Blue Dragon wrote:

Easy
00:14:966 (1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - No, please. This is not a mappable part for easy. Follows piano and claps (of the song) if you listen carefully.
01:01:110 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:565 (3) - add new combo
01:09:748 (1) - remove this and insert a break Nah... unless other peeps have probs.
01:56:576 (1) - same as 01:01
02:00:031 (3) - same as 01:04
02:05:214 (1) - long spinner :< is it really... a bad thing?
02:26:474 (1,2,3) - make sliders, like... go to the center can't, because of spacing ;_;
02:57:198 (5) - ugly and doesn't fit
03:00:653 (1) - long spinner same here.

Normal
01:04:997 (3) - new combo?
01:09:748 (1) - pretty long spinner =="
01:19:323 (1) - remove new combo...
01:19:757 (2) - ...and add here
02:00:463 (3) - same as 01:04
02:05:214 (1) - same as 01:09
02:29:073 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - really can't understand the new combos if i didn't, it'd be an unnecessarily long Combo.

Insane
00:15:831 (5) - align with 4
00:42:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA XD

Star

JarJarJacob wrote:

Your timing is...off? Quite. That black hitcircle colour is hard to see against the background, might want to change it. This map is lacking decent-sized breaks, use them. Insane has unsnapped objects.

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Easy]
00:52:473 (3) - new combo
01:47:939 (3) - ^
02:01:759 (2) - ^
02:43:378 (3) - ^
02:49:856 (2) - ^
02:57:198 (5) - ^ Fixed all.

[Normal]
00:23:843 (6) - add clap
00:28:618 (1) - whitsle at last
00:30:137 (2) - clap at last
00:31:439 (3) - make symmetry or flip vertically 00:31:439 (3) to be good-looking layout
01:06:725 (1) - add one more return
01:19:323 (6) - add clap
01:25:616 (2) - clap at last
01:26:918 (3) - make symmetry or flip vertically 01:28:654 (4) to be good-looking layout
01:54:849 (3) - add clap at second return
02:02:191 (1) - add one more return
02:21:710 (1) - add clap
02:28:640 (4) - add clap at the beginning Fixed all as well (i think)

[Insane]
00:16:264 (6) - align with 00:15:831 (5) ?? already aligned
00:23:843 (5) - add clap
00:25:579 (4) - ^
00:27:315 (4) - ^
00:32:524 (4) - ^
00:33:826 (3) - add clap at the beginning
00:39:468 (7) - add clap
00:41:204 (5) - ^
00:43:591 (13) - ^
00:45:327 (12) - ^
00:56:791 (2) - ^
00:59:383 (3) - ^
01:00:247 (7) - ^
01:03:702 (4) - add clap at the beginning
01:05:429 (4) - ^
01:19:323 (4) - add clap
01:22:795 (4) - ^
01:28:004 (4) - ^
01:29:740 (4) - ^
01:34:947 (6) - ^
01:48:802 (5) - ^
01:52:257 (2) - ^
01:55:713 (7) - ^
01:59:168 (4) - add clap at the beginning
02:00:895 (4) - ^
02:04:350 (6) - ^
02:16:080 (2) - add clap at the last
02:23:009 (2) - ^
02:30:372 (6) - add clap
02:32:104 (6) - ^
02:44:241 (5) - ^
02:48:344 (5) - align with 02:48:128 (4)
02:50:288 (3) - add clap
02:51:152 (7) - ^
02:54:607 (4) - add clap at the beginning
02:56:334 (4) - ^

Breeze wrote:

I got a BPM : 138.5 Offset : 21281
you didn't need to use so many timing section, there are few songs need to use many timing section
your notes are off at the middle part
I could help you to ask for a timing help if you want
send me a forum if you have changed BPM and Offset I posted
Or tell me you want a timing help, so I would ask other players who good at timing to have a timing check

Breeze wrote:

OK, after you changed BPM
Recheck

[General]

1. osb.file didn't used, please delete it and full submit

[Easy]

1. 00:17:597 - spinner starts here sounds better but, makes more sense for it to start where it is already D:
2. 00:22:146 - 00:42:074 - I think these notes are hard for beginner, 'cause they are not apart same beat
   I suggest use slider to make them easier will change if i really MUST change it, or someone else suggest to as well
3. 00:56:586 (1,2) - a slider at 00:56:586 - 00:57:453 and a note at 00:57:886 fit more imo
4. 01:16:731 - 01:37:525 - hard to beginner, use slider or put note at every two white tick, that would be easy
5. 01:52:037 (1,2) - same to 00:56:586 (1,2)

[Normal]

1. 01:41:207 - 01:44:889 - too empty there, add something or add break was originally a break here... don't know what happened. Fixed~

[Insane]

1. 00:58:211 (1,2) - move them 1/8 back so they would fit "haha" :/ a bit hard to hit, but I thinks it's OK for a insane diff.
   01:53:554 (1,2) - ^
   02:49:005 (1,2) - ^

imo, it sounds too early when I move them back.

now have a star

Leorda wrote:

Hello!

[General]
1) Source? no source. Just a song I heard from the radio that I really liked

[Easy]
02:17:380 (B) - This breaks are too short, remove it

[Normal]
02:17:380 (B) - This breaks are too short, remove it

[Insane]
02:17:380 (B) - This breaks are too short, remove it

GREAT MAP!
STAR

DJPop wrote:

Hisounds are too loud, volume shouldn't be more than 70.
BPM: 138.498 <<< you don't have to change it anyway =P lol, will save myself trouble and not change. But if someone else thinks this timing is good, will change


~Easy~
01:16:731 (1) - add hitfinish?

