:140 - 01:17:265 - no hitsounds..?
02:17:265 (11) - new combo here since this is too long ...
not sure about thouse streams... a little overmapped imo, but not a big deal
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Source: Final Fantasy XIII
  2. Tags: Mukku OST
[Normal]:
  1. 01:15:390 (6) - new combo
  2. 01:44:452 (7) - 1 grid down
[Hard]:
  1. 02:27:343 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - the OD is a bit low, so this pattern is not easily readable, players may have to go to Edit :S
[Insane]:
  1. 00:55:468 (4) - 1 grid up
  2. 01:46:093 (7) - new combo
  3. 02:17:265 (11) - ^
  4. 02:32:499 (7) - ^
  5. 02:36:952 (1) - not easy to find out which direction would the ball go, so add a SB arrow if possible.
star~
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mianki

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
there's an unused .osb file in your folder, delete it and full-submit again. Fixed
offset:+13 Fixed
when you want to add whistle on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, add hitsounds on every beats plz.
don't use the same green line to start (or end) kiai and change the hitsounds sample (or volume). add one more timing point before kiai to change hitsounds. example:00:30:390 Got it

[Easy]
00:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is different from before... and any reason to repeat the same shape (in fact same notes?)...? Wanted there small jumps, like in other diffs. Changed the pattern
01:00:390 (2,3,4,5) - here's some to nazi...5 is not align with (3)Fixed

[Normal]
00:54:765 (5) - new combo here... and why you like this shape so much.. Fixed and I like it beacuse it's "old fashioned" :D. You can see that pattern in the older maps.
01:11:640 (5) - new combo

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate-1 Fixed
00:39:530 (5) - move it left a bit Fixed
00:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ... Just jumps
01:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it's more than a Hard imo.. make them closer? Made them closer
02:03:671 (2,3,4,5,6) - strange shape Made it a circle shape
02:19:140 (6) - the streams... orz... well new combo on this one. Fixed

[Mukku's Insane]
01:04:140 - 01:17:265 - no hitsounds..? Dunno if Mukku forgot to put there hitsounds or is it on purpose. I'll ask him, when he comes back from vacation
02:17:265 (11) - new combo here since this is too long ...
not sure about thouse streams... a little overmapped imo, but not a big deal

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]: Fixed
  1. Source: Final Fantasy XIII
  2. Tags: Mukku OST
[Normal]: Fixed
  1. 01:15:390 (6) - new combo
  2. 01:44:452 (7) - 1 grid down
[Hard]:
  1. 02:27:343 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - the OD is a bit low, so this pattern is not easily readable, players may have to go to Edit :S Changed it


[Insane]:
  1. 00:55:468 (4) - 1 grid up Fixed
  2. 01:46:093 (7) - new combo Fixed
  3. 02:17:265 (11) - ^ Fixed
  4. 02:32:499 (7) - ^ Fixed
  5. 02:36:952 (1) - not easy to find out which direction would the ball go, so add a SB arrow if possible. Don't know how to do that :(

star~
Musty
2,246 posts
Joined February 2010
Musty
Hi :)
Mukku's Hard :

[00:23:599](4,5) Bad Spacing Arrange this

xD and Good map

STAR~
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mianki

Sweyax wrote:

Hi :)
Mukku's Hard :

[00:23:599](4,5) Bad Spacing Arrange this Put new combo to 5 so it looks like a jump

xD and Good map

STAR~
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Download: Masashi Hamauzu - Cocoon de Chocobo (Mianki) [Mukku's Insane].osu

Siinä olis jonkunnäkönen nuoli ja storyboard-homma, sanokaa vaan jos ette tykkää niin muokkaan kyllä. o/


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