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BRACE;d - Devotion

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Topic Starter
Shiro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 30 décembre 2010 at 21:31:59

Artist: BRACE;d
Title: Devotion
Source: REC
Tags: Onda Aka ending
BPM: 107
Filesize: 8692kb
Play Time: 03:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,11 stars, 182 notes)
  2. Hard (4,54 stars, 439 notes)
  3. Normal (2,37 stars, 256 notes)
Download: BRACE;d - Devotion
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finally uploading something after such a long break. Redownload if downloaded before 12/30.

9th beatmap. Ending song from the anime REC.

The score spread is not as good as I wanted. Thanks to Kite for the cut mp3. :3

I made a hitcircle for it, feel free to download it or not. I'm not adding it directly to the map because I think some people can't play with their own hitcircles (just like me ._. ) so the choice is up to you.

Skin:
approach circle
hitcircle
overlay
Topic Starter
Shiro
Changelog.

  1. 12/30: Uploaded and moved to pending.
    Removed skin.
    Turned sliders into circles in the pattern at 02:42:230 - in the Normal diff.
    Replaced the mp3 with Kite's.
    Fixes according to Fight69's mod.
    Fixes according to nante's mod.
    Fixes according to arien666's mod.
  2. 12/31: Fixes according to Beuchi-chan's mod.
    Fixes according to GladiOol's mod.
    Fixes (IRC discussed) according to RandomJibberish's mod.
    Bubbled by RandomJibberish.
    Ranked by Mogsworth.
H1ko
starr ^^
Faust
#modhelped you

Thank God the option for starring maps doesn't use kudosu.
Kite
Ah yay you finished mapping this song :D

SPOILER
The point at which you make your map end seems weird to me mmmh, maybe map further?
Also over 1 minute of the song at the end isn't mapped, so just cut it off to reduce the .osz size if you aren't going to map it

02:11:389 - This break seems pointless to me, if you are up for it try a spinner starting at 02:10:828

01:45:314 (6) - In Hard is tricky, consider spacing it some other way?

Lovely song and a nice calm mapset, I hope it gets ranked soon~

here cut mp3 with fade out : http://puu.sh/CQb
Fight69
[Easy]

03:06:062 (3) - 1/2 plus tôt ? Ca sonnerai mieux je trouve, surtout pour une Easy
03:15:875 (1) - Clap a la fin de ce slider ?

[Hard]

03:42:791 (1) - Clap ?
03:44:473 (4) - ^
Ces 2 claps la, juste histoire que ca ne casse le rythme du clap toutes les 2 beats

03:47:277 - Cercle ici avec un finish ?
J'trouve que ca sonne mieux comme cercle final, 'fin, comment expliquer ?... >.<


Bref, c'est déjà fini !
Topic Starter
Shiro

Fight69 wrote:

[Easy]

03:06:062 (3) - 1/2 plus tôt ? Ca sonnerai mieux je trouve, surtout pour une Easy nope, je trouve que mon pattern sonore est sympa
03:15:875 (1) - Clap a la fin de ce slider ? voui j'ai oublié

[Hard]

03:42:791 (1) - Clap ? oubli
03:44:473 (4) - ^ pareil
Ces 2 claps la, juste histoire que ca ne casse le rythme du clap toutes les 2 beats

03:47:277 - Cercle ici avec un finish ? non :/
J'trouve que ca sonne mieux comme cercle final, 'fin, comment expliquer ?... >.<


Bref, c'est déjà fini !
merci pour le mod :P
nante
general:
It's an ending, not opening. Please change tags.

+ a few nazi suggestions:

[Hard]
00:12:511 (5) - maybe change it into a repeating slider, just like 00:08:025 (4)? There is a sound to follow + it'd be nice to consistent
00:48:959 (2) - 1 grid up? looks better
03:08:025 (11) - move it to somewhere else? I know you wanted to place it in a center of previous slider, but when you're hitting it slider is no longer visible, SO better put it in line with (10)
03:38:305 (4,5) - maybe move them 1 grid up and 1 grid left?

[Normal]
nothing?

