1. GbL's Difficulty (4.97 stars, 543 notes)
2. gdeath's Normal+ (4.23 stars, 217 notes)
3. Hard (4.81 stars, 307 notes)
4. Normal- (3.32 stars, 98 notes)

kino77 wrote:

[Easy]
All the things going well,Replace some sliders as cricles?

[Normal]
00:43:20(1)-Replace circle as slider,start here 00:43:20 end here 00:43:38?
00:48:55-01:05:05(all)-Fell weird...
01:05:40(1,2)-As pic shows?
01:28:55(2,3)-End 2 here 01:28:75,end 3 here 01:29:50?
01:46:89(3)-End slider here 01:47:46?
02:20:05(x)-Add one cricle here?
02:20:77(4)-End slider here 02:20:97?
02:22:82(8)-End slider here 02:23:00?
02:23:75(2)-End slider here 02:24:48?
02:36:33(3)-End slider here 02:36:70?
02:40:78(1)-End spinner here 02:45:21?

[Hard]
00:52:46(8)-End spinner here 00:52:83?
KIAI TIME-Make a slider as logo "LP"?Its just a suggestion~
Other things great~I like it~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Offset: 21342 (but I'm not that good at this)

Easy:
snap everything to the timeline, it does not look like you resnapped things after you changed the offset
00:21:52 (1) - this is going to make people very sad to restart the song. You are going to have to do a spinner, wait 15s, and then play the rest of the map. You might as well just not have this spinner. deleted
00:51:16 (5,6,7) - move back half a beat to follow the lyrics because all your sliders seem to follow the lyrics not the drums fixed
01:13:56 (1,1,1) - this new combo spam seems random fixed
01:25:41 (1,1,1) - " " fixed

Hard:
01:13:18 (1,1,1,1) - same as easy fixed
01:18:74 (6) - new combo fixed
01:25:03 (1,1,1,1) - same as easy fixed
01:52:06 (1) - 1k bonus spinner (illegal) don't need ,THX
01:57:62 (6) - shorten by half a beat fixed
02:00:58 (1,1,1,1) - this new combo spam seems random fixed
02:12:43 (1,1,1,1) - " " fixed
02:37:79 (1) - illegal to have a note and a spinner overlap fixed
02:37:79 (1,1,1,1) - illegal to have spinners overlap don't need ,THX
get rid of the final timing section because there is no need to turn off kiai when the song ends

Star.

tsukamaete wrote:

oh danmmit add reply faild

I have to rewite

hmm..
The beatmap not bad ,anything goes well
but just a little boring
may be u can make this map more interesting?
example jumps note or more high distance spacing

It's just my suggestions
have a star!

Teara wrote:

gdeath's normal+

00:14:12 (4) - New Combo
00:15:60 (1) - ^
00:17:08 (1) - ^
00:18:56 (1) - ^
00:19:68 (1) - Remove combo
00:20:05 (1) - New Combo
00:21:53 (1) - ^
00:23:01 (1) - ^
01:06:89 (1) - New Combo?

I would use kiai here > 02:29:281 to 02:34:835 ? this is a epic part of the song. should have kiai!

Nice beatmap. Maybe put Overall Difficulty on 5? it feels so slow otherwise, it it plays a lot better for me and more fun

eee wrote:

[gdeath]
00:24:40 (break) - you want this break like that? or reinsert?, if you want to keep it "ouendan/eba style" I would start it 00:24:49
01:50:21 (6) - one more reverse would be nice to match the following slider :/

GbL wrote:

[gdeath]:

00:24:72 - fix break

eee wrote:

[Easy]
No real concerns here~
I just felt that it was very short ><. 40-50 seconds is fine, but very short for a non TV-Size


[Hard]
00:52:51 (8) - why doesn't this begin on the 1/4 red tick here 00:52:450
01:04:67 (1) - this MUST begin back 1/2 or removed or whatever to make it longer. There is a rule in which a spinner must be long enough to get 2000+ bonus points when auto plays it, this spinner gets 1000
02:37:79 (1,1,1,1) - sorry, this is Illegal by osu rules and regulations too. Spinner ends and beginnings cannot be stacked on top of each other. you can begin every additional spinner 1/4-1/8 after the end of the previous one.
etna sliders are a nice touch ><

GbL wrote:

Very nice map, i liked it.

