General
your mp3 is an upscaled 64kbps piece of crap and the timing is stupid enough to make small children wet their beds in shame; even i have been vanquished by the sheer fuckwthetthf
SB pulses a bit fast.

You use two soft finishes for the thump sounds, a timing-sectioned-in normal+hitfinish on a slightly lower volume works better imo

Easy
zzzz

Normal
AR+1, HP+1
01:21:716 (7) - new combo

Hard
00:15:462 (10) - anti jumps work a lot better if they're NOT spaced the same as the rest of the notes
00:49:484 - in all honesty i was expecting a hitcircle with a hitclap here

Insane winbwhatever
Oh, boy. In general, your jumps made no bloody sense whatsoever. I'll only put down the main ones.
00:01:462 (7) - stacking this to make a jump makes no sense
00:17:415 (1,2,3) - given the pattern you use for all other triplets, this is like throwing a cat a black mouse instead of a white one, except the black one knows kung fu and will kick your cat's ass
00:42:484 (3,4,5,6) - in my honest opinion, these startbeat double twins make no sense with the music and, quite honestly, play horribly, sound horrible, and in general make me want to stick my foot in a meat grinder
01:03:972 (4,1) - oh hey, you've got a pretty good expanding jump pattern going on h- what the fuck is that next note doing way the hell over there?
01:12:925 (3,4) - i'd have felt better if you had had two stacked double notes than this silly thing
01:13:251 (1) - at least TRY to blanket it
01:22:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - come on, arrange these in a non-lazy pattern like this or something -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/97134 as a bonus, that jump will even make sense!

Shiirn wrote:

General
your mp3 is an upscaled 64kbps piece of crap and the timing is stupid enough to make small children wet their beds in shame; even i have been vanquished by the sheer fuckwthetthf Right.
SB pulses a bit fast.

You use two soft finishes for the thump sounds, a timing-sectioned-in normal+hitfinish on a slightly lower volume works better imo
I didn't think of this, tried.
Easy
zzzz

Normal
AR+1, HP+1 Sure why not.
01:21:716 (7) - new combo I'll keep the combo length for consistency with the others.

Hard
00:15:462 (10) - anti jumps work a lot better if they're NOT spaced the same as the rest of the notes Nobody ever likes my antijumps . Stacked instead.
00:49:484 - in all honesty i was expecting a hitcircle with a hitclap here I see, added now.

Thanks for the IRC discussion, as well as this mod and star!

Thanks for suggestions!

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

BTW you only map the first verses? Specify (short ver.) or (cut ver.) in your song title.

I really love the second part
"It's a matter of fact and it's plain to see...."

hi again.

ziin wrote:

[general]
you can't silence sliderticks and sliderslide. You can get away with just silencing sliderslide, but this is bad form and should be avoided.

you haven't fixed this yet.

[General]

1. audio lead-in is too short, make it 2500, also please disable countdown in insane.

[Easy]

1. your map sync badly with music at intro part..don't try to sync with rhythm and background instrument at the same time since you just can't put that many notes because this is an Easy (give 00:02:276 (3,5) - for example, you sync (3) with standard rhythm (the instrument has red ticks rhythm here) and (5) with instrument, which is bad)
2. 00:28:321 (3,4) - sounds really off, move to 00:28:159
3. 00:38:578 (3,4) - ^, move to relative red ticks, use circle on (4), spinner start from 00:39:391

[Normal]

1. still not good at intro part, i think..
2. 00:01:625 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/2tnq
3. 00:12:043 (4,5) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:42:159 (1) - delete
2. 01:01:368 (6,7) - make them symmetrical with y-axis?

[Winber1's Insane]

1. 00:31:578 (6) - new combo
   

   ziin wrote:

   [insane]
   00:41:996 - suddenly, out of nowhere the map goes from "meh", to "holy crap this is hard", then back to "meh" again.
   Other than that part, I'd rather have the map on ar8, but I understand you need ar9 for the hard part.

   ^ this is exactly what i think, actually i typed AR-1 after running the first 20s..

star

Maybe I'm better than i thot? or maybe using z/x and mouse is easy for this section or something? I look down on myself a lot when playing this game D:, but idk. Honestly, speaking, I actually don't find it that hard (unless i'm really tired) unlike some other things i've played, soemtimes i miss a stream, and i get close to failing but then i get back on track by not missing the other notes lol. I will look more into this as I know that there have been multiple complaints about that section. when I think of something, I will see what i can do about it.

Thanks for the suggestions tho!

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

wmfchris wrote:

BTW you only map the first verses? Specify (short ver.) or (cut ver.) in your song title.

I really love the second part
"It's a matter of fact and it's plain to see...."

"The love that burns inside of me... I'd like to lead you back here by my siiiiiide."

I really liked the second set of lyrics too. I just wish there were more lyrics and less instrumentals, which is incidentally why I cut it- I felt that I would probably end up mapping the same pattern again and again to cover the long instrumental section and didn't feel it would turn out well.

Also, about (short ver.)... I talked to a few people in #modhelp and they said that it was optional, so I'll leave it out for now.


Thanks for the mod and star, loveFantasy!

winber1 wrote:

Maybe I'm better than i thot? or maybe using z/x and mouse is easy for this section or something? I look down on myself a lot when playing this game D:, but idk. Honestly, speaking, I actually don't find it that hard (unless i'm really tired) unlike some other things i've played, soemtimes i miss a stream, and i get close to failing but then i get back on track by not missing the other notes lol. I will look more into this as I know that there have been multiple complaints about that section. when I think of something, I will see what i can do about it.

Thanks for the suggestions tho!

I think part of it is the effect you get from mapping something yourself- it seems so much easier when you play through it because you know where every beat is supposed to fall, and it makes sense in your head. I get the same effect too, which is why I always worry my Easy and Normal difficulties are too challenging- they feel really, really easy to me, but I'm afraid for everyone else they just don't make intuitive sense.

[Winber1's Insane]
Oh god, I love this 2-note stacks
00:02:602 (4,5) - How about moving 4 to the left so it forms a triangle and moving 5 down? Like this:

It feels really weird and unnatural for me in the current state =\
00:13:020 (4,5) - Probably something like that ^ here too
00:26:694 - Please, please, add a note here!
00:37:275 - I would prefer one additional note here too

[Hard]
00:42:322 - Maybe a note here?
00:50:624 (3) - Feels and is close to the previous slider
New combo to show that there is a spacing change here? But rearranging this part somehow will be better

[Normal]
01:02:833 (1) - Slider velocity makes me think that the next note in the song should be at 01:03:809
But you don't have it, so maybe delete slider repeat and add a note at 01:03:484 instead?

[Easy]
All fine

Solid beatmap, definetly not of the boring ones I see nowadays
Here's a star from me. Good luck!

Thanks for suggestions!

Also, finally someone likes it, but that means idk what i should do anymore with that section... lol D:... gahh predicament. so hard to please everyone.

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

CracK wrote:

[Hard]
00:42:322 - Maybe a note here? Funny, I just deleted a note at 00:42:159. I'll put that note back in instead of one here, for consistency with later spacing.
00:50:624 (3) - Feels and is close to the previous slider
New combo to show that there is a spacing change here? But rearranging this part somehow will be better
There, now it's the opposite of close!

[Normal]
01:02:833 (1) - Slider velocity makes me think that the next note in the song should be at 01:03:809
But you don't have it, so maybe delete slider repeat and add a note at 01:03:484 instead?
Thanks for pointing this out! Went with Note+Slider instead of Slider+Note

[Easy]
All fine

Solid beatmap, definetly not of the boring ones I see nowadays
Here's a star from me. Good luck!

Thanks for the mod, CracK!

winber1 wrote:

Also, finally someone likes it, but that means idk what i should do anymore with that section... lol D:... gahh predicament. so hard to please everyone.

If I can't please everybody, I always go for pleasing myself Also, you changed your avatar on me again! I think this one looks the best so far, though.

...Its memory might never last, a broken dream held from the past,
and a passion is lost within my minddddddd

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Wmf's Taiko].osu

Hey ~

[Easy]
Slider tick rate : 2

[Normal]
Good.

[Hard]
Is a insane this map ;D, but is good anyway ~

[Winber1's Insane]
Wow, is very fast reduce the AR -1

GL ~

I like AR 9 better sorry. I may change it if I end up changing the kiai section tho. As of now, nothing changed

wmfchris wrote:

...Its memory might never last, a broken dream held from the past,
and a passion is lost within my minddddddd

Thanks for the Taiko diff! I can't ascertain its quality because I don't play Taiko, but I'm sure it's awesome. Also, I changed the lead-in to 2000 and disabled the countdown, to be consistent with the other diffs. And now I think I'm supposed to make/find a BG for this...

darck360 wrote:

Hey ~

[Easy]
Slider tick rate : 2
I think I'll keep it where it is, tick rate of 2 seems like too much for Easy.

[Normal]
Good.

[Hard]
Is a insane this map ;D, but is good anyway ~
GL ~

Thanks for looking through the map, darck360!

oh you're right I've forgotten to set those stuffs in the setup orz
If you need another BG I think I can find one... (taiko specified BG or normal BG?

here.

Thanks because requesting at TBRT queue.
Will mod other time.

Well the image at top part kinda unused -,-
because your Sb use the middle space ,so I recommend to use your Sb at btm part for taiko if you want.