[Easy]
Maybe drain rate -1?
01:52:885 (1) - why a spinner here?
02:24:286 (1) - maybe do it exactly as at 01:10:268 (4)?
02:36:623 (4) - move few grids left


and my star :)
Topic Starter
Shiro

nante wrote:

general:
It's an ending, not opening. Please change tags. my bad, fixed

+ a few nazi suggestions:

[Hard]
00:12:511 (5) - maybe change it into a repeating slider, just like 00:08:025 (4)? There is a sound to follow + it'd be nice to consistent hm... I don't see why not so okay
00:48:959 (2) - 1 grid up? looks better nope, it is placed here so that the spacing of (7,1,2) is consistent
03:08:025 (11) - move it to somewhere else? I know you wanted to place it in a center of previous slider, but when you're hitting it slider is no longer visible, SO better put it in line with (10) the pattern makes a spiral at the end to reach the center of the screen, then the spinner starts :3 didn't fix
03:38:305 (4,5) - maybe move them 1 grid up and 1 grid left? tried, but I didn't like it

[Normal]
nothing? yay

[Easy]
Maybe drain rate -1? hm... drain rate seems fine as it is for me
01:52:885 (1) - why a spinner here? It's there for the held notes from the singer. Since there are several of them and this is an easy diff, I made only one instead of making several short spinners.
02:24:286 (1) - maybe do it exactly as at 01:10:268 (4)? Nope, the second slider is longer.
02:36:623 (4) - move few grids left nazi =(


and my star :)
Thanks for the mod. :3 kudosu'd for the tags
arien666
[Easy]
02:54:567 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down to make same distance?

[Normal]
00:45:314 (3) - Is there any simple slider orz? [TOO MANY GREY DOTS]
02:44:193 (8) - [Suggestion] You can make it more symmetric :3
02:46:436 (2) - ^

[Hard]
02:09:707 (8,9,10,11,12) - [Suggestion] Intended non-square ;_;?



:3
Good luck.

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply
Topic Starter
Shiro

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
02:54:567 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down to make same distance? augh, I am ashamed such an error could happen in my map ;_;

[Normal]
00:45:314 (3) - Is there any simple slider orz? [TOO MANY GREY DOTS] :3 I love complicated sliders, and this one doesn't look that bad
02:44:193 (8) - [Suggestion] You can make it more symmetric :3 I didn't think someone would nazi my sliders to that degree but okay
02:46:436 (2) - ^ Can't make it more symmetrical here, it's a blanket, I'd need to try to guess where it should start to be exactly symmetrical :/

[Hard]
02:09:707 (8,9,10,11,12) - [Suggestion] Intended non-square ;_;? nope, spacing issue



:3
Good luck.

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply
Thanks for the mod. Kudosu'd for spotting the spacing issues.
Beuchi
Hi~!

Remember these are just suggestions you can totally ignore :P

~Easy~
00:43:913 (1) - I think this is pretty close to the end of the spinner. I think in general newbies would need a bit more time for recovering from spinners. What do you thin about making it something like this?
01:52:885 (1) - Same as before. Maybe change it for something like this?
02:31:015 (2) - Make this a New Combo to make it more noticeable from (1)?
03:11:950 (1) - Same as before. Maybe change it for something like this?
03:43:352 (1) - Finish the spinner 1/1 later?

~Normal~
00:45:314 (3) - Ugly slider is ugly ;~; Make the curve a bit more smoooth and beautiful, I know you can <3
03:45:314 (1) - Finish the spinner 1/1 later?

~Hard~
02:31:015 (8) - New Combo here to mark the jump?
03:47:277 (x) - Add a note here? Just for consistency if you change the final spinners on Easy and Normal.

Great map! I love how the hitsounds sound so natural :3
Good luck Odaril~ *star*
Topic Starter
Shiro

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi~! hello :)

Remember these are just suggestions you can totally ignore :P

~Easy~
00:43:913 (1) - I think this is pretty close to the end of the spinner. I think in general newbies would need a bit more time for recovering from spinners. What do you thin about making it something like this? moved the slider 1/2 forward and changed the pattern a bit
01:52:885 (1) - Same as before. Maybe change it for something like this? hm, no, not going to change this :/
02:31:015 (2) - Make this a New Combo to make it more noticeable from (1)? okay
03:11:950 (1) - Same as before. Maybe change it for something like this? not changing either :/
03:43:352 (1) - Finish the spinner 1/1 later? nope, it ends where the drums end as well, I thought that if I made a note starting on the next lyrics I'd have to map the rest of the lyrics as well, which would have made the map too long.

