wcx19911123 wrote:

recheck time

[General]
fine

[Night]
difficulty setting 略低，你看着办，至少AR+1
00:45:411 (1) - 换个方向好点，指着(2)，不然可能松太早
02:24:946 (1) - 我不知道这个shape新人吃得消不，有空换个shape好点
03:55:876 (2) - 我感觉03:56:109 - 开始好点
03:54:248 - 04:01:457 - 这SV已经很低了你还0.75速，这读图太困难了，要么增大点spacing要么直接用1.0吧
04:04:946 (1) - 换个combo color好点，这个跟spinner一起有点瞎

[Eirin]
00:57:039 (3) - vocal off了，个人感觉跟vocal好点

[Kaguya]
01:47:504 (8,1) - 太跳了

[Imperishable]
01:06:574 (10,1) - 这地方我觉得不该跳的，即使要跳也不应该这么大

问下这些是啥

//Break Periods
2,122820,135944
2,197239,210363
2,227006,232688

改完了叫我

edit : after some irc stuff , bubbled

bossandy wrote:

• 發現了一個bug
  Night :

1. 02:47:737 (1) - 再New Combo 一次
   
   [spoilerbox]

kanpakyin wrote:

bossandy wrote:

• 發現了一個bug
  
  Night :

1. 02:47:737 (1) - 再New Combo 一次
   
   [spoilerbox]

ziin wrote:

hmm, modding bubbles.
[night]
looks great, except the crappy non-descriptive difficulty name

[eirin]
00:57:276 (3,4,5) - IMO this plays better. http://puu.sh/o1FZ
01:02:160 (4) - this note is overmapped, there's nothing in the music here.
03:10:067 (1) - I'm just going to point out that this is the only new combo in this kiai which isn't on a long white tick. You do this all the time, which clearly means you don't think it's wrong. I think it is wrong most of the time, and can easily be avoided.

[kaguya]
overmapped

[imperishable]

overmapped
01:30:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it bugged me you didn't map this in kaguya, but just inexcusable to not map it in imperishable. http://puu.sh/o1K5
02:45:416 (1) - the song repeats, so this is just a reminder that if you do my suggestions that you should consider all possible places they exist.
04:21:230 (1,2,3,4) - One reason I don't like overmapping is because the rhythms people tend to create don't make rhythmical sense with the song. For example, what you currently have here is overmapped. However this is extremely similar, but not overmapped (it's actually still undermapped). http://puu.sh/o5RH

I understand many folks hate when their bubble is modded, but I urge you to not let that affect whether or not you deem these "worthy of bubble popping". If you have any questions send me a PM, and I'll likely get to them faster. Likewise if you want a recheck, or want a full overmapping mod, you'll have to ask, but I'll respond quickly, and recheck quickly.

wcx19911123 wrote:

SapphireGhost wrote:

It seems I was planning to mod a self-popped bubble for the third time today. I still want to mod this, just let me know when it's rebubbled.

checked and everything is fine, so it's the time now :3

SapphireGhost wrote:

11 days later, here I am. This mod contains a lot of mapping opinions and suggestions for future maps, separate from things that you should fix on this specific map. I went ahead and put those in dark green for convenience.

[General]
- Some of the lower difficulty names are a bit ambiguous. Something like [Easy / Normal / Hard / Imperishable] could work for a difficulty spread, because it's fairly obvious which one is which and you get to keep a cool name.
- I think the difficulties should definitely start at the same time! You mapped all of them, and it makes more sense that way.
- A higher Stack Leniency would make sense here, maybe 7. It'll make the back-and-forth patterns stack which is helpful for reading them on Hidden. In fact, I don't find back-and-forth patterns play well in general and can be confusing to read, but that's just a preference and something to keep in mind.
- General mapping advice: slider velocity is very important in the pacing of a map, so harder difficulties should use higher slider velocities. I find this improves the difficulty spread and feel of the map. It's also good to keep them somewhat fast so that lower difficulties don't feel too crowded and slow.
- Song is very nice and relaxing. Good for my soul at the moment.

[Imperishable]
01:15:997 (1) - Rhythmically, this would make more sense starting on a white tick.

[Kaguya]
- So many breaks on this difficulty, maybe map through some to make it consistent with Easy and Normal?
- Also, this felt very similar in difficulty to [Imperishable], but with different settings in more breaks. In the future, I'd differentiate difficulties more, maybe with slider velocities like I mentioned earlier.
03:45:183 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This spacing is quite confusing, you could try something like this.

[Eirin]
03:46:811 - On the timeline, drag the break to this point. It makes more sense for it to start here.

[Night]
- As I was mentioning earlier about slider velocities, keeping them generally higher can actually make Easy difficulties more readable as the notes don't occasionally overlap, and aren't stuck too close together.
02:45:183 (1,1) - For a new player, there isn't enough time to recover after the spinner and hit the next note here. Try to find some way to resolve this that works for you. For this reason and because spinners are generally tiring, I keep them out of Easy difficulties in general except before breaks and at the end of a song.
04:02:160 (1,1) - See above.

Overall, it really is a nice song and map, and I'll be happy to rank after fixes. That's all!