This bg only support if the beatmap have SB.

And I change it to 800 x 600 to reduce the capacity ;p

If you didn't like this one , you can ask again at me ;p

sorry orz

Hello.

Add wmfchris to Tags in all difficulties.

Everything else seems fine.

[Easy]
So difficult rhytm in Easy..but well,it's not your fault.

00:03:904 - Add a note here? I think it makes this rhytm more readable.
00:14:322 - ^ Same.
00:27:020 (2,3,4) - Sounds odd.I think there's a note missing at 00:27:833.
00:38:252 - ^ Same.Add a note to 00:38:252?

[Normal]
00:22:136 - Sound better with this note,it perfectly with lyrics.
00:56:484 (4) - Don't really like how it sounds,especially with claps.I'd like you to to delete this reverse-slider,and add 2 circles instead (00:56:484,00:56:810).You could make pretty square shape with 00:55:833 (2,3,4,5).

[Hard]
00:08:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is odd.You're jumping,and then stacking (4) with (5).It's kinda weird,you know.
How about making pentagon-shaped jumps here? Anyway,don't stack them and make the equal distance here,please.
00:26:694 (2) - Ah,this stack is sooo confusing,it doesn't fit at all..It slowdowns the whole thing btw,so...unstack it and make something better,please.

[Winber1's Insane]
Hm..shouldn't it be [winber1's Insane]?

00:01:299 (6,7,8) - You're making an unreadable jump after stacked notes? Plays really bad,please fix it.
00:08:625 (1,2,3) - Too close to previous object.With this high AR it's a bit confusing.
00:42:159 - What is this?..

Your maps was nice,except annoying claps,so I'd suggest you to find a custom one.
But [Winber1's Insane] makes me sick.I mostly mean the chorus part.It's slightly overmapped and doesn't makes any sense to me.

Anyway,have my star.

General
Add wmfchris to the tags

Storyboard
The storyboard slowly goes off beat.
Use this code to get it as close as possible (4 ms)
Don't forget to fullsubmit!

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"h.png",320,240
L,41915,32
F,0,0,81,0,1
F,0,81,326,1,0
F,0,326,407,0,1
F,0,407,651,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Easy
Easies need especially small combos, so a lot of this difficulty will be combomodding
00:03:253 - New combo
00:13:671 - ^^
01:05:437 - ^^
01:10:646 - ^^
01:16:507 - ^^
01:21:716 - ^^
Very nice easy!


Normal
00:03:578 - New combo
00:13:997 - ^^
00:28:973 (1) - Don't use 0.5x sliders on a Normal.
01:05:437 - New combo
01:11:298 - ^^?
01:15:856 - ^^
01:21:390 - ^^
A bit hard for a normal but it will do.

Hard
AR +1
Tickrate 1
Very nice diff!

Winber1's Insane
00:01:456 (7,8) - I know this is intentional, but this is misleading and should not be a jump anyway. Fix the spacing.
00:03:409 (4,5) - ^^
00:11:874 (6,7) - ^^
00:13:828 (4,5) - ^^
00:14:479 (8,9) - ^^
00:17:572 (2,3) - Reverse these two so the spacing isn't as bad.
00:29:781 (3,4) - Spacing
I'm ok with all the other spacing infringements.
The first thing that comes to mind is 'overkill'. Gets holy crap hard at the kiai.

WMf's Taiko
Circle Size 7
AR 10
This will give the difficulty a high star rating so it appears at the end of the mapset.
Frustrating taiko is frustrating, I can't predict it at all.

HeatKai wrote:

Well the image at top part kinda unused -,-
because your Sb use the middle space ,so I recommend to use your Sb at btm part for taiko if you want.

This bg only support if the beatmap have SB.

Thanks for your work! I'm a bit confused about what you mean here, though... what's a "btm part" of Taiko?
And I should/shouldn't add the BG? The SB doesn't work well with it, so I'd like to disable it for the Taiko diff but I'm not sure how to do that.
(Not a taiko player, so I don't understand this stuff orz)

Oh and one more minor thing, could you change the title to "Field of Dreams" instead of "Field of Dream", to match the title?

wmfchris wrote:

interchange the upper and lower part of the BG wwwwwww the upper one is better

I... actually kind of agree, not to seem ungrateful or anything, but the upper one fits a bit better. But I'm still confused about the whole sideboard clashing with it thing...


Thanks for the mod and star, IceBeam!


Thanks for the mod, Charles! (Though no star )

I'm truly getting the feeling no one is liking it due to the fact they can't beat it; perhaps it is somewhat overmapped, but i'm getting that vibe of "you suck at mapping, plz gtfo." lol. sorry if that sounds mean and/or stubborn and/or whatever insult you have ;_; no offense taken tho, I have nothing against you guys :3. if you seriously have something to say, you can forum pm me. I don't really want to spam anything here and annoy akrolsmir
Anyways... I made it a bit easier... but i kept the spacing, cuz i love that spacing so much. seriously. :3

Sorry CracK , no more streams/double notes. I actually kept an original version, just cuz i like double notes and streams. i have no idea why I'm actually uploading it here. i guess it's for anyone random person who somehow randomly stumbles across this single post out of the like 50 that are here.

edit: i guess i'll still be willing to make it easier, since i actually have an original copy lol. and yeah, kinda self-explanatory... don't upload the original insane lol. xD

and thanks for the mod guys!

oh yea. Edit 2: I purposely capitalized the first letter of my username. don't ask me why lol. although i like having my username lower case, i want having titles and stuff capitalized. it's just some weird personal thing i have.

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Original Insane].osu

Star

[General]
Combo color 2 is WAY too dark for your BG. Either change this to be much lighter or get rid of it completely and use only 3 different colors.

[Easy]
00:16:438 (1,2,3) - Not sure about this part. It is playable but I think it's too confusing for beginners. I suggest mapping the triple piano parts with sliders (start with 00:16:113 - 00:16:438): http://puu.sh/2BtX this way beginners can play what they hear.
00:19:206 (8) - start 1/2 earlier on red tick. Not sure about the finish here. Slider doesn't end on a (metronome)beat.
00:55:670 (2) - curve this one better around (1)

[Normal]
00:05:694 (1,2,3,4) - What the...this is exactly how I suggested it to be in the easy Good job...keep it.
00:10:415 (1) - Maybe use a repeating slider here (start earlier red tick, end white tick, add 1x repeat http://puu.sh/2Bu9) as only the beat plays kinda strange
00:56:809 (5) - move to 200/236 to make the shape symmetrical
01:08:693 (3) - could be curved nicely around (2,4)

[Hard]
Wow! A 5,00 hard.
00:03:578 (6) - It's a bit confusing mapping all the piano notes but leaving out the one in the middle of this slider. Either turn the slider into an "m" shape or shorten it to the red tick and add a third circle to the following stack.
00:13:997 (6) - ^ I suggest shortening the slider to the red tick and adding a circle where the slider end used to be. Stack the three circles at 112/100. Plays much better!
00:16:438 (3) - I would go as far as calling this "wrong". There is nothing you can map with this slider ending here. You should delete (4) and place the slider ending there and maybe stack the remaining circle with the ending point (to keep the actual pattern intact)
00:17:090 (6) - ^ but delete (7) obviously
00:17:741 (9) - ^ and delete (10)
Instead of the three last points, you could instead silence the slider endings completely. Still wont play as good as changing it (and you already mapped the same part correctly at 00:05:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8))
00:19:043 (1,2,3,4) - using this kind of jump after the slider is a bad (and wrong) idea. There is no indicator as the jump starts mid-combo and in the middle of a completely smoth and consistent piano-part. Turn the slider into 2 circles and jump between all 5 circles or keep the slider and get rid of the jumps.
00:20:834 (1) - You missed two piano notes here on the red ticks before and after the circle. This is confusing and makes hitting the circle a pain. I suggest turning the circle into a fitting 1x repeat-slider (from red tick to red tick)
00:21:973 (6) - This slider is messing with your flow and pace. Maybe turn it into a "m" shape to match lyrics and piano at the same time. Make sure the red dot (turning point) is exactly on the white tick in the middle
00:29:787 (4) - ^
00:38:577 (9) - ^
00:46:880 (8) - Maybe stack on the end of previous slider to kinda match what you do later at 00:57:135 (8,9)

[winber1's Insane]
Some really random and unfitting jumps/anti-jumps aside I really liked this one! Spacing is a complete mess in the KIAI-part due to n00bgrid-snapping and the last few seconds have a really "interesting" spacing-change but both can be fixed.
00:03:415 (4,5) - lolwut (read: this jump is completely stupid here)
00:06:671 (3,1,2,3) - spacing should be 1,0x and consistent here
00:08:950 (2,3) - orz (read: this anti-jump is utterly stupid here)
00:10:253 (1,2,3,4) - the change in spacing here: Makes. No. Sense. Stick to 1,0x
00:13:834 (4,5) - lolwut
00:20:834 (1) - same as in [normal] and [hard] difficulties: Don't leave out the f'n piano here
00:26:368 (2,3) - lolwut
00:26:857 (4,5) - orz
00:27:508 (6,7) - lolwut
00:29:787 (3,4) - to keep this jump change (4) into a single new combo
00:34:182 (3,4) - fix spacing
00:42:159 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'm totally fine with changing the general spacing during KIAI to 1,5x. You should, however, turn off the #§$%& grid-snapping at huge lv3 and make those distances perfectly spot on 1,500x!!! Your circle size is just too small to be sloppy at this high speed.
01:01:205 (5,1) - orz
01:02:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part is just strange. What exactly does the increasing spacing refer to (song-wise)? I can't hear anything. Better change this part.
01:05:437 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,...) - Returning to "non-KIAI-spacing" should be 1,0x not 1,2x. Spacing should be more consistent here, especially between the sliders.
01:18:460 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,...) - Oh. 0,8x spacing now...why? whyyyyyyy....