~Normal~
00:45:314 (3) - Ugly slider is ugly ;~; Make the curve a bit more smoooth and beautiful, I know you can <3 not ugly :(
03:45:314 (1) - Finish the spinner 1/1 later? same as previously

~Hard~
02:31:015 (8) - New Combo here to mark the jump? hm... nah, this one and (7) need to be in the same colour becase they're mapped on the same thing. Made (5) a new combo.
03:47:277 (x) - Add a note here? Just for consistency if you change the final spinners on Easy and Normal. didn't change, so nope :P

Great map! I love how the hitsounds sound so natural :3
Good luck Odaril~ *star*
Thanks for the mod. :)

For the spinners in Easy, I believe the BPM is low enough to let players aim correctly beforehaving to hit the note. Besides, the note appears pretty soon, so they can stop spinning to make sure they will catch it. :P
Ekoro
....O_O
GladiOol
[General]
  1. Offset feels a bit early, I come up with 4.110. (Even that feels a bit early D:)
  2. Make beatmap end on 03:47:287 please~ sounds more sexy.
[Hard]

00:15:885 (3) - Why doesn't the slider beginning have a clap on it? ~
00:33:268 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:33:829 (9) - Add new combo.
01:32:427 (3) - Put one grid to the left~ (Grid Level 3 / Small)
01:50:091 (4) - Put one grid to the right~
01:56:820 (1) - Delete this note ?
03:17:147 (x) - Extra note here please. Feels really silly to play now.
03:37:194 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:37:754 (2) - Add new combo.
03:41:680 (1) - Remove~
03:42:240 (11) - Add~
03:42:801 (1) - Remove~


[Normal]

00:16:446 (1) - Remove new combo ?

Starred~
Topic Starter
Shiro

GladiOol wrote:

[General]
  1. Offset feels a bit early, I come up with 4.110. (Even that feels a bit early D:) I asked other people, changed the offset~
  2. Make beatmap end on 03:47:287 please~ sounds more sexy.
I felt that if I placed a beat there I had to map all the rest of the chorus, so I'd rather not :/

[Hard]

00:15:885 (3) - Why doesn't the slider beginning have a clap on it? ~ forgot it =(
00:33:268 (1) - Remove new combo. okay
00:33:829 (9) - Add new combo. okay
01:32:427 (3) - Put one grid to the left~ (Grid Level 3 / Small) oups =(
01:50:091 (4) - Put one grid to the right~ not supposed to be symmetrical to (3) so nope
01:56:820 (1) - Delete this note ? hm... okay
03:17:147 (x) - Extra note here please. Feels really silly to play now. D: ? how is this silly to play
03:37:194 (1) - Remove new combo. okay
03:37:754 (2) - Add new combo. okay
03:41:680 (1) - Remove~ okay for the next two as well
03:42:240 (11) - Add~
03:42:801 (1) - Remove~


[Normal]

00:16:446 (1) - Remove new combo ? It's actually used for a colourhax detail :P

Starred~
Thanks for the mod :)
GladiOol
03:17:147 (x) - Extra note here please. Feels really silly to play now. D: ? how is this silly to play

There is a clearly 'vocal' on that part, and I find it sounding a bit weirdish atm. because the vocals suck at: 03:17:299 (10) (singer is a bit off by about 1/16 or 1/8.)
That's why I'd like a note there because now you miss 1 note on vocals and second one sounds a bit off-ish.
RandomJibberish
General
I'm preeeety sure you never use normal-slidertick, hitclap, whistle or sliderwhistle, so you don't need them in the folder.
The parts where you switch to normal sampleset for just a few objects to follow the drums are a little too quiet IMO
Make combo colour 3 slighly lighter, it's a little too similar to 4 IMO

Normal
01:11:692 (1,1) - IMO it's a little awkward coming off the spinner like that. I'd make it like this

01:37:766 (1,2,3) - Halfspacing like this is a little troll for a normal, I'd make it 0.75x ish spacing instead, or perhaps a stack.
02:51:785 (1,2,3) - ^

Easy
00:41:692 (1,1) - Similar to normal with the spinner.
02:31:037 (1) - Point somewhere else to the last slider - an Easy should really be as readable as possible

Nothing too serious, call be back when this is done.

EDIT: Boop
Mogsy
Proof that you don't need gimmicks to make a very nice, pretty map. Nice job, ranked.
Zekira
You didn't wait for me o_o
arien666

Zekira wrote:

You didn't wait for me o_o
Poor Zeki-kat-chan orz
Ekoro
OMG YES !

Congratz ! <3
obwajui
everytime i try to download there are some erorrs cause it cant seem to figure out the file type. if there is anyway to fix this please tell me.
I think it might have to do with the fact that the name of the author is "BRACE;d" and i dont think downloads with ";" are allowed
here are pics :\
Topic Starter
Shiro
The file you downloaded has no extension. That's why osu! can't load it. Simply rename your downloaded file to 24226 BRACE;d - Devotion.osz and it should work.

It's weird though... I can download it perfectly fine, the ; doesn't cause any kind of issue here.
obwajui
ty it works perfectly now
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