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Kawada Mami - a frame

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ShanaTan
184 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ShanaTan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 08, 2009 at 5:49:17 PM

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: a frame
Source: Prophecy (the CD)
Tags: OVA Shakugan no Shana S OP Single - Prophecy
BPM: 140
Filesize: 9579kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 175 notes)
  2. Hard (3.9 stars, 354 notes)
  3. Insane (4.95 stars, 495 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - a frame
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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26/11-09 Added the almost completed Normal/Hard Mode.
27/11-09 Added the complete Normal/Hard Mode and a taste of the Insane Mode.
28/11-09 Added Easy mode and updated Hard mode. (Trying to find a better background =P)
29/11-09 Added the complete Insane Mode + new backgrounds. (Couldn't really find any good Mami ones so I used some of Shana instead considering that a Frame was released with Prophecy) Only 1 of 3 bgs were uploaded though fixing it soon.
01/12-09 Updated Easy, Hard and Insane. Added background, added hitsounds, fixed timing (I hope=P).
05/12-09 Updated Easy, Hard and Insane.
08/12-09 Updates Easy and Hard.
Last edited by ShanaTan , edited 14 times in total.
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran
OSU! Timing Help!
BPM 140
Offset 325
Good Luck!
Droid803
22 posts
Joined August 2009
Droid803
Hi. Random mod time.
Anything with a ? after is purely a stylistic suggestion.
Most of it is, really.

[All Difficulties]
Turn On Distance Snap - there are quite a few spacing inconsistencies. (Or just go over and make sure the notes are snapped)
You have quite a few long sliders. Maybe you could make some slider art with them? :)
Needs a good background image.

[Normal/Hard]
You could probably just call it Normal, or Normal+ if you must.

00:26:046 (4) - Shorten so that each bounce is from white to white and add an extra movement?
00:46:082 (3) - ^
00:53:089 (4) - Extend to 00:54:075
01:09:053 - Start Kiai Time
01:16:018 (8) - Make into a slider that ends at 01:17:046?
01:18:032 (1) - Shorten to 01:20:089, (insert break time after?)
01:36:043 - End Kiai Time
01:51:053 (6) - Wha~ sudden difficulty spike?
02:15:096 - Insert break time?
02:24:032 (10) - Extend to 02:26:068
02:29:068 - Insert break time?
02:43:028 - ^
02:52:018 (8) - Make into a slider that ends at 02:53:046?
02:59:014 - Start Kiai Time
03:19:061 (7) - ^ that ends at 03:20:091?
03:28:018 - End Kiai Time. You could probably end the map here - you don't need to map the whole song. In fact, too long becomes tiring. (?)
03:28:061 (1) - Cut down on the number of new combos, to about half or a quarter (one every two or four sliders)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes. (Add again please on all difficulties, I don't see the background.)
Source: No. Find some source if possible.)
Tags: Yes.
File Size: 9,69MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 140,00 - Offset: 328 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase HP Drain by 1 tick for balance with Overall difficulty?

Spacing is too high for an easy map. Consider to use more close spacing.

You need to add hitsounds.

For add the kiai time don't use new offsets. Go on timing -> timing setup panel and add a section. Delete all the offset. The 1st no sure.

00:29:068 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:32:046 (5) - New combo.
00:50:025 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:53:003 (5) - New combo.
01:08:003 (1) - Shorten it by 1/2.
01:15:053 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:23:046 (2) - New combo.
01:29:025 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:50:003 (7) - New combo.
01:50:046 (8,9,10,11) - This spacing can confuse new players. Adjust it.
02:13:039 (8) - New combo.
02:13:039 (8,9) - Too hard for an easy map.
02:27:011 (8,9) - ^
02:59:046 (6) - New combo.
03:13:018 (2) - ^
03:51:075 (4,1,2) - Too hard for an easy map.

[Hard]

Same here, needs hitsounds.

Same here about the kiai time too.

00:45:011 (8,9,1,2) - Spacing.
01:05:089 (4) - New combo.
01:36:032 (6) - ^
01:36:053 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:52:082 (4,5,6,7) - Spacing.
02:37:082 (7,8) - Spacing, too close.
03:17:025 (2,3) - ^

[Insane]

I see the background only on this difficulty. Add on Easy and Hard again and full submit.

Same on this difficulty, needs hitsounds.

00:21:075 (4) - New combo.
00:42:032 (4) - ^
00:54:011 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:096 (2) - New combo.
01:13:082 (3) - Weird slider and unrankable, change it.
01:27:053 (3) - Shorten it by 1/4.
01:36:032 (1) - Starting from here you have notes on blue lines, because you placed bad the offset. Remove that offset and resnap all notes.
02:59:025 (1) - ^
03:29:025 (1) - ^
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Easy
02:21:032 (1) - move it 2-3 squares upper and right, further from the slider
02:27:011 (1) - move it 4 squares right
02:59:047 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - ... this kiai time is as mapped as the previous one... invent something more original!
03:54:011 (5) - try to replace this slider with a spinner or lower to 0 the hitsounds's volume

Hard
01:15:011 (5) - new combo
01:30:097 (6) - move it exactly to the slider's end
01:40:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - quite monotone... try to add sliders, too.
01:50:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ... pretty confusing... try to use some sliders or check spacing u.u
02:59:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ... can normal eyes understand this passage easily? >.< check spacing and don't set them one on each other in that way...
03:04:018 (3,4) - again, other beats covering a slider... move them somewhere
03:54:011 (9) - like on Easy, replace it with a spinner or remove hitsounds's volume for this slider

Insane
00:50:089 (4,5) - another spacing problem... make the 5th beat far away the 4th
02:13:082 (4) - new combo
02:27:053 (4) - ^
03:32:046 (3) - ^
03:54:010 (6) - *sigh* like for the other modes, replace this slider with a spinner or set this slider's hitsound volume to 0

... sadly, spacing between beats and sliders changes VERY often, and that's no good, even for an Insane mode.
Plus, hitsound placing is quite weird... I mean, it's ok to set sound, but it's not necessary all the time!
And most important... WHY only whistles? By placing only whistles, the song's rhythm isn't very catchy... try to set claps and finish hitsounds, too x3
I know there's a lot of work to do, but don't give up! ;3

Insane
ShanaTan
184 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ShanaTan
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Droid803
22 posts
Joined August 2009
Droid803
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ShanaTan
184 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ShanaTan
Updated...

Thanks for the star ^^

Ye I know that the score might be a bit too high but I've seen alot of maps lately that goes waaaay high so I was hoping this one could too, if it can't get ranked I'll change it of course but I don't really want to remove anything =P.
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Sorry for the delay~ a general mod incoming~ No nazing

[Easy]
01:39:756 (1) - Snap these please =p
03:49:827 (1) - New Combo

Overall this diff is kinda hard, I'm amazed it has such a low star rating.

Also the sliders can really be made more precise/pretty? =p At the moment it makes me go >:

Set a Preview Point.

Nice diff

[Hard]

02:58:396 (1,2) - < not snapped
03:10:825 (1,2) - ^
03:11:682 (7,8) - ^

You really hate making sliders nice ? =p

Set a Preview Point.

[Insane]

Oh noes, don't shoot me.. but you saw this one coming =p
Almost all the sliders here wants to me me scream arhh! and shoot someone =p

Also a ton of unsnapped notes. Resnap please~

02:52:180 (2) - < Un-rankable I think =p

Set a Preview Point.

This diff still needs a lot of work. But it has some really nice parts~ the end was very nice to play.
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