Fix the spacing-mess and use jumps/anti-jumps only where they fit. Other than that some cool patterns! If you are too lazy to fix it, just max out circle size and it wont matter so much anymore.


~star

Thanks for suggestions!

The jumps I've used actually have musically supported reasons to do so, but they are kinda subtle reasons; they aren't just random jumps lol. Also, this is AR 9, so the jumps shouldn't be very hard to read imo.

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

Hey :3 Please remember that these are only suggestions ~

[Easy]
the rhythm for mapping an easy of this song is just.. asdasd. nice one, anyway xD
00:11:392 (3) - the rhythm changes here, so.. new combo?

[Normal]
ehh.. this goes a little too hard for a normal. seems too imo fast D:
try -1 on AR? guess it makes it easier ~

[Hard]
00:08:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - ah, this is awesome <3
00:11:229 (3) - new combo?

[Winber1's Insane]
shouldn't the name of the diff be winber1's Insane? :v oops someone said this already
ohwell, what can I say about this diff.. it is really well mapped, but the spacing is so irregular that turns some parts that were supposed to be funny in annoying for some players; also, i noticed a lot of copy-pasted patterns.. you made so many nice ones, why couldn't you be a little more creative making more instead of copying the other ones? >_<" sorry if this sounds bad. please don't get me wrong, the map is still really cool.

Well, I couldn't find much. I think it's better to make a small post saying some things I consider important than shooting some nazi modding just to fill lines
So yeah, that's it. Have a star for the nice mapset (also, nice sb!)

To fix storyboard:

Taiko:

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"TaikoBG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

Non-Taiko difficulties

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Ito Noizi - Glowing Flower Field.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"h.png",320,240
_L,41915,32
  F,0,0,81,0,1
  F,0,81,326,1,0
  F,0,326,407,0,1
  F,0,407,651,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

Paste them into the osu file directly, delete the .osb file and do a full submit again.

wmfchris, you know taiko better than me, and it's your difficulty, but I don't think the orange/purple bar above the taiko bar does much. You can disable it by storyboarding an empty object up there:
Oh, and isn't the song title "Field of Dreams"?

PM me if you need any help.

ok, i actually fixed some more things :3

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

Thank you for the extensive mod, your inputs were quite valuable!


Thanks for the examination! And speak of the devil...

HeatKai wrote:

:P

Added the updated Taiko BG, thanks! Though too bad we couldn't figure out how to hide the bar

hmm. well it's harder than I thought to hide the bar...

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"empty.png",0,0
_F,0,0,0,0,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"empty.png",0,0
_F,0,0,0,0,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"empty.png",0,0
_F,0,0,0,0,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"empty.png",0,0
_F,0,0,0,0,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"empty.png",0,0
_F,0,0,0,0,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"empty.png",0,0
_F,0,0,0,0,0

You need 6 objects in the top part of the storyboard for the bar to be removed.

Also, sorry for not putting in that space, I tested it, but osu forums remove one leading space . Good thing about osu is that it tells you what's wrong most of the time.

[General]
Strange Pitch change a the start.. i mean, why the hell this dj inserted it?
I think you can actually use those hitsounds (i used them in one map... the N:HitNormal is a Bass Hit, you can use it as a HitClap for some part... The Normal:HitClap is a Snare that you can use where you want...)
I think silencing Slidertick and Sliderslide is worthless .... you could only silence sliderslide
Well, I would've used Soft Hitsounds till 00:41:996

[Easy]

The Alternative is many times better for me.. ( even if harder in front of the original )

[Normal]
You can make it graphically better if you want ... for example, you can create a pentagram at 01:00:228 (1,2,3,4,5) (http://puu.sh/2CSG) , you can Heli-Blaket this 01:02:833 (1,2,3,4) -(http://puu.sh/2CSR),You can curve 00:21:648 (3,4,5,6,7) - more and create a triangle with 5,6,7 ( http://puu.sh/2CSY )

[Hard]
A Stream do the work better in some places...
00:00:811 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make it an Arch like this
00:11:229 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ this
00:19:043 (1,2,3,4) -Make the shape more even like this
00:20:834 (1,2,3) - Triangulize? like this

[Wimber1's Insane]
That's a case where a CS + 1 do it's work, imho...
I did like if you mapped the deathstream ç.ç
00:00:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Place them in a better graphic way? for example do a pentagon with 1,5,6,7,8 and beat blanket 5 with 2,3,4 like this? (if you want, do 1,5,6,7,8 like a star...)
00:03:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Place them in a better graphic way? example
00:11:555 (4,5,6,7) -
00:15:462 (12) - 2 grid(size 3) left, for a beat blanket with the external curve of circles
00:17:415 (1,2,3) - That was good if between 2 and 3 there was a song slowing/pitch lowering

P.s. Nightcore are more Chipmonky/Monkeyish that this

sorry, i just moved 00:15:462 (12) - 2 grids left.

I kinda like those notes to have no shape, and i want the last note of those combos to be right next to first note of the next.

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Strange Pitch change a the start.. i mean, why the hell this dj inserted it?
I think you can actually use those hitsounds (i used them in one map... the N:HitNormal is a Bass Hit, you can use it as a HitClap for some part... The Normal:HitClap is a Snare that you can use where you want...) Tried both, but I think they were too soft. I'll keep looking.
I think silencing Slidertick and Sliderslide is worthless .... you could only silence sliderslide Nah, slidertick is noticeable in the beginning, since the music is soft, but then later it fits in.
Well, I would've used Soft Hitsounds till 00:41:996 Well, when the vocals kick in I wanted a different set of sounds, so...

[Easy]

The Alternative is many times better for me.. ( even if harder in front of the original ) Okay, alternate put in.

[Normal]
You can make it graphically better if you want ... for example, you can create a pentagram at 01:00:228 (1,2,3,4,5) (http://puu.sh/2CSG) , you can Heli-Blaket this 01:02:833 (1,2,3,4) -(http://puu.sh/2CSR),You can curve 00:21:648 (3,4,5,6,7) - more and create a triangle with 5,6,7 ( http://puu.sh/2CSY )
Pentagon, blanket added. I kept the curve at 21:468- that's supposed to lead into a trapezoid.

[Hard]
A Stream do the work better in some places...
00:00:811 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make it an Arch like thisNo thanks, I like the triangle+extra
00:11:229 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ this ^
00:19:043 (1,2,3,4) -Make the shape more even like thisNah, I'll keep it as a rhombus
00:20:834 (1,2,3) - Triangulize? like this Changed

Thanks for the mod! I should have finished this much earlier but I got sidetracked writing apps for osu.

Heey o/
Kenezz's Bakamod

Easy

1. 00:31:578 (1) - Finish to the start?

Normal

1. 00:55:019 (1) - Whistle or Clap to the start?
2. 00:57:623 (1) - ^

Hard

1. 00:02:113 (1-11) - Uhm this combo is a bit longer, perhaps new combo in (4) or (6)
2. 00:12:532 (1-11) - ^
3. 00:20:671 (x) - Add a note here?
4. 00:20:996 (x) - ^
5. 00:37:926 (7) - New combo here?
6. Look at the combos that come to 10 or 11, these can be reduced~

Winber1's Insane

1. Add wmfchris to the tags
2. Same suggestion about the combos as Hard
3. 00:20:671 (x) - Add a note here?
4. 00:20:996 (x) - ^

That's All, sorry for the delay but I was very busy in school
Starred~

sorry, didn't add notes or use those combos. I honestly like how those combos play out. I did change a few little things on my own and added wmfchris to the tags tho.

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

Kenezz wrote:

Heey o/
Kenezz's Bakamod

Easy

1. 00:31:578 (1) - Finish to the start? Added

Normal

1. 00:55:019 (1) - Whistle or Clap to the start? Added, I think.
2. 00:57:623 (1) - ^ ^

Hard

1. 00:02:113 (1-11) - Uhm this combo is a bit longer, perhaps new combo in (4) or (6)
2. 00:12:532 (1-11) - ^
3. 00:20:671 (x) - Add a note here?
4. 00:20:996 (x) - ^
5. 00:37:926 (7) - New combo here?
6. Look at the combos that come to 10 or 11, these can be reduced~

None implemented. I think the combos are fine- 11 isn't really that bad, and I like the combos to follow the lyrics. The new notes were previously suggested- I think it plays okay with them, but I wanted to follow the vocals without. I'll consider it, but not added for now.

That's All, sorry for the delay but I was very busy in school
Starred~

Thanks for your suggestions! It's always very good to have someone point out what I missed while hitsounding...

