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Makino Yui - Fuwafuwa

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Topic Starter
EnakoRin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月1日 at 16:20:14

Artist: Makino Yui
Title: Fuwafuwa
Tags: yangzd88 mengmei moe imouto
BPM: 90
Filesize: 5616kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.34 stars, 174 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 580 notes)
  3. Normal (3.74 stars, 297 notes)
  4. yznoob's special (5 stars, 615 notes)
Download: Makino Yui - Fuwafuwa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This ISN'T the Fuwafuwa Time LOL
Some sliders in Hard were studied from Krisom's ^^
Thanks Astom for this beautiful BG~
yangzd88 made INSANE for me.Thanks~
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
此歌不错的,嗯
LKs
其实我是传送来的。。百度osu吧

offest=475

注意是所有难度,而且改完之后要resnap

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map其实还可以,音效加的不太好,你听见背景音里面有自带的clap音了吧,虽然声音不大但是能听见,在那里加clap
至于finish,不要加太多,找合适的地方加就对了

关于歌曲名我更希望你用英文,而且不要用“,” 用空格

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其实你这图不止你做了。。我的一个朋友也做了,但是做的不怎么认真就是啦。。(不要参考他的offest)
(easy normal难度都无聊死了,hard难度的节奏不错)

你可以参考一下他的map是怎么做的,因为我觉得rank是没问题的
[url=http://osu.ppy.sh/b/50976]
Chris Lee - See you,Next station[/url]

加油

star
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
谢谢LS啊
受教了
EASY难度就这样吧,考虑给新人用,NORMAL难度再加大点就好了
SamiPale
star
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
嗯嗯,终于把弄错的春哥beatmap换成另一张图了
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
卧了个大槽这图猥琐到
.osb文件没用到,删了重传。
offset:+16
你需要一个3星或以下难度让你的图rank.
hitsounds……虽然现在这样够用了,不过按个人感觉显然是少些什么。


[Soft]
你不是没有custom hitsound吗。。。为什么timing线里还有C1。。。看你的线放的位置应该是要换clap,那就赶紧换。
建议把间距拉开些,0.8x Distance Spacing也就是两个circle正好贴不到的距离应该不错?另外HP Drain Rate-1
00:36:322 (3) - 右一格。
01:05:656 (3,1) - spacing?
01:13:656 (2) - 尾音whistle.
01:53:989 (4,2) - 这种像是要重合上又不重的感觉蛮怪的。。
02:24:322 (2,3) - 这样的间距不如重上呢。。
02:26:989 (2,3) - ^
03:12:322 (1,1,1) - 这个结构比较糟糕。。实话
03:22:989 (1,1,1) - ^

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate升到6,比低难还低这很难接受。。
00:52:155 (7) - 左一格可以和之前3重上,再稍微调整下6的形状好了。
00:54:989 (4,5) - 必须自重。
01:35:156 (8) - 上一格
02:44:989 (10) - nazi,右一格。
后面还是转圈接1/2note的地方感觉不对。。其他没什么了。。。我看好楼主的猥琐前途。
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
很好很好
话说我加了custom音效的啊= =难道没传上去
banvi
Hello :D

General

00:21:671 (1) SB remove timing is wrong. I think , you should remove SB(wr) in the screan at the time.
Easy
00:27:005 (n) I think , this break is not necessary. Add silder and note?
00:51:005 (5) new combo?
01:01:672 (5) ^
01:39:005 (3) ^
03:04:338 (1) Flip Vertically & 1 grid down?(grid lv3)
Soft
00:27:005 (n) I think , this break is not necessary.
Hard
00:27:005 (n) I think , this break is not necessary.
00:45:505 (1) nazi: 1 grid left?(grid lv3)
00:47:338 (10) nazi: 1 grid down?
00:59:005 (1,2,3,4) nazi: 1 grid right?
01:36:172 (2,3) uh... spacing is a bit close.
01:46:338 (13) nazi: 1 grid down?
01:52:338 (1) nazi: 1 grid right?
01:54:338 (7,8) ^
03:22:505 (1) move 03:22:672(red line)?