~Normal~
00:19:546 (1,2) - wrong spacing
00:23:879 (6,1) - ^
01:19:330 (6,1) - ^
02:33:842 (1) - move the end 1/4 right

~Insane~
Fine.


+Star

termerys wrote:

[Insane]
[suggestion]: i think there is too much notes, I suggest you to make some notes into sliders (it's up to you :3)
anyway, it such a great map!!

liknkin park!!!

JInxyjem wrote:

You should remove Black and then make Grey a little darker (but not totally black), its hard to see. ok~

All Difficulties
00:49:655 - Make kiai start here instead of earlier.
01:45:106 - ^
02:40:557 - ^ IMO, Kiai looks better when it starts from where it is already ^^

Starred.

sonnyc wrote:

Hi

Easy

• Good

Normal

• 01:02:001 (6) New combo
  01:57:453 (6) ^

I didn't change it to these, but it gave me another idea of where to start the New Combo, so have your kudosu!

Hard

• Good

Insane

• Good

star

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
[General] The whole mode was good, but there are some sections - like from 00:22:146 to 00:42:074 where spacing isn't uniform... That can disorient beginners, so try to find an uniform spacing... Really? I used 0.7x Distance Snap for all of Easy, so it should be uniform

Normal
00:42:940 (spinner) - start it on 00:42:507 (same end point) Nah~
00:52:471 (2) - add finish on this slider's 2nd repeat
01:47:922 (2) - ^
02:44:240 (1) - finish here Nah~, I put Clap instead

Hard (Collab)
...sounds like it's still incomplete... I'll check it later, then.

Insane
Ok, even if there aren't so much sliders, it's fine!

This curious style of mapping merits another star!

Lizbeth wrote:

Sry for the delay ><

All diff
Remember to place inherited timing sections that have a different sound effect, before the note, not on top Ehrm, why? Does it matter that much? O.o

Insane
00:47:272 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - it would sound nice normal hit in this part *.* (volume 40%) [Just a suggestion] Good suggestion, but I feel it no work >.<
00:49:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you space this evenly? to avoid confusion... maybe move 3, 4 more to both sides... [Just a suggestion]No thank you~
00:57:886 (6,1,2) - i never hit that right >< is kinda confusing.. but let see if someone else complain about it
01:19:980 (1) - extend 1/2 and remove 2? No thanks~
01:42:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - same of the normal hit volume 40%
01:45:106 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as before
02:17:380 - im not sure about this blank space.. insert break maybe? Last time, Leorda complained it being too short, but I'll re-add and see what people think again.

acording to the first post, Collab isnt finish, so i ll skip it.

Normal
02:17:380 - same as Insane
02:33:842 (1) - the endpoint sounds weird, i know it was to make it match the vocals, but doesnt look right (you finish it in white tick in Insane diff.) This was mistake. Wasn't meant to be like this O_O

Easy
Decrase overall difficulty by a tick or 2
Technically the map is good, but this difficultiy was the hardest to play for me, random circle all over the place confuse me, and you use red ticks in some parts that was hard to read imo. I suggest you keep a constant rhythm cuz this diff is basically for beginner. hm, okay. Will remap some.

I hope my modding can be useful
Good luck!
Star

Doomsday93 wrote:

Ok, lesse here

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these .

1. Im a tad wary about the offset, but I can't settle on one to suggest. this seems to work fine so I'll leave it
2. White and Grey combo colours play pretty badly in tag games (grey more so), and can be hard to see for some. Is there some other colours you could use? Well... not really, there aren't any other colours that suit the song besides black. And as MB777 said, the only way to decently change it is a different background... but all the other BGs for this song suck D:

[EASY]

Looks good

[NORMAL]

Great

[HARD (COLLAB)]

Perhaps you could have the storyboarded mappers names fade in/fade out rather than just instantly dissappear and reappear. It'd look better than way Okay, I'll give it a shot... or MB777 will, but oh well.

02:45:106 (1,1) - Auto only just gets +2000 on these spinners. Thats fine, but can you still make them longer somehow? Personally, I think you should just have one spinner here instead of 2.

[INSANE]

In parts of this map, youve put down massive streams, mapping to some of Jay-Z's parts. I can see what you're mapping to, but it still feels a bit too overmapped. Is there any other way you could map them? for streams here, you should stick to 5-7 notes max. At the moment, nothing comes to mind, so I'll just leave it be for the time being

00:07:416 to 00:21:279 - Maybe you could map this little intro bit in 0.5x BPM? Gave it a shot. Just doesn't work properly D:

Not too bad. Perhaps you could do some more with the layout in your mexy map though. you used a lot of right-angles in your patterns, which aren't much to look at. It plays fairly well though, but thats something to keep in mind. not going to change anything for now, but thanks for the advice

Starred

NoHItter wrote:

Easy
00:49:005 (x) - Why does kiai start here where there's no note present? What, does Kiai Time need to start on a beat? ...Anyway, I started there, cause it made more sense with the music.
01:44:456 (x) - ^
02:39:907 (x) - ^

Normal
00:49:005 (x) - Why does kiai start here where there's no note present?
01:44:456 (x) - ^
02:39:907 (x) - ^

I would list down nazi suggestions but nevermind.
[e.g. on Insane 02:55:936(2) - Align this with (1) ]