I am just passing by to say:


What was making the mapset relatively unique was deleted! =(
I'll still play your original diff, winber~

CracK wrote:

I am just passing by to say:

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

What was making the mapset relatively unique was deleted! =(
I'll still play your original diff, winber~

Don't worry, the original was saved in the OP just for you. Though for some reason the in-game submitter likes to wipe out the attachment. Hopefully it won't do that for the puush link.

when you upload a map, you don't have to press "submit". Let it get to 100% then cancel it if you don't need to update the first post (though then people can't tell when the last time you updated is, I suppose).

ziin wrote:

when you upload a map, you don't have to press "submit". Let it get to 100% then cancel it if you don't need to update the first post (though then people can't tell when the last time you updated is, I suppose).

Nifty workaround, I'll probably be using that in the future. Though really, the submitter shouldn't wipe out current formatting and attachments IMO.

star*
the piano-parts are really awesome!

[General]
Considering the original song is 4 or so minutes long, you need to add (Short ver.) to the title.
Combo color 4 is blending with the background.

[Winber1's Insane]
00:06:346 (1,2,3) - Make them a mirror of the previous 3? i think it looks better.
00:17:415 (1,2,3) - I think a triangle is better for this, right now you're making 2 notes half spaced (or 2 double spaced) when they are the same in the timeline.

[Hard]
Nice choice of hitsounds and patterns

[Normal]
01:02:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Add notes to the timing like shown in this screenshot for the first of these as an example (with also an example position) i think this pattern follows the music better:

Or you could try this alternative if you dont like so many notes:

I'd strongly suggest the first one tho.
01:13:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Repeat what you did ^ here.

[Easy]
00:34:182 (1) - Start 1/2 earlier, end at same spot, the reason for this is to remove the white -> red tick change from the previous note, which can trip new players, the music still fits, and the rest should be readable afterwards.
01:17:809 (2,3) - Unstack these, or change into a repeat slider, this kind of stack can confuse new players.

Nice map <3

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Considering the original song is 4 or so minutes long, you need to add (Short ver.) to the title. Finally Added
Combo color 4 is blending with the background. Switched to a lighter color

[Hard]
Nice choice of hitsounds and patterns Thanks!

[Normal]
01:02:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Add notes to the timing like shown in this screenshot for the first of these as an example (with also an example position) i think this pattern follows the music better:

Or you could try this alternative if you dont like so many notes:

I'd strongly suggest the first one tho.
01:13:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Repeat what you did ^ here.
Did both, and also for the last set as well.

[Easy]
00:34:182 (1) - Start 1/2 earlier, end at same spot, the reason for this is to remove the white -> red tick change from the previous note, which can trip new players, the music still fits, and the rest should be readable afterwards. I don't know about this... All other notes started on white ticks, so I think players would listen to that instead, especially since it's the start of the measure and has more emphasis.
01:17:809 (2,3) - Unstack these, or change into a repeat slider, this kind of stack can confuse new players.
Fixed

Nice map <3

Thanks a lot, Sakura! (And also for telling me all about proper SB specifications as well )

Note to winber1 and wmfchris- I took the liberty of standardizing little things like LetterboxInBreaks (which doesn't really matter because there are no breaks) and Epilepsy warnings. Also, the colors were all made consistent, too. If you'd like to do any editing, could you redownload? (Since title was changed as well) Sorry for the hassle, and thanks for making those guest diffs!

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Winber1's Insane]
00:06:346 (1,2,3) - Make them a mirror of the previous 3? i think it looks better. ok. it kinda overlaps the next combo, but i guess its ok
00:17:415 (1,2,3) - I think a triangle is better for this, right now you're making 2 notes half spaced (or 2 double spaced) when they are the same in the timeline. gah, i like the way it is, but I decided to switch combo 2 with combo 3

Thanks for mods :3

I also changed the original insane for you if you still want to keep it.

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.) (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.) (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Original Insane].osu

Hey! Here, some mods! I will also write a suggestion section afterwards, however they will be quite honest. If you find them negative, don't worry about it, they are just suggestions and my opinions, and don't think I am enforcing them or anything. They will be in the spoilerbox after the mod.

[Winber1's Insane]:

1. Missing wmfchris in tags.
2. Difficulty: Reduce AR by 1 and increase OD by 1. This map plays better with AR8 to me (even though I had no problems with AR9 but it doesn't fit) and having this low OD just doesn't fit the mapping style. I would understand if you had streams, but you don't.
3. 00:10:415 (2) - Swap to normal hitsound set for this note, could add finish on top of it as well.
4. 00:20:671 - Would be nice to add a note here. After following the melody for so long and you stop here gives off a feeling you missed something. If you add the note, add one at 00:20:996 as well.
5. 00:31:578 (1) - Finish at the start of the slider.
6. 01:03:484 (1) - This new combo is completely unnecessary. It's more consistent without it as well. You should remove it.
7. 01:04:786 (1) - ^
8. Thoughts and suggestions

   Nice and short map but some stuff just bothers me. Don't get me wrong, it's not wrong to map like this but certain stuff is really a turn off for me.
   
   First of all I really don't like how you used whistles. They feel completely random. I suggest you use whistles on the notes which follow the voice explicitly, because you're mapping the melody along with the voice, so it won't sound wrong.
   This also concerns some finishes. You added them because you felt they were okay, which they are I suppose, but certain key parts which would really call for one are missed. You have an example of this in the mod section of the post.
   
   I will add a list of certain spots where you should add notes, because when you follow the melody and the voice some spots just seem completely empty:
   00:37:112 - melody
   00:39:066 - melody
   
   I don't like the spinner at 00:39:554 (1). I think you should end it at 00:41:345 with a soft set hitsound and map a note @00:39:554 instead.
   
   Then we have 01:05:437 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't like the combo placements because of the hp drain. I like to balance the difficulties alot, and this brings back HP too fast. Not a big deal and it's alright to map like this especially given the distances, but it doesn't look confusing without it and concerning the HP drain level it would look better without it (what I mean here is that you keep the 1-2-3-4, 1-2-3-4 pattern).
   
   And lastly, the whole map is mapped in 1/2! You have some triplets at the start because melody goes like that, but the map could be ALOT more interesting with a stream at some point. This is 185ish BPM song and stream of that level is hittable by almost anyone who can play insane diffs. 01:21:065 - this looks like a perfect spot for a stream. The background drum builds up a little and having a stream (with a kicker slider I suppose, if you don't like full streams) here just seems quite right.

[Hard]:

1. Reduce OD1. OD8 is ridiculous for "hard" (it's questionable when to use it in insanes as well). This also reduces the score to a more "right" level (2.5m opposed to 3.1m when Insane has 2.75m~)
2. 01:05:274 (10) - Listening to music tells me this is a good spot for a new combo. Remove NC from next note.
3. 01:10:484 (10) - ^
4. Thoughts and suggestions

   A really clean map, nothing much to say. Slightly hard for a "hard" but I guess that's fine cause it plays nicely and everything has low spacing. The only suggestion is about the last note, why not make it a jump? Doesn't have to be extreme, but place is somewhere towards the middle of the map or something, just to have a more epic feel as an end rather than a distance snapped note.
   
   Also read the suggestion @Insane about the spinner.

[Wmf's Taiko]:

1. Don't know much about taiko, but I think all difficulty settings should be in the middle (having a value of 5). You currently have everything at 6 apart from circle size which is 3.

[Normal]:

1. Difficulty: due to density of the notes @timeline I suggest using circle size 1.
2. 00:23:601 - Missing a note here to follow the vocals. Make a slider that ends at the slider start @00:23:764. Also, to follow the vocals more accurately, add a note at 00:24:089 as well, and also make it a slider which ends at the slider end @00:24:252.
3. 00:34:019 - ^ same as above with just different timeline locations.
4. 00:51:600 (5) - Don't think this is a good spot for a finish. Consider removing it.

[Easy]:

1. 00:06:020 (1,2) - Generally it's not a good idea to have circles on red ticks in easy diff, without something that tells you otherwise. I suggest making a slider out of these two, because people who are able to play easy diffs only won't 300 these for a long time.
2. 00:08:787 (4) - Why not start this slider at 00:08:625 instead? Melody starts at this spot and you're already mapping on red ticks in this section.
3. 00:16:438 (1,2) - Same as 00:06:020.
4. 00:19:206 (4) - Same as 00:08:787.
5. 00:31:578 (1) - Finish at the start of the slider.
6. 01:12:600 (3) - Clap is fine here, but add finish to it as well (at the slider end).

There. A lengthy post, hopefully you don't mind (but then again I always tend to write essay as mod posts ;_;).
Nice and clean mapsets, good luck!~ :3

Short ver yay

Easy
00:01:625 (2) - 1 grid down?

Hard
00:15:462 (11) - asdasdassad

i can't find any errors , sorry , no kudosu , NO KUDOSU

Thanks for mod! :3

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.) (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

lolcubes wrote:

Hey! Here, some mods! I will also write a suggestion section afterwards, however they will be quite honest. If you find them negative, don't worry about it, they are just suggestions and my opinions, and don't think I am enforcing them or anything. They will be in the spoilerbox after the mod.