nicemap!! beautiful overall.
star & gl ;)
_llkey_18
hii lets go feel free for ignore its just suggestion :P

offset = 21.660 i thinks better dont forgot resnap all notes

Easy
Pretty nice ^^

Normal
cant find anything wroght

Hard
00:32:838 - how about add repeat and remove this note 00:33:505?
01:39:505 - add note there?
03:14:505 - how about change to slider and finish at 03:14:672 and add whitle at the final better ^^
03:17:172 - ^
this diff its cool ^_^

well very nice song / map star
ouranhshc
General :
  • Make sure you snap all the inherited sections to a tick (especially kiai)
    Max size for BG is 1024 by 768
    Maybe trim the mp3 since a 1/4 of it isn't use. Just forum PM me if you want me to do it.
Hard - nice diff, some of the overlaps are kinda ugly
01:09:672 (b) - map this break? it seems kinda awkward coming in on a blue tick after a break, and especially when it goes into kiai
01:44:338 (5) - new combo?
01:47:005 - maybe make this the break, and map the current break
02:37:672 (b) - map this?

Light - this diff seems less organized than the other 2
00:56:005 (1) - stack properly on (3)?
01:09:672 (B) - map this break
01:28:338 (1) - stack properly on (3)?
01:47:005 - same as Hard
02:39:005 (B) - map this break?
03:05:672 (5) - new combo
03:33:672 (9) - new combo?

Easy
01:09:672 (B) - map this break
01:47:005 - same as hard and light
02:38:005 (B) - map this break
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Good Job^^
I am going to fix it
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Finished^^
Eddotan
[Overall]
Basic SB, but some unnecesary animations could be deleted

[Easy]
2. Offset: 40.326ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) - Move this timming point to 00:40:446

[Light]
01:59:113 (4,5,6) - align this better
02:38:446 (1) - move this to the blue tick (02:38:280)
00:23:780 (6) - New combo
00:24:446 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:446 (1) - new combo
02:02:780 (1) - ^
02:03:113 (2) - remove new combo

[Hard]
All fine but, can you decrease the overall difficulty one tick?


nice map~
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Thanks a lot~
Finished
Maybe I will add a lyric after all finished
Garven
That avatar... >>
Anyway, as per your request:

[Easy]
Tick sounds~ <3
00:28:444 (2) - Lower one grid to reduce overlap?
01:04:444 (1) - Maybe angle the start a bit lower to reduce overlap?
01:04:444 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't recommend doing this in an easy. The stack might be confusing as to when the slider is going to start.
01:09:777 (1,2) - Forget some claps?
02:05:778 (1,2) - I don't like the way these two look. :/
02:51:111 (1) - This positioned where you want it? If so, angle the repeat of the 5 slider before it away from the 1.
03:12:444 (1) - Okay, the first three are already kinda pushing it for me, but doing three in a row again 03:23:111 (1) - ... I think it's over-doing the spinners. These things get tiring when you're new, and doing that many in a row for a 3.5 minute song... Try to think of something else to map, please.

[Light]
00:27:780 (2) - Move this up one grid?
00:28:446 (3) - Position this so the end lines up with the end of the 1 slider before it?
00:50:446 (6) - Maybe not stack this last one? Might be a little hard to get for normal players. Meh. Same suggestion for later iterations.
01:36:446 (2,2) - Can you try to curve these around the single note like what you did with 01:38:780 (1,2)?
There were some other minor overlaps with sliders going on, but I'll leave it to you if you want to bother with them.

[Hard]
A lot of this feels really rushed. It might be the offset, though it might also be the slider speed compared to the distance snap as well. I'm not sure. :/ I'm thinking it's the offset. I'd find someone to time this better for you... I'm having a hard time determining a better one.
Maybe reduce HP drain by 1 or so?
00:37:446 (1,2) - Some of this was kind of hard to read due the to cramped nature and anti jumps like this one.
01:17:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ugh, what a pain to read. I had to study it in Edit mode to get it right.
02:10:446 (5,1) - Spacing?
03:25:780 (1) - Why is this the only one at .5? It doesn't make sense. Do it to all of them or none.
This difficulty wasn't very fun, though it might be the offset doing that. I felt like I was just trying to catch the entire time. :/

And there you go.
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Oh very nice working~kudosu
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Fixed~
Sakura
[Storyboard]
Please avoid Storyboarded hitsounds

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Hard]
Increase OD? everything's way too cluttered.