[Hard]:

02:19:65: circle here
02:25:76: ^


Star.

Armin wrote:

Let's mod! D:
[Hard]
01:52:06 Unrankable spinner
02:38:63 ^
02:39:37 ^
02:40:11 ^

That's all.
(oh, and star.)

Breeze wrote:

Linkin Park, great

说中文没问题吧?
黑色的note建议改下颜色,不大看得清楚 把黑色换成绿色，不知道效果如何
OFFSET也是建议三个diff.都用同一个的比较好,OFFSET:12645 我自己感觉没太大必要:)

[easy]
02:14:835 - 这个timing section貌似没什么意义,不过这个不是什么问题... 我弄小了一点声音

[hard]
02:53:905 (5,6,7,8) - 这里可以用jump规则排列到角落,只是纯建议而已... 我个人不太喜欢JUMP，所以谢谢你的意见:)


很棒的map
star for you
and another kudosu star~

and thx for your stars and kds

nullPointLOL wrote:

Hi again!

I have some suggestions if you like.

I think the last kuai section should start 02:45:203 (I prefer only That section with kuai, but that's probably just me xD)

And from there... you definitely have to make a hitsound pattern that's reaally constant and a little annoying, but since almost everybody likes it....... (And I... lllllove it, HAHA). That's because it's the ending, it should be more and more exciting.

At least that's what I think... ._.

This is what I do to make a "nice" pattern:
First, after the spinner, Max volume (Or increasing it before the spinner, progressively).
And I definitely would have done the same thing as you: put a Clap at 02:59:274 and 03:00:755 (......uhm, after a while I figured Finish sounds better, doesn't it?); but from there I would have remapped the beats, in order I can set Claps every two White ticks, but if you miss one hitsound, notice the pattern it's absolutely lost...

(And the Finish sounds are pretty cool, you should set those on white ticks also, but every four ticks, replacing of course the claps on those ticks.)

Then,
I don't like final spinners. But knowing that this is a hard, you could make it crazy after those (but with the same distance spacing), so there would be no 'final' spinners really, and it would be an awesome ending.

Well, I didn't have a problem with the combo colors on white and black, but whatever, that's not important.

That's all I can think of.
See, this is all what I would have done. Nothing you actually HAVE to change, tough. Just suggestions ^^. If you like them, just use it.

Byebye ~~

I'll try to shoot my first kudosu star


Edit: I forgot, It's already a lovely and rankeable (I think... let's BATs to decide, lol), map.

Another thing: There shouldn't be so many white ticks (on Normal and Hard), without beats on it. You could find a way to follow lyrics and rhythm at the same time. (though there's no need to. But it would be a hell of a improve.)

GbL wrote:

Can i make one diff? :/

nullPointLOL wrote:

I just meant CLAPS every two White ticks. (some FINISH here and there - could be White or Red ticks)

But that's just for make a pattern. You could use hitsounds wherever you think it's right.

Like this image: (This is from 02:59:274)

jamesleao wrote:

GbL wrote:

Can i make one diff? :/

Yea , of course , do it

alvisto wrote:

Hi ! Breeze recommend this map for me, so, I am gonna help you mod it ! :3

EASY
00:50:96 (2) - A bit hard for Easy. You can convert it to sliders with u turn. it's not "Beginner Style" so i think it's enough
01:13:55 (1,1,1) - Again, it's supposed to be EASY. XD
01:25:40 (1,1,1) - ^

GDEATH'S NORMAL
The 1st break is a bit too long, anyway, I like the opening beats and hitsounds, well done !
00:53:561 - Either add a note here or let the slider starts here
01:03:55 (7,8) - Convert this to slider ? When I play, it seems weird to not have a slider here.