[Hard]:

1. Reduce OD1. OD8 is ridiculous for "hard" (it's questionable when to use it in insanes as well). This also reduces the score to a more "right" level (2.5m opposed to 3.1m when Insane has 2.75m~) Done, HP drain dropped while I was at it.
2. 01:05:274 (10) - Listening to music tells me this is a good spot for a new combo. Remove NC from next note. Oh... that's actually more consistent. Good idea.
3. 01:10:484 (10) - ^ ^
4. Thoughts and suggestions

   A really clean map, nothing much to say. Slightly hard for a "hard" but I guess that's fine cause it plays nicely and everything has low spacing. The only suggestion is about the last note, why not make it a jump? Doesn't have to be extreme, but place is somewhere towards the middle of the map or something, just to have a more epic feel as an end rather than a distance snapped note.
   Thanks for the compliment. About the end- there actually used to be a jump there until somebody complained. I think having one there would be more epic, but it might also be confusing because almost everything up to that last point would have followed distance spacing, and if it were me I'd be really, really annoyed to play through a map only to miss the very last note because of an unexpected jump.
   Also read the suggestion @Insane about the spinner. I'll keep it as is for now.

[Wmf's Taiko]:

1. Don't know much about taiko, but I think all difficulty settings should be in the middle (having a value of 5). You currently have everything at 6 apart from circle size which is 3.Actually, at the suggestion of others I increased AR and CS to 10, so that the taiko diff would appear last. Apparently it doesn't affect anything else.

[Normal]:

1. Difficulty: due to density of the notes @timeline I suggest using circle size 1. Nah, that causes overlap in ways I don't like.
2. 00:23:601 - Missing a note here to follow the vocals. Make a slider that ends at the slider start @00:23:764. Also, to follow the vocals more accurately, add a note at 00:24:089 as well, and also make it a slider which ends at the slider end @00:24:252. Done, with two circles instead of a slider for the second section.
3. 00:34:019 - ^ same as above with just different timeline locations. ^
4. 00:51:600 (5) - Don't think this is a good spot for a finish. Consider removing it. Removed.

[Easy]:

1. 00:06:020 (1,2) - Generally it's not a good idea to have circles on red ticks in easy diff, without something that tells you otherwise. I suggest making a slider out of these two, because people who are able to play easy diffs only won't 300 these for a long time.
2. 00:08:787 (4) - Why not start this slider at 00:08:625 instead? Melody starts at this spot and you're already mapping on red ticks in this section.
3. 00:16:438 (1,2) - Same as 00:06:020.
4. 00:19:206 (4) - Same as 00:08:787.
5. 00:31:578 (1) - Finish at the start of the slider.
6. 01:12:600 (3) - Clap is fine here, but add finish to it as well (at the slider end).

Uh... I think you might have an old version of Easy or sth, since I couldn't find the note references at all, or they didn't make much sense.

There. A lengthy post, hopefully you don't mind (but then again I always tend to write essay as mod posts ;_;).
Nice and clean mapsets, good luck!~ :3

Thanks for lengthy post again! (your last one helped that beatmap out lots- I remember changing the Hard there to Insane as well, and I guess I'm doing it again here )

Hyguys wrote:

Short ver yay

Easy
00:01:625 (2) - 1 grid down? Actually, moved up instead to align with (1).

Hard
00:15:462 (11) - asdasdassad hehe... I'm used to it so I always forget that it might be hard to sightread orz

i can't find any errors , sorry , no kudosu , NO KUDOSU

Well, thanks for trying anyways!

Egh, hiatus.....

Here's the mod:

Actually, I don't find any major things wrong at all.

Except: (these are all suggestions)

General

1. Maybe the other diffs can copy Winber's last two timing sections which decrease the volume? Or something like that.

Winber's Insane

1. 00:24:903 (6) - 1 grid right

Also, when you are doing those pentagon formations, I am unsure whether or not they are perfect. Just check them, just in case.

Star!!!

I don't think you can kudosu this mod.... Probably not.

interesting pattern.......

good~!~!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!











my pending map -> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31388

General
Make full submit coz i dont have insane

Colin Hou wrote:

don't use muted sliderslide and slidertick at the same while.

Easy
Nothing~

Hard
00:08:625 (5) - move like this? Nothing major again

Winber1's Insane
AR -1?
00:39:554 (1) - end at 00:41:670 (maybe silent)
and 00:41:996 - add note here

Hello, Mr. Coding Master

General
* Your diff spread seems unbalanced, since it's E-H-I. I have no idea how to resolve this DDDDDD:
* I have an idea. How about you put a star SB in the sky while kiai times?

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Easy
00:08:787 (5) - How about move this to 00:08:625? It's follow the music, so beginner player would easier to click this
00:19:206 (5) - Move to 00:19:043? So it's follow the music

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Hard
00:03:578 (1) - This object is touch the HP Bar, and it said on new guidelines~
00:30:438 (2) - New combo, since previous slider is a slow slider
00:39:391 (7) - New combo for changing timing pattern (?)
01:05:274 (6) - New combo
01:05:437 (1) - Remove new combo

------------------------------------------------------------------------

That's all folks'

@ chamelepeace710- I just came back from a hiatus too to start work on this again. Conveniently timed!
I'll think about the suggestion for volumes- I'd actually never noticed it before.

Hellzero wrote:

General
Make full submit coz i dont have insane

SPOILER

Erm... try to redownload? I'm pretty sure I have full submitted

Colin Hou wrote:

don't use muted sliderslide and slidertick at the same while.

Thanks, but I think I no longer do this...
Easy
Nothing~

Hard
00:08:625 (5) - move like this?

SPOILER

Nothing major again
No thanks, I like the off-center there.

No changes yet, but thanks for the effort and I'll kudos if Winber uses something. And i'll definitely look at your map too.

Leorda wrote:

Hello, Mr. Coding Master lol that's reserved for peppy. Or would that be Coding God?

General
* Your diff spread seems unbalanced, since it's E-H-I. I have no idea how to resolve this DDDDDD: Well, hard and insane used to be normal and hard, respectively, and they are on the easier side IMO. Should I change the names back?
* I have an idea. How about you put a star SB in the sky while kiai times?
I, er, don't actually know how to SB unfortunately... but it does sound like a good idea.

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Easy
00:08:787 (5) - How about move this to 00:08:625? It's follow the music, so beginner player would easier to click this Tried, but I think there is a lot more emphasis on the white tick so I'll leave it there
00:19:206 (5) - Move to 00:19:043? So it's follow the music Same as above

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Hard
00:03:578 (1) - This object is touch the HP Bar, and it said on new guidelines~ Er, it's not even touching on the default skin, and should be decently visible on others, but I"ll keep this in mind.
00:30:438 (2) - New combo, since previous slider is a slow slider
00:39:391 (7) - New combo for changing timing pattern (?) I don't understand "changing timing pattern", but added ( I can see a reason for it to be there)
01:05:274 (6) - New combo
01:05:437 (1) - Remove new combo Done, and for the others as well.

------------------------------------------------------------------------

That's all folks'

Thanks, Leorda!

you can call hard normal+.

As for SB star, I have no idea. If you want to include the stars in the flash, just edit the image to include the stars. If you want to put in some rotating stars or something like that, I can do that, but I don't think that would look very good.

ziin wrote:

you can call hard normal+.

I thought "difficulty+" titles were generally abhorred?

I see mixed things on the difficulty+ topic.( Make it hard- )

You could always shift the difficulties; hard to normal, insane to hard, and leave Winber1's Insane as it is.
That's always an option.

Whatever you decide.
Fun song, love insane

+star (if I could)

Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.

Hi there

[SB]

1. I love your simple but beautiful SB, maybe make the H.png up and down a bit when it effect would be better? Just a suggestion

[Hard]

1. 00:44:601 (1) - Remove clap seems better
2. 00:45:089 (1) - How about add clap here and remove clap of 00:44:601 to fit previous 00:43:135 (1) hitsound?

[Insane]

1. 01:07:391 (7) - Add clap here
2. 01:12:600 (7) - ^

[Winber1's Insane]

1. 00:41:996 spinner - Add finish

nice map
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.

[General]
Is the offset right? Doesn't it feel like 308? Answer is yes!

[Easy]
01:07:377 (2,3) - Don't you feel this easier to read: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132896

But good job.
[Hard]
Looks good.

Very moe!
[Insane]
I like the hitsounds. Lol.

Good job heeererere.
[Winber1's Insane]
holy moe map

this is moe
why can't i mod these sorts of mapsafffsdafsfasg
[wmf's Taiko]
So hard to mod non-color coded taikos lol

As much as you seem to like doing audio for taiko maps, perhaps you should keep it all at 100%
I am going to mod this like those people that point out a lot of notes and stuff.

00:01:299 (6) - katu
00:03:904 (20) - don
00:31:008 - don here?
00:34:915 - don here?
00:44:845 - don here?
00:46:798 - don here?
00:53:147 - don here?
00:55:751 - don here?
00:57:054 - don here?
01:05:763 (147) - katu
01:12:274 (190) - katu?
01:13:088 (195) - katu?

lol yeah. Wish I could star...

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[SB]

1. I love your simple but beautiful SB, maybe make the H.png up and down a bit when it effect would be better? Just a suggestion

Credit goes to ziin again, and it's up to him I guess if he wants to change it like this.

[Hard]

1. 00:44:601 (1) - Remove clap seems better
2. 00:45:089 (1) - How about add clap here and remove clap of 00:44:601 to fit previous 00:43:135 (1) hitsound?

Thanks for the suggestion, I opted to keep the first clap but also add the second one.

[Insane]

1. 01:07:391 (7) - Add clap here
2. 01:12:600 (7) - ^

Both added, and some others as well

nice map
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.

