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Jun - Silver Dream

posted 2009-05-18T22:49:55+00:00

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Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-06-03T21:55:53+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 31, 2009 at 7:04:28 PM

Artist: Jun
Title: Silver Dream
Tags: DDR Dance Dance Revolution Hottest Party Wii Music Orz
BPM: 192
Filesize: 2785kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:

Basic (4.85 stars, 211 notes)
Beginner (3.95 stars, 149 notes)
DaRRi Difficult (4.9 stars, 312 notes)
Expert (4.9 stars, 343 notes)

Download: Jun - Silver Dream
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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sousei is bad person

Last edited by Wizard Of Orz 2009-08-01T02:04:19+00:00, edited 40 times in total.

DaRRi

Joined January 2009

DaRRi 2009-06-05T16:05:24+00:00

one of my favourite song in DDR!
so i quickly mapped one Difficult difficulty :O

Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [DaRRi Difficult].osu

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-06-05T22:11:41+00:00

added it but why did you make a new acc ?_?

DaRRi

Joined January 2009

DaRRi 2009-06-06T18:11:04+00:00

ダリでございます！！
spinner AUTO 2000+ now
also changed the sequence of combo color (blue silver blue silver)

Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [DaRRi Difficult].osu

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-06-14T23:15:04+00:00

orz

blissfulyoshi

osu! Alumni

Joined July 2008

blissfulyoshi 2009-06-15T01:06:09+00:00

Offset:2925

Basic:
no mistakes.

Darri:
00:31:68 (1,2,3,4) - make a parallelogram

Difficult:
00:14:96 (8) - make parallel to 6?
00:46:52 (9) - relalign with the ends of 7 and 8
01:22:30 (2) - change the placement of 2 so the start is centered between the starts of 1 and 3

Expert:
00:12:93 (1) - make a 90 degrees counterclockwise turn of 3
00:15:11 (13) - make a vertical reflection of next combo's 3, or make this a line with 11 and 12
00:17:14 (6,7,8,9) - very hard to read
00:18:08 (1,2) - reposition both of these so they end on the exact same location
00:23:86 (5) - y does this start at a different location than 10
00:35:43 (3) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
00:48:39 (7) - make a horizontal reflection of 5
00:49:18 (1) - nazi post: center this slider on the y-axis
00:53:55 (8) - not the same distance from 5 as 6 is (few pixels off)

I would advise you turn down the drain 1 or 2 notches because the parts without notes or slow sliders really drain your guage.

Great beatmap. Star.

skyflying

Joined March 2009

skyflying 2009-06-15T02:43:01+00:00

COOL！
I like it
expert:1:04:336~1:05:586 add a slider?

Because in I play behind cannot catch the rhythm

Star

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-06-15T19:34:36+00:00

fixed some things

v2b

Joined October 2008

v2b 2009-06-16T23:17:41+00:00

DaRRi

Joined January 2009

DaRRi 2009-06-18T05:34:40+00:00

it's not supposed to be a parallelogram

here's some fix

Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [DaRRi Difficult].osu

tobebuta

Joined June 2008

tobebuta 2009-06-18T18:59:00+00:00

very good!
　 ε　⌒ﾍ⌒ヽﾌ
　（　　( 　・ω・）　~☆
　　しーし─Ｊ

azuki

Joined January 2009

azuki 2009-06-19T13:26:15+00:00

awesome map

anonymous_old

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2009-06-20T01:36:12+00:00

Basic
More like "Hard" for most map sets. Make an easier one. (This is good though; keep it.)

DaRRi Difficult
Not a DaRRi Mix D=

Looks great though.

Difficult
00:22:46 (2) - New combo and maybe unstack.
00:39:18 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Ugly stacking. Decrease Stack Leniency one tick.
00:50:58 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Unreadable because of (5), thus requires memorization. I dunno if you need to do something about this though.
00:54:18 (1) - Put timing section before the note.
01:04:18 (1) - Same here.
01:06:68 (1) - Same here.