HARD
Perfect

Impressions :
Song - So this is the song that i have always heard about ! Nice choice !
Map design - Quite ok, not exactly breathtaking and super memorable to play, but it's ok. =D
And also I strongly dislike (just personal flavour) GREY combo colour, it makes multiplaying co-op a pain, if you know what I mean. Plus, white and Grey looks too similar in colour.

Anyway, I can see this map being ranked... Great job ! Star !

Symbolic wrote:

Use the same hitcircle colours in all difficulties.


[Easy]

01:13:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:29 (1) - ^
01:25:77 (1) - ^
01:26:14 (1) - ^


[Hard]

Set Overall Difficulty 1 level lower.

01:06:89 (6) - New combo.
01:54:28 (6) - ^
02:19:83 (6) - ^
02:37:79 (1,1,1,1) - Overlapping spinners aren't rankable, remove them or make them 1 long spinner, because if you shorten them they wont be rankable because of the Auto + 2000 rule being broken.
02:59:45 (6) - New combo.


Nice song,
Starred *

Symbolic wrote:

[GbL's Difficulty]

01:06:89 (6) - New combo. Done
01:08:09 (10,11,12) - This sounds crap, remove them. Done
01:20:03 (6,7) - Remove clap. Done
01:54:28 (7) - New combo. Done
02:37:79 (1,1,1,1) - Overlapping spinners aren't rankable, remove them or make them 1 long spinner, because if you shorten them they wont be rankable because of the Auto + 2000 rule being broken. Done
02:59:45 (7) - New combo.Done

nullPointLOL wrote:

Hi again!

[GbL's Difficulty] (Nicely done, too~)

[01:18:463] -

This doesn't sound good at all. I highly recommend moving those Three one tick back. Starting right on [01:18:371]. And they should sound like Finish - nothing - Clap. That 4th beat after those three, it's nice, you should repeat the same thing at [01:19:852]. Fix

[01:23:925] (5-11) - You're not following rhythm here and definitely not following lyrics either... Fix

[01:29:664] - Add a note there? (With finish) Done

[01:57:066] - Clap? Done
[02:00:028] - Clap? Done
[02:07:434] - ^ Done
[02:08:915] - ^ Done
[02:10:396] - Spinner with ^ Done
[02:11:692] - Maybe add at the beginning, Finish. Done
[02:12:433] - Finish Done
[02:13:173] - Finish Done


Well, I don't like patterns to be broken. Maybe add Claps every four white ticks?

[02:44:277] - Maybe end the final slider at this point? Done
[03:04:643] - remove this? Done
[03:05:014] - Finish Done
[03:05:754] - Finish Done
[03:06:495] - Finish Done
[03:13:993] - add a note? Done
[03:17:048] - End slider here? (I don't like it though, but sounds better) Done

This of course, it's my opinion...

minyeob wrote:

Give kudosu to deepsea/nullpoint

[GBL]
01:18:64 (1) - Timing is not good:; it's unreadable (Make this 1/4 beat later, to red tick)

That's all for me!
Nice Linkin Park map!
Kudosu star for great new mapper

minyeob wrote:

Give kudosu to deepsea/nullpoint

[GBL]
01:18:64 (1) - Timing is not good:; it's unreadable (Make this 1/4 beat later, to red tick)

That's all for me!
Nice Linkin Park map!
Kudosu star for great new mapper

tieff wrote:

[GbL's Diff]
00:45:97 (7,8,9) - Fix spacing. done
00:51:71 (7,8) - ^ done
00:52:08 (9,10) - ^ done
01:05:78 (3,4) - ^ done

Star.

tieff wrote:

[Easy]
01:28:55 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:58:72 (1,2) - ^

[gdeath's Normal+]
01:28:73 (3) - How about add finish on end of slider?
02:10:95 (3) - Place slider here 02:11:13, add note here 02:10:95.
02:17:80 (5) - Whistle?

[Hard]
All good. I love it.

[GbL's Diff]
00:45:97 (7,8,9) - Fix spacing.
00:51:71 (7,8) - ^
00:52:08 (9,10) - ^
01:05:78 (3,4) - ^

Star.