Thanks, Breeze!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
Is the offset right? Doesn't it feel like 308? Answer is yes!
Er, that's a bit drastic... I'll wait and see if anyone else thinks so before I change it.

[Easy]
01:07:377 (2,3) - Don't you feel this easier to read: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132896
Sure, changed.

But good job.
[Hard]
Looks good.

Very moe!
[Insane]
I like the hitsounds. Lol.

Good job heeererere.

Thanks for the encouragement and Taiko mod!

Difficulty setting:

Feel free to put CS and AR at highest rate if you want (though for myself I won't put them at 10 just because there's always some diff harder than my taiko then it's not a must to put it at last)

But I need OD 6 :3 because OD reflects the difficulty of diff so it should fit the overall hardness of the song, putting OD5 on every taiko map is just like putting OD 5 in an insane diff. : <

seems I have quite a lot of inadquate stuffs in my taiko diff, let's check it out:

00:01:299 (6) - katu The melody is like A-D-E-F here a generally upward one, dddk and dkdk would both be acceptable here, since the next one is kdkdk, I would keep this unchanged.
00:03:904 (20) - don Similar arguement, change to kkddk
00:31:008 - don here? k
00:34:915 - don here? k
00:44:845 - don here? =>kkd
00:46:798 - don here? k
00:53:147 - don here?
00:55:751 - don here?
00:57:054 - don here?
It seems that these are referring the melodic arrangement repeating in the background, so repeating them too many times would be boring, changed some of them...
01:05:763 (147) - katu next phrase => dkd d k d
01:12:274 (190) - katu? The melodic rise of this one is less significantly than the next k so no change.
01:13:088 (195) - katu? ^

and self modding
00:14:159 - k
00:19:043 - d d kkd d
00:48:345 - K
00:58:763 - ^
01:11:623 - k

and about the timing, let printscreen speaks

323 is rather accurate comparing with 308.

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.) (akrolsmir) [Wmf's Taiko].osu

akrolsmir wrote:

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[SB]

1. I love your simple but beautiful SB, maybe make the H.png up and down a bit when it effect would be better? Just a suggestion

Credit goes to ziin again, and it's up to him I guess if he wants to change it like this.

Something so simple doesn't need my permission to edit, go ahead and do whatever you want with it (though I understand you don't know much about SBs).

I'm not 100% on what breeze was asking, but I don't think bouncing lights do very much. They're not boobs or anything.

One thing I've learned though is additive colouring:
_P,0,0,,A
This will make the white lights a little bit more "white" since it bypasses the default osu fade out. Try it out to see if you like the way it looks. You may have to change the second "0" to match when kiai starts.

Hello, My mod.
All suggestions. Make sure you find the best way to fix your map.

[General]
Better for you to map a normal.
Personally think your Hard setting is a little bit harder for a normal diff (AR&OD setting). Some notes are also harder for Normal.
So my suggestion is to map a normal.
Try to make a balance. XD

[Easy]
00:08:787 (5) - same with below. I write the next one first so..
00:19:206 (5) - move to 00:19:043 and end at 00:19:694
Nice mapset

Tried Hid+DT+HR for u. Hard to catch up the beats from 00:31:578 (1) - 00:35:973 (3)
It's probably because the distance is hard to recognize.
It works well in no mod anyway.

[Hard]
Sorry can not find anything wrong.
Maybe it's a little bit easier for a hard map.

[Insane]
Nothing wrong


[Winber1's insane]
AR-1 sounds more fit

Nice map overall.
By the way I will ask the player who whas Hatsune Miku account whether he want to be a modder or not.
Actually I really need help in academic writing.

@wmfchris- Thanks for updating! And kudos for timing, I'll leave it at 323 then.

@ziin- I tried the effect, but I think it makes the SB too prominent, I prefer the softer glow.

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hello, My mod.
All suggestions. Make sure you find the best way to fix your map.

[General]
Better for you to map a normal.
Personally think your Hard setting is a little bit harder for a normal diff (AR&OD setting). Some notes are also harder for Normal.
So my suggestion is to map a normal.
Try to make a balance. XD

[Easy]
00:08:787 (5) - same with below. I write the next one first so..
00:19:206 (5) - move to 00:19:043 and end at 00:19:694 I was against this, but others have said this as well so I guess I'll change it.
Nice mapset

Tried Hid+DT+HR for u. Hard to catch up the beats from 00:31:578 (1) - 00:35:973 (3)
It's probably because the distance is hard to recognize.
It works well in no mod anyway.

[Hard]
Sorry can not find anything wrong.
Maybe it's a little bit easier for a hard map.

[Insane]
Nothing wrong
[color=#FF8000]

Nice map overall.
By the way I will ask the player who whas Hatsune Miku account whether he want to be a modder or not.
Actually I really need help in academic writing.

Lol. Thanks for the mod! Feel free to send me an english essay or something if you want me to look over it.

Thanks XDD.

I'm now international undergraduate freshman in USA so I really need help.

It's so nice of you

Hi Nymph here and request from: The Challenge Queue~

General:
Nothing Found~

Easy:
00:27:833 (3) - suggest add whistle on the head of slider 3.
00:38:252 (3) - same.
00:48:507 (3) - strongly suggest a whistle on the arrow of this slider.
00:51:112 (3) - same

Hard:
No issues to pick. Just a suggestion:
Why the Kiai is so empty....I strongly suggest to add more notes there. It just feel weird than kiai part is even easier than other part.

Insane:
00:28:322 (7) - whistle? to fit with the same pattern before.
00:29:787 (4) - hitsound seems didn't connect well here. I suggest to add whistle on 3 and the head of the slider on 4.
00:42:484 (2) - I think the whistle on this slider is good. But you use short slider instead of this slider in the following patterns. Not bad, but I just personal think some of the places need whistle, but didn't sound well in short sliders..
For example: 00:44:926 (2). Feel little empty cause no whistle here. but whistle on short slider didn't feel good to, so I suggest to long ones. I think maybe they are more suitable.
01:13:251 (1) - maybe finish on the head of this slider. Because too many same pattern here. A finish would be pretty nice imo.

Winber1's Insane:
AR8 seems more comfortable for me...but just personal feeling.
00:42:159 (1) - This note is really hard to get because of the spinner..Seems too far to click T.T maybe move it more nearer to the center?
Other's all fine.Good Job!


And I think this is all I found.
Simple sb is very good for this song (I will never tell you I hate shining SB~) star for you~ good luck!

Nymph_ wrote:

Winber1's Insane:
AR8 seems more comfortable for me...but just personal feeling. lol i guess majority wants AR 8 so i'll change it
00:42:159 (1) - This note is really hard to get because of the spinner..Seems too far to click T.T maybe move it more nearer to the center?
Other's all fine.Good Job! i just switched the places of combo 1 and 3 lulz

i also added that finish to the end of that spinner before the kiai time. However, I didn't want to change that spinner, so i didn't apply Hellzero's mod.

most of the mods say basically the same thing so i didn't quote much lol.

Thanks for modding! :3

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.) (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: The Challenge Queue~

General:
Nothing Found~

Easy:
00:27:833 (3) - suggest add whistle on the head of slider 3. I don't know why I removed it in the first place added.
00:38:252 (3) - same. ^
00:48:507 (3) - strongly suggest a whistle on the arrow of this slider. Added
00:51:112 (3) - same ^

Hard:
No issues to pick. Just a suggestion:
Why the Kiai is so empty....I strongly suggest to add more notes there. It just feel weird than kiai part is even easier than other part.
That's because it used to be a normal... but I agree. Notes added.

Insane:
00:28:322 (7) - whistle? to fit with the same pattern before. Nah, since there's a whistle right before it.
00:29:787 (4) - hitsound seems didn't connect well here. I suggest to add whistle on 3 and the head of the slider on 4. Did just the latter.
00:42:484 (2) - I think the whistle on this slider is good. But you use short slider instead of this slider in the following patterns. Not bad, but I just personal think some of the places need whistle, but didn't sound well in short sliders..
For example: 00:44:926 (2). Feel little empty cause no whistle here. but whistle on short slider didn't feel good to, so I suggest to long ones. I think maybe they are more suitable.I couldn't think of a good way to change this, so I'll leave as is for now.
01:13:251 (1) - maybe finish on the head of this slider. Because too many same pattern here. A finish would be pretty nice imo. Okay, added.


And I think this is all I found.
Simple sb is very good for this song (I will never tell you I hate shining SB~) star for you~ good luck!

Thanks for the star and mod, particularly the hitsound suggestions!

And welcome back, winber ! We missed you.

Hello there, just popping in to say that providing Backgrounds or skin elements shouldn't be kudosu'd, only mods, just informing you in case you didnt know
*walks away*

Sakura Hana wrote:

Hello there, just popping in to say that providing Backgrounds or skin elements shouldn't be kudosu'd, only mods, just informing you in case you didnt know
*walks away*

I got an irrational urge to kudos this post

Noted, thanks. (I guess I'll have to resort to using words to express my gratitude.)

Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.)

Note: This is my first time modding anything, so my modding style might be different than others. Also, I'm not an Insane player, so my mods for that might not be relevant at all.

General:
Why haven't you replaced all the hitsounds in the folder? The fact that you replaced the slider slide/tick means you have an idea what you want the song to sound like, but as a modder I can't tell.