Expert
00:34:80 (2,3) - H-flip.
00:59:18 (1,3,4,5,6,7,1,3,1,3,4,6,7) - Clap?

I didn't get too far into this map because it's too fast for my wings. xD Was tons of fun while it lasted though.

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-06-20T02:53:01+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

DJPop

osu! Alumni

Here since the beginning

DJPop 2009-06-20T03:11:34+00:00

Just suggestions.

~Beginner~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish

~Basic~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.

~DaRRi Difficult~
00:44:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - omg O_O
01:14:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
Whatever... all fine.

~Expert~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.

~Difficult~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.

+Star

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-06-20T03:17:05+00:00

i like my little slient sections

DaRRi

Joined January 2009

DaRRi 2009-06-20T06:19:57+00:00

HPDrain a bit too high for ME

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-06-20T16:31:00+00:00

expert and difficult were at 7. its not that high :<

Takuma

osu! Alumni

Joined October 2008

Takuma 2009-06-24T02:10:50+00:00

Dropping by to say I love this map/song. Sorry this is late. >:
I'm not going to mod this just yet, but oh my god the star ratings are all so high.

rust45

Joined May 2009

rust45 2009-06-24T02:16:19+00:00

I don't feel like modding this right now but you get a star.

Yuukari-Banteki

Joined June 2008

Yuukari-Banteki 2009-06-24T04:07:09+00:00

[Beginner]
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff???
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps
01:04:18 (1) - insert break
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable

[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice

[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle

[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive
w/e zzzz

not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-06-24T04:09:21+00:00

Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Beginner]
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz done
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff??? killed
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps done
01:04:18 (1) - insert break no
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable
made drain lower by 2

[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change its fine
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice

[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle
these are fine imo >.>

[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky readable imo
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints its fine >.>
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same

[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive its fine
w/e zzzz

not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*

DaRRi

Joined January 2009

DaRRi 2009-06-24T10:22:45+00:00

Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Beginner]
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff???
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps
01:04:18 (1) - insert break
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable

[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice

[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds no it's not
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle it's fine

[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive
w/e zzzz

not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*

ztrot

osu! Alumni

Joined February 2008

ztrot 2009-06-28T22:45:30+00:00

okay very good star :3

Soaprman

Joined January 2008

Soaprman 2009-07-01T19:28:11+00:00

Beginner
The difficulty settings are fine but the layout is far too heavy for a "beginner" map.

00:36:68 (1) - Maybe separate the endpoints on these sliders. When playing, I thought the timing on these would be closer together like on the three sliders a bit before it.

Basic
Feels more like a "hard" than a "normal", which is what I'm assuming "basic" to mean. Not as big an issue as with beginner, though.

Overall
The difficulty names are kind of bad. Are they lifted from another game or something? I'd recommend sticking with traditional easy/normal/hard/insane.

Griping about difficulty names aside, this is a nice mapset. It definitely deserves a star!

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-07-06T18:07:13+00:00

the names are from ddr hence the tag says ddr

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-07-07T19:43:46+00:00

cmon i need a bat beginner has no 1/2 note now >.>

Yuukari-Banteki

Joined June 2008

Yuukari-Banteki 2009-07-08T04:33:04+00:00

[Beginner]
nothing you wont refuse to change

[Basic]
as above

[Darri]
unchanged

[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - cluttered

[Difficult]
unchanged

Kerensa

Joined January 2009

Kerensa 2009-07-08T07:38:36+00:00

wow o.O awesomeness!!!!

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-07-08T22:27:33+00:00

ok sfg i fixed the expert cluster >.>

Takuma

osu! Alumni

Joined October 2008

Takuma 2009-07-09T02:30:47+00:00

I wanna let you know how much I really love you~ darri makes the map <3

Hesitant to bubble because of the way the difficulty are set up. I see no reason why Difficulty should be the last difficulty, and why DaRRi isn't the hardest. >> Just see if you can do anything about that, or try explaining to be. I dunno, I'm just confused right now.