[Light]
Fine

[Easy]
02:57:099 (1) - Awkward spinner doesnt seem to fit well with the song
03:01:766 (1,1,1) - Really weird sliders, dont seem to fit the song either.
03:09:766 (1) - This one's even weirder =(

Note: When i say that something doesnt fit with the song its for example, a spinner used on where regular hitcircles could be used, or circles and sliders, and things like that.

Easy will have to improve before i can star, ask me to remod if you need so on a forum PM
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
THX~
Tomorrow I will rebulid the Hard
Vass_Bass
Hi~
Very cute map ^_^
There are problems only with curvature circles and sliders in some places, i think you fix it yourself
Good luck, star~
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Yeah thanks
Only 20% have finished coz I have too many things today T.T
Uhh..Time to bed and it is c late in China now
I may fix it tomorrow if I won't busy= =
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
I 've rebuild the HARD
It's tired that rebulidding a beatmap,but happy while finishing= =
Curisu
看成fuwafuwa time了……K-on的影响力真大
LZ头像太给力了
虽然你是猥人但是做的图一点都不猥啊(喂)

排的不错 :)

[EZ]

OA-1
00:25:765 (3) - 挡住后面的1了
02:35:099 (1) - 转盘往前挪1/2 并延长1/2
02:59:099 (4,5) - 排的不太好……要不这样吧……


[Light]

(难度名……要不就E,N,H或者Light,Medium,Heavy吧……这样有点怪怪的 :? )
00:23:099 (5) - 换成slider
00:25:765 (7) - ^
01:14:432 (6) - 挡住后面的1了
02:30:766 (2) - 挡住后面的3了
02:48:432 (1) - 转盘往前挪1/2 并延长1/2

About Hitsounds
SPOILER
01:15:099 (1) - Finish
01:17:766 (2) - ^
01:20:432 (2) - ^
01:25:766 (1) - ^
01:28:432 (1) - ^
01:31:099 (2) - ^
02:40:432 (1) - ^
02:43:099 (2) - ^
02:45:766 (2) - ^
02:51:099 (1) - ^
02:53:766 (1) - ^
02:56:432 (1) - ^

[HD]
陷阱如此的多…… :?
00:36:266 (4) - 挡住后面的6了
00:45:599 (1,2,3,4) - 这段排的如此蛋疼……很难看清楚
00:51:432 (4,5,6) - ^
01:01:265 (1,2,3,4) - ^

×Good Work!×
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

Delete osb.file and fully submit

[Easy]
Seems fine.

[Light]
02:12:432 (3) - fix this slider to that it is straight (horizontally) ...its sorta on a slight angle and looks bad
Then resnap...
Seems fine.

[Hard]
AIMOD detects 27 spacing problems...um...but it turns into 260 once your fix one of them...Check it out...
03:12:432 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 03:13:766
03:15:099 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 03:16:432
03:17:766 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 03:19:099
03:28:432 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 03:29:766
01:01:266 - 01:02:932 - this to me...seems overly clustered...maybe change up the design, or leave it that way...

Overall...Its a good map, well done, and a nice song.

~STAR GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
唔嚯……被kon洗脑的急需自重
话说什么样的beatmap才叫猥呢= =
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OK fixed,Thx a lot
If the offset is correct I will add lyric
Curisu
←并不看k-on 其实是被低阶婆婆洗脑的


以下内容我什么都不知道

Topic Starter
EnakoRin
唔嚯……谢谢提醒,我忘编辑主题了
要说被洗脑果然还是教祖和兄贵才行
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
OK I've finished 20% lyrics
Tomorrow will do the others
Cirno
nice map 撸过给星>.>
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

timpks wrote:

