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Takenobu Mitsuyoshi - Nozomi and Ryo

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Real1
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Real1
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 3 december 2010 at 20:31:29

Artist: Takenobu Mitsuyoshi
Title: Nozomi and Ryo
Source: Shenmue
Tags: dreamcast yu suzuki harasaki hazuki sega
BPM: 69,97
Filesize: 6459kb
Play Time: 02:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Childhood Friends (2,44 stars, 163 notes)
  2. Friends (1,06 stars, 115 notes)
  3. Lovers (4,45 stars, 292 notes)
Download: Takenobu Mitsuyoshi - Nozomi and Ryo
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Pretty Shenmue map. This is my way of passing time while waiting and hoping for SEGA to announce Shenmue III.

Enjoy this pretty old map.
Keep the hope alive!

Real1



Thanks for modding: Hikato, H-boy, Sallad4ever, YGOkid8, Nivalis, Frill, Xgor
Last edited by Real1 , edited 11 times in total.
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
[Friends]
Picky mod: 01:15:202 (4) - one grid up.
01:33:209 (1) - Align with 3.
01:37:926 (2,3,4,5) - Pattern looks a little messy. Make it like 02:46:523 (2,3,4,5)
Picky mod: 02:40:951 (4) - one grid down and right.

[Childhood Friends]
00:55:479 (1) - Possibly intentional but I'll mention it anyway. It's uneven.
02:06:017 (x) - Add a beat.

[Lovers]
00:29:754 (3) - This looks stangely spaced.
00:59:338 (10) - Align it with 9.
01:16:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really like these. I think it can be arranged in a more creative way if you tried.
02:06:017 (x) - Add a beat.
02:19:948 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern looks sort of messy.
01:35:782 (4) - The only problem AIMod finds, so I'll point it out too. :D spacing.

Mostly suggestions. Didn't find anything majorly wrong.

Nice calming map and song. :)
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Real1
Fixed most except 01:16:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7). It's an awesome part if you ask me. And the only really hard part of the map.

Thanks a lot!
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Blue: just my suggestions
Friends
1. 01:22:919~01:42:642 i think the hitsound is unsuitable to this tunes.you need turn down the volume.
00:55:479(1) - add a finish at end,and use 00:569:80(T)turn down the volume,use 00:57:408(T)resume the volume
01:01:482(3) - make it symmetry with 01:00:624(1)
01:05:769(1) - no repeat,add whistle at end,then 01:07:055(x) add a slider stop at[01:07:484] and +1 repeat,
finally 01:08:342(X) add a note with whistle
01:09:199(1) - the same with 00:55:479(1)
02:13:519(1) - make it symmetry
02:40:951(4) - make it symmetry with 02:40:094(2)
Childhood Friends
1. 01:22:919~01:42:642 turn down the volume.
00:54:193(4) - remove hitsound
00:54:621(5) - add a whistle hitsound
00:55:479(1) - add a finish at end,and use 00:569:80(T)turn down the volume,use 00:57:408(T)resume the volume
00:59:766(7) - romove finish
Lovers
1. 01:22:919~01:42:642 turn down the volume.
01:21:419(X) - note
01:22:276(5) - remove note
01:22:491(6) - ^
02:14:376(1) - make it symmetry
02:17:805(1) - ^

star~
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Yay another shenmue song :)

This kind of calming song is very refreshing for me :)

My only complain is that I sometime lost sight of the cursor because of the white combo color and the kiai make it even worse maybe change the white combo color?

A star for you and yes don't stop our hope for shenmue 3 as sega still willing to resurrect it

"Keep your friends, those you love, close to you" :D
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
General:
- You, er... got 4 .osb files in your Song Folder. Delete all 4 of them and Full Submit
- Another thing: A problem I have with this map is with the spinners. Because of the colour of the spinner/spinner background/cursor, I can't see my cursor while spinning. Is it possible to change the colour of the cursor so it stands out more?

eh... nothing else I can find... fix the above and I'll give you a pubble
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
Starred.
Last edited by DeathxShinigami , edited 1 time in total.
Real1
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Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Real1

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Starred.
No it's not.... :?
aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain
Starred.
gyt
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Here since the beginning
gyt
Starred?
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Real1

gyt wrote:

Starred?

DiamondCrash wrote:

Starred.

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Starred.
Thanks everyone <3
Niva
Global Moderator
3,190 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Hi Real1! :P

[General]
I don't find any fatal errors on this map, except there are three unused .osb on the songs folder.
And also, I can't see the "SS" and "S" symbol on the break clearly. Maybe because of that shine.

[Friends]
00:46:904 (1) - Like this perhaps?
SPOILER
01:30:637 (3) - Eh... one grid up?
02:10:947 (3) - One grid right? (better triangle)

[Childhood Friends]
00:43:902 (5,6,7,8) - One grid right?

[Lovers]
00:34:899 (2) - Sounds ugly and forced. Maybe add inheriting section with half speed?
02:40:094 (3) - Hmm... it's not perfectly diagonal. Maybe copy-paste from 02:39:236 (2) and rotate 45 degrees?

Very relaxing song, I wish more mappers could map these kind of songs :P
Star!
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Frill
[Friends]

01:44:786 (2) - remove whistle ?
01:45:215 (3) - add whistle ?

[Childhood Friends]

good.

[Lovers]

01:50:360 (1) - um..add finsih?

Nice map~ ^-^

+Star
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Revived. oxo
Larto
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Larto
Revived.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Hej Hej!

[General]
Maybe add Dreamcast to tags.

I don't think kiai fit's for this song.

[Friends]
Slider tick rate 1 fits better imo.

01:29:351 (2) - I suggest you add a new combo here for consistency
01:39:212 (5) - I think this looks better if you move this 3 grids to the left and one grid up.

[Childhood Friends]
01:06:841 (3) - This circle feels just added on for difficulty and don't fit the song
01:25:492 (5) - Move one grid down and one grid to the right for symmetry.
02:19:091 (4,5,6) - I don't think the whistles fits here.

[Lovers]
Could use a bit less whistles...

That's it.
Should be ready for a rank.
*star*
minyeob
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minyeob
ehhh why is the map in WIP/Help ;__;
Real1
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Real1

minyeob wrote:

ehhh why is the map in WIP/Help ;__;
What the? I sure as hell havent moved it there!

*Moves back*

Nice to see you again minyeob. Thanks for star!
Real1
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Real1
T_T
gyt
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Here since the beginning
gyt
T_T
SPOILER
Real1
968 posts
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Real1

gyt wrote:

T_T
SPOILER
Haha, what the hell is that?

Man... I feel like giving up on maps... It's getting quite ridiculous. No map ranked since May and hardly anyone cares for the five maps I want ranked... It's fun making maps... But it's not so fun being ignored. Thanks for caring gyt, you're one of very few!
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