Easy:
00:02:276 (3) - This slider feels like it should end at 00:02:764, but you have the emphasis on beat 4 with all difficulties--you feel that five-note sequence (beat 2.5-4.5) as "pah-BOOM-pah-BOOM-pah" and I feel it as "pah-BOOM-pah-pah-BOOM"

00:08:787 (5) - All of these notes seem the same strength (other than the end), so it feels like the slider should cover all of them--this may be a necessary concession to Easy though (even though it feels like a harder than average easy--not that that's a bad thing since you don't have a normal).

00:12:694 (4) - Same as 00:02:276--though oddly it feels a bit less clashing to me here :/

00:19:206 (5) - Same as 00:08:787.

00:39:391 (1) - I don't like having such a long spinner mid-song in an easy--you could end it on 00:41:345 and put a circle on 00:41:996.

01:23:018 (3) - Why is the last beat a new combo on every difficulty except this one? I'm not sure how best to remedy it--maybe just use three circles instead?

Hard:
00:02:602 (4) - This isn't nearly as bad as the it is on Easy, since you're actually doing stuff on that note--I'd still stack it to hit both notes if you decide to change the emphasis on that string.

00:30:926 (3) - There should be a hitsound at the start of the slider to emphasize the switch in polarity (red to white)--I'm trying a clap and it works a bit better.

00:39:391 (7,1) - This feels like an easier hard to me, so I don't like having a note so close in front of the spinner--then again, I'm not sure how to fix it (since the climax of the phrase is on the downbeat, so you don't really want to put the spinner there).

Insane (see note above):
General: This map doesn't feel like a real insane to me--the majority of the map feels like a fast hard with some insane elements thrown in just to make it insane. If I was mapping this set, I would tone down your hard a bit to make it your normal, then tone this down by removing all the insane elements to make it a (admittedly harder than average) hard, and leaving the other insane as is. I'd do this by lowering some of the difficulty settings in both and removing a lot of the passing notes (notes not really connected to the vocals/melody, but just to fill in some of the dead spaces) in Insane, but since I have a feeling you wouldn't do this, I'll leave the specifics out unless you ask.

00:20:834 (1,2) - The transition from melody to vocals here feels really awkward, especially since the next part of the combo doesn't feel connected to the vocals (00:21:810 (5) isn't in the vocals but is a circle, while 00:21:973 (6) misses a vocal). If you're keeping this insane I'd add circles on 00:20:671 and 00:20:996 (leaving hit sounds
as is to differentiate the vocals).

00:21:810 (5,6) - 5 feels even more out of place if you do the other mod, and if you remove that, the slider emphasizes "in" most prominently, which doesn't deserve much stress at all--6 could be replaced with 3 circles and it should sound much better.

00:39:066 (10,11) - These passing notes really distract from the buildup--I'd say remove them, but I don't know how important keeping a constant stream is in an Insane.

01:09:507 (6,7,8) - These circles are fine, but I don't like stacking all three like that--maybe moving 7 to the left (so it's like center-left-center-slider) would be better, since the music's still moving.

Winber1's Insane: Sorry, but there's no way I can do this justice, since it's an insane made to be super-hard, and thus can break most rules in the book--everything it's doing appears to make sense (once you assume random jumps are just part of insane), so it should be fine.

Wmf's Taiko: I have almost no experience with Taiko unfortunately--most of the patterns sound nice, though the only question I have is why the patterns get much slower at then end when the music hasn't slowed down from the chorus?

Anyway, that was interesting for my first mod ever--there was more to write about than I thought for a map with so many posts already.

Modding,CrimmiStyle!!

Hai Teammate~ (I might nazi a bit here so look out):

[Easy]

Nothing~

[Hard]

Nothing~

[Insane]

00:33:368 (7) - Align with (5)?
00:35:647 (6) - Align with (5)?

The rest of the map is ok.

[Winber1's Insane]

00:01:462 (7) - Align with (5).
00:02:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is rather confusing.

nice difficulty.

I got nothing on Taiko since it's wmfchris so i'll give you a C-Star for your hard work.

Cheater Hater wrote:

Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.)

Note: This is my first time modding anything, so my modding style might be different than others. Also, I'm not an Insane player, so my mods for that might not be relevant at all.

General:
Why haven't you replaced all the hitsounds in the folder? The fact that you replaced the slider slide/tick means you have an idea what you want the song to sound like, but as a modder I can't tell. Oh, those are silent files, to remove the sound of sliderslide and slidertick at the beginning when the song is quieter.

Easy:
00:02:276 (3) - This slider feels like it should end at 00:02:764, but you have the emphasis on beat 4 with all difficulties--you feel that five-note sequence (beat 2.5-4.5) as "pah-BOOM-pah-BOOM-pah" and I feel it as "pah-BOOM-pah-pah-BOOM" Hm... tried to implement this change.

00:08:787 (5) - All of these notes seem the same strength (other than the end), so it feels like the slider should cover all of them--this may be a necessary concession to Easy though (even though it feels like a harder than average easy--not that that's a bad thing since you don't have a normal).
I think this was fixed on the upload after Nymph's post. Is it alright now?

00:12:694 (4) - Same as 00:02:276--though oddly it feels a bit less clashing to me here :/ Same comment over there.

00:19:206 (5) - Same as 00:08:787. Same comment over there.

00:39:391 (1) - I don't like having such a long spinner mid-song in an easy--you could end it on 00:41:345 and put a circle on 00:41:996.
Er, I think a longer spinner is better in an easy diff so I'll keep it this way.

01:23:018 (3) - Why is the last beat a new combo on every difficulty except this one? I'm not sure how best to remedy it--maybe just use three circles instead? Good point... I'm a fan of consistency too, but this being an easy I'd prefer just to leave it that way.

Hard:
00:02:602 (4) - This isn't nearly as bad as the it is on Easy, since you're actually doing stuff on that note--I'd still stack it to hit both notes if you decide to change the emphasis on that string. Not sure what you're suggesting here, but I'm pretty happy as it is.

00:30:926 (3) - There should be a hitsound at the start of the slider to emphasize the switch in polarity (red to white)--I'm trying a clap and it works a bit better. Added whistles instead, since I wanted to leave this section clap-free.

00:39:391 (7,1) - This feels like an easier hard to me, so I don't like having a note so close in front of the spinner--then again, I'm not sure how to fix it (since the climax of the phrase is on the downbeat, so you don't really want to put the spinner there).
Spinner immediately after note shouldn't be particularly difficult per se, since it's a decently long spinner so shouldn't be hard to pass.

Insane (see note above):
General: This map doesn't feel like a real insane to me--the majority of the map feels like a fast hard with some insane elements thrown in just to make it insane. If I was mapping this set, I would tone down your hard a bit to make it your normal, then tone this down by removing all the insane elements to make it a (admittedly harder than average) hard, and leaving the other insane as is. I'd do this by lowering some of the difficulty settings in both and removing a lot of the passing notes (notes not really connected to the vocals/melody, but just to fill in some of the dead spaces) in Insane, but since I have a feeling you wouldn't do this, I'll leave the specifics out unless you ask.
Astute observation; this originally was just a hard difficulty, but it turned out to be 5.00 stars so I decided to rename it Insane. I'm fine with it being called an easier Insane or a harder Hard, but I like the way it currently is in terms of mapping style. Winber1's Insane being extremely difficult also helps seperate it from this Insane.

00:20:834 (1,2) - The transition from melody to vocals here feels really awkward, especially since the next part of the combo doesn't feel connected to the vocals (00:21:810 (5) isn't in the vocals but is a circle, while 00:21:973 (6) misses a vocal). If you're keeping this insane I'd add circles on 00:20:671 and 00:20:996 (leaving hit sounds
as is to differentiate the vocals). Okay, added.

00:21:810 (5,6) - 5 feels even more out of place if you do the other mod, and if you remove that, the slider emphasizes "in" most prominently, which doesn't deserve much stress at all--6 could be replaced with 3 circles and it should sound much better.
Nah, I like the way it is currently.

00:39:066 (10,11) - These passing notes really distract from the buildup--I'd say remove them, but I don't know how important keeping a constant stream is in an Insane. I'd like to keep them there for the aforementioned keeping up stream.

01:09:507 (6,7,8) - These circles are fine, but I don't like stacking all three like that--maybe moving 7 to the left (so it's like center-left-center-slider) would be better, since the music's still moving.
Eh, I don't find that kindn of pattern visually appealing, I'll leave as-is.

Anyway, that was interesting for my first mod ever--there was more to write about than I thought for a map with so many posts already.

Great job for your first time, you made a lot of really good suggestions. Thanks!

Crimmi wrote:

Modding,CrimmiStyle!!

Hai Teammate~ (I might nazi a bit here so look out):

[Easy]

Nothing~

[Hard]

Nothing~

[Insane]

00:33:368 (7) - Align with (5)?

00:35:647 (6) - Align with (5)? Nah, that wasn't really the intention in either of them.

The rest of the map is ok.

[Winber1's Insane]

00:01:462 (7) - Align with (5).
00:02:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is rather confusing.

nice difficulty.

I got nothing on Taiko since it's wmfchris so i'll give you a C-Star for your hard work.