nice map 撸过给星>.>
各种基情四射啊
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
I've finished the lyric but I couldn't upload it now- -
OSU Server is maintaining?
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Thumbs.db 在歌词文件夹里 删掉重传
  2. white.png yui.jpg 改800x600后重传 SB里的Scale里参数从0.625改成0.8即可(如果你是手动设置的Scale参数的话 鼠标拖出来的参数可能会不太一样 不过应该很接近0.625)
  3. Tags: Makino Yui Fuwafuwa 这俩都不用加的...移除
[Easy]:
  1. 01:12:923 (T) - 加note normal里也调整下
  2. 02:21:099 (2,1) - 唔 不好看
[Normal]:
  1. 02:40:266 (T) - 加根绿线 音量和后面那根一样
[Hard]:
  1. 00:59:599 (2) - 这个做成一个带折返的slider后在00:59:766加个clap 或者3个note..
  2. 01:11:766 (11) - clap
  3. 01:12:932 (4) - finish
  4. 01:13:599 (7) - ^
  5. 01:46:766 01:47:099(T) - 分别加2个note 后面那个用finish 把KIAI的结束线移到后面的note上
  6. 02:28:432 (5,6,7) - spacing
感觉很多地方加上finish会更好一点 比如KIAI部分的「大好き」中的だ那个音上.
Hard感觉OA8有点高了 但是7肯定看不清那些猥琐的排布 :S
音效比上一张我看的时候好很多了 加油~
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
谢谢~
Done
Colin Hou
Tags那两条怎么还在呢...

Title和Artist是不需要再在Tags里出现的

如果有时间的话很想做一个GD来着 OTL 残念...

no kds for this post.
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Colin Hou wrote:

Tags那两条怎么还在呢...

Title和Artist是不需要再在Tags里出现的

如果有时间的话很想做一个GD来着 OTL 残念...

no kds for this post.
(一不小心忘了删掉了- -
La Cataline
hi~
sorry for the delay,

[overall]
  1. cute map <3
  2. sb is also fine
  3. 02:40:432 this KIAI is extremely long
[easy]
suggestions only
otherwise, fine

*
Kurai
:3

Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]

Fine too

[Hard]
Fine again

Star
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Thanks~
kino77
OOOOOOOOH...I'm working on this song then I found mod request in my queue...OTL
Anyway,mod come up late~
Star for now~ :)

EDIT:hihi~here~

[Normal]
声音稍微小了一点,调大2-3格这样?
00:24:099 (1,2) - 交换new combo?
00:40:099 (1,2) - ^
00:56:099 (1,2) - ^
01:06:765 (1,2) - ^
01:22:432 (1,2) - ^
01:30:766 (1,2) - ^
01:33:099 (1,2) - ^
01:42:432 (1) - 去掉new combo?
02:02:766 (1,2) - 交换new combo?
02:05:432 (1,2) - ^
02:42:765 (1,2) - ^
02:45:432 (1,2) - ^
02:48:099 (1) - 把spin往后挪1/2,然后在这里加note?

[Hard]
00:37:432 (1,2) - 交换new combo?
00:39:932 (1) - 去掉new combo?
00:40:432 (4) - New combo?
00:41:765 (1) - 去掉new combo?
00:45:432 - 加个note?
00:50:265 (9,10,1,2,3) - 被挡道了好难看清呢..
01:17:265 (1) - 去掉new combo?
01:17:765 (4) - New combo?
02:41:099 (2,3) - 没有重叠呢..
03:00:265 (8,1) - > <挡住了

总体来说很好呢~撒星星咯~ :)
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Waiting for your moding
-3-说中文不就好了
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
GJ~
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Done~
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
1) lrc43 are not fade out!
2) No tags?

[Easy]
HP Drain is toooo high.......

01:13:432 (2,3) - Not stack perfectly with 01:12:432 (1)
03:01:766 (1) - xoo (x = Finish)

[Normal]
00:31:099 (5) - New combo, I guess? (Since thie pattern are changed)
00:59:765 (3) - Move 1 grid up?

[Hard]
00:37:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - When I test this song, this pattern is hard to see, I guess

GOod song
STAR

P.S It's extremely awesome if the BPM turn into 180 or 360, lol
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
^^Niice work!
I am going to fix it
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Done~
JhnySmthApl
Flawless to me~
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
aha~
aRiskOfRain
Normal;

00:49:765 (5) - 1 less repeat.

Hard;

00:35:099 (1,2) - This jump is silly
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Done~Thank you sir -3-
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