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-07-15T04:12:36+00:00

i dont know how to move it up and down >.>

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-07-15T04:22:03+00:00

screw it ill just delete difficult. ill just post it here for memoriesssss

Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [Difficult].osu

DaRRi

Joined January 2009

DaRRi 2009-07-15T05:30:48+00:00

Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [DaRRi Difficult].osu

Sousei

Joined May 2008

Sousei 2009-07-15T17:46:57+00:00

OH HAY NOOB~

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-07-15T17:48:12+00:00

ok uploaded your new version darri. i dont know what you changed though >_>. probably some hitsound stuffies.

and did you think i was going to delete your dif? because i would never do that <_<

ddrmaniac

Joined May 2009

ddrmaniac 2009-07-21T18:52:30+00:00

q

Last edited by ddrmaniac 2009-07-22T02:56:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-07-22T01:36:17+00:00

im sorry but i wont add it in ><.

1)there arent any sounds at all (i dont if the hisounds are super good. i just want some)
2)its just a bunch of noted in a vertical or horizontal stream :<
3)there a few illegal things
4)whats up with those random 3/4 length sliders?

you should try mapping a map by yourself first before you make difficulties. There arent really major faults so try making your own map first.

sorry ><

ddrmaniac

Joined May 2009

ddrmaniac 2009-07-27T23:10:36+00:00

nvm

tieff

Featured Artist

Joined March 2009

tieff 2009-07-28T23:51:06+00:00

[Beginner]
00:20:74 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing?
00:44:80 (3) - Nazi. Up a bit.
00:59:18 (1,2) - Spacing.

[Basic]
All cool.

[DaRRi Difficult]
Awesome!
01:01:68 (1) - Clap?

[Expert]
It's rock.
00:59:02 (3,1) - Spacing?

Star!

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-08-01T01:48:48+00:00

tieff wrote:
[Beginner]
00:20:74 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing? whats wrong with it?
00:44:80 (3) - Nazi. Up a bit. its fine D:
00:59:18 (1,2) - Spacing. i didnt see any problems with this but i changed some stuff around because the 1,2,3,4,1 being unsymmetric pissed me off
[Basic]
All cool.

[DaRRi Difficult]
Awesome!
01:01:68 (1) - Clap? ill leave this to darri~
[Expert]
It's rock.
00:59:02 (3,1) - Spacing? well the music got a bit faster so the spacing got a bit wider

Star! ty

Takuma

osu! Alumni

Joined October 2008

Takuma 2009-08-01T02:04:19+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-08-01T02:08:06+00:00

you smell

Sousei

Joined May 2008

Sousei 2009-08-01T07:08:34+00:00

BAD, 10-0 DOUBLE FULL EZ
BUT BAD WHAT :[

DaRRi

Joined January 2009

DaRRi 2009-08-01T16:42:54+00:00

no you girl!
that's not a clap haha~

mtmcl

mtmcl 2009-08-02T08:30:08+00:00

So I can bubble this?

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-08-02T18:37:54+00:00

loooove yooouuuu

Takuma

osu! Alumni

Joined October 2008

Takuma 2009-08-03T19:16:31+00:00

Beginner:

01:06:68 (1) - The beginning of the slider is silent. Is this intended? If not, please fix it.

Wizard Of Orz

Joined May 2008

Topic Starter

Wizard Of Orz 2009-08-03T20:04:25+00:00

its not silent i even clicked it earlier than the hitcircle lining up with the approach circle and it still make a hitnormal.

so its fine

Takuma

osu! Alumni

Joined October 2008

Takuma 2009-08-03T22:25:34+00:00

That's odd - it was for me before. Then again I did have some problems with my own map.. ah, well. Ranked (only because of darri)!

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