Thanks, teammate!

pah-BOOM-pah-pah-BOOM: That's what I wanted in Easy--in hard, I was thinking to shorten the slider by a half-beat and adding a circle where the start originally was--this just makes the whistle happen in different places on easy and hard :/

Full sliders: I downloaded this map early Sunday morning and actually did the whole mod offline, so I wouldn't have seen the results of the other mod--that works

Thanks for the compliments

Cheater Hater wrote:

once you assume random jumps are just part of insane

what.
they aren't all that random ._.

Crimmi wrote:

[Winber1's Insane]

00:01:462 (7) - Align with (5). it was purposely placed like that... so that combo 6,7,8 are in a straight line. It looks fine to me anyways.
00:02:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is rather confusing. I like this pattern tho D:, i'm keeping it for now. it's only going back and forth so it shouldn't be that confusing. I also have another spot similar to this which idk why you didn't comment about.

nothing changed.

Thanks for mods tho!

winber1 wrote:

Cheater Hater wrote:

once you assume random jumps are just part of insane

what.
they aren't all that random ._.

That wasn't the best choice of words--I just mean they don't really follow the same rules as a non-super Insane map does--I see what you're doing in a lot of spots, but there's just no way I could mod it at this point.

challenge queue mod here

[Easy]

1. 00:30:926 spinner - no finish seems better
2. 01:02:833 (1) - I personally don't like clap with finish, sounds noisy, just saying. If you like it, then just keep it

[Insane]

1. 00:08:136 (8) - Remove finish to fit finish sound you used in Easy and Hardl?
2. 00:18:555 (8) - ^
3. 00:21:159 - Starts normal hitsound here sounds better

[Winber1's Insane]

1. 00:00:974 (4), 00:02:276 (2), 00:03:253 (3), 00:03:904 (7), 00:04:555 (9), 00:08:950 (2) - These clap sounds really odd IMO
2. 00:11:392 (3), 00:12:694 (2), 00:13:671 (3), 00:14:322 (7), 00:14:973 (10), 00:19:369 (3) - ^
3. 00:04:718 (10) - Remove finish here, add finish to 11 like how it added in Easy, Hard and Insane
4. 00:15:136 (11) - Remove finish, add finish to 12
5. 00:10:415 (2,4) - Use 50% to 2 and 40% to 4 seems fit music more?
6. 00:21:159 - Start normal hitsound here?
7. 01:07:553 (1) - Remove this clap to fit your clap partten?

no kds sinice I've already got one

Breeze wrote:

challenge queue mod here

[Easy]

1. 00:30:926 spinner - no finish seems better I agree, fixed
2. 01:02:833 (1) - I personally don't like clap with finish, sounds noisy, just saying. If you like it, then just keep it Okay, removed the clap.

[Insane]

1. 00:08:136 (8) - Remove finish to fit finish sound you used in Easy and Hardl? Fixed
2. 00:18:555 (8) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:21:159 - Starts normal hitsound here sounds better Good idea- I forgot about that when adding the notes.

Thanks again, Breeze!

Thanks for mod! :3

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.) (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

Good enough for a bubble now
I know my message is too short
still too short lol

Breeze wrote:

I know my message is too short
still too short lol

lulz

gratz on bubble! :3

Oh cool it got bubbled, another map that i dont need to recheck now \o/

Sakura Hana wrote:

Oh cool it got bubbled, another map that i dont need to recheck now \o/

Lazeh.

Wondering if anyone could suffer from epilepsy from the sb... your choice
I would probably remove the lines with empty.png from the sb.

Easy:
For the ending combos, you need to keep your combos more consistent. For example, 01:05:437 (4) and 01:08:042 (1) both are at the start of a measure, but one has a new combo and one does not. 01:15:856 (3) has the same scenario. To be consistent with the chorus, I would give 01:05:437 (4) and 01:15:856 (3) new combos and remove teh new combo directly afterward.

Hard:
00:28:973 (1) - half speed was too much of a slowdown for me (esp since I don't think a slow slider is even needed here)

Insane:
00:35:647 (6,2) (nazi) - make these note not overlap because the 300 from 6 overlaps with 2 for a fair bit of time

Winber1's Insane: A lot of complaints about aesthetics, so feel free to ignore me if you really want to keep the map the way it is.
00:06:997 (1,2) - maybe rearrange like this: (makes 3 end exactly on 2's slider and does not intrude on the start of 2)
00:18:066 (4,5,6) - flip these vertically to avoid overlapping 00:16:927 (2)
00:46:554 (6,7,2) - don't like the overlap between these notes
00:49:810 (2) - have this end on the start of 6
I guess I'll stop complaining about aesthetics for now. If you want to fix more, comb through the rest of the map fixing the various overlaps.
01:02:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this set of jumps was sort of randomly placed and seemed only to be there for difficulty (don't see the song suggesting anything like this) (To make matters worse, the end of the song gets a lot easier, making this area stick out even more, even though the music is about the same)

Wmf's Taiko: I would remove all the lines with empty.png because they are not needed (I don't know what your plans for the thanks were, but I guess you can keep it.

==================

Not a bad map overall. I mostly only have complaints about Winber's diff, but it is tolerable. I am still undecided on what I should do with the map after the fixes, so fix up what you want and then contact me. I'll guarantee at least a rebubble by the end of it.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Winber1's Insane: A lot of complaints about aesthetics, so feel free to ignore me if you really want to keep the map the way it is.
00:06:997 (1,2) - maybe rearrange like this: (makes 3 end exactly on 2's slider and does not intrude on the start of 2) sure

SPOILER

00:18:066 (4,5,6) - flip these vertically to avoid overlapping 00:16:927 (2) sure, but overlaps that are visible only in editor shouldn't be much of a problem... the previous note already disappears by then
00:46:554 (6,7,2) - don't like the overlap between these notes i'll just leave that as is
00:49:810 (2) - have this end on the start of 6 k
I guess I'll stop complaining about aesthetics for now. If you want to fix more, comb through the rest of the map fixing the various overlaps.
01:02:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this set of jumps was sort of randomly placed and seemed only to be there for difficulty (don't see the song suggesting anything like this) (To make matters worse, the end of the song gets a lot easier, making this area stick out even more, even though the music is about the same)i find this fun actually but that's just me. This pattern actually made a lot more sense before i changed the kiai time imo, since this part used to be much easier than the kiai time, and then the map slowly got easier. anyways, i just made it easier for now.

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.) (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Wondering if anyone could suffer from epilepsy from the sb... your choice I'll leave it out for now, unless someone strongly objects.
I would probably remove the lines with empty.png from the sb. Actually... they're used by Wmf's Taiko to force the background in front of the other stuff normally found in a taiko diff.

Easy:
For the ending combos, you need to keep your combos more consistent. For example, 01:05:437 (4) and 01:08:042 (1) both are at the start of a measure, but one has a new combo and one does not. 01:15:856 (3) has the same scenario. To be consistent with the chorus, I would give 01:05:437 (4) and 01:15:856 (3) new combos and remove teh new combo directly afterward. Good catch, fixed.

Hard:
00:28:973 (1) - half speed was too much of a slowdown for me (esp since I don't think a slow slider is even needed here) Changed to a full-speed wave slider.

Insane:
00:35:647 (6,2) (nazi) - make these note not overlap because the 300 from 6 overlaps with 2 for a fair bit of time Fixed

Wmf's Taiko: I would remove all the lines with empty.png because they are not needed (I don't know what your plans for the thanks were, but I guess you can keep it. Same note as above, these are needed to put the background in front.

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Not a bad map overall. I mostly only have complaints about Winber's diff, but it is tolerable. I am still undecided on what I should do with the map after the fixes, so fix up what you want and then contact me. I'll guarantee at least a rebubble by the end of it.

Thanks a lot, Yoshi! IRC feedback on my style was especially helpful too

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Insane:
00:36:787 (3) - make the slider go toward 4 to make the slider look less randomly placed? (No overlaps either)

SPOILER

Comment/Fix it, and I'll rebubble.

Fixed! I had thought about it while mapping this part but worried that it flowed awkwardly, but it appears it'll be fine.

As promised, after way too long, rebubbled! (no need for kds for that really small thing)

Hold on a minute why Winber1's Insane doesnt have any storyboard on it unlike the other difficulties?

because taiko.

I sense a new feature to aibat...

Sakura Hana wrote:

Hold on a minute why Winber1's Insane doesnt have any storyboard on it unlike the other difficulties?

lol wut, i didn' t even realize that until now.

if you want an updated version with sb... then i guess you can download it below:

Download: Force & Styles - Field of Dreams (Short Ver.) (akrolsmir) [Winber1's Insane].osu

Wow.

My theory is that everyone was too busy trying to pass the Kiai time to notice the SB (or lack thereof).

Thanks Sakura Hana for catching it, and winber1 for the fix!

Alright, as i couldnt find any additional problems anyways, you can consider this Ranked and enjoyable, i love that Taiko BG btw <3

good luck

IkkiMinami wrote:

good luck

Thanks?

Shoutout to lots of nice people:
winber for being the first to mod + awesome guest diff (I can almost pass it now!)
ziin for the spectacular SB
BlissfulYoshi, Sakura Hana, and lolcubes for mods and rechecks without even my asking

WAIT, WAS I WRONG

DON'T EMBARRASS ME IF I WAS WRONG

Congrats~

yo congrats man!

After a lot of months of my mod... I must tell you :3

Congratz men! =D

woot gratz! :3

<3 is all I wanted to say